Hey, here's my story its my first so forgive me if its crappy but hey I can't help it! Anyway please tell me what you think even if it's mean, I can take it.
CHAPTER 1
FLASH
A beautiful girl with luxurious jet-black hair is lying sprawled on her bed the white sheets tangled around her slim body. Someone screams.
FLASHThe girl immediately gets up (somehow fully dressed in street clothes) grabbing a gun from under her pillow.
"Somebody please help me," the person screams.
FLASHThe girl runs down the hall into a bedroom, gun drawn. Inside is another girl who is pinned to the floor by some invisible force. Blood is gushing out of the wounds on her chest, head, and legs.
FLASHGirl #1 drops the gun and rushes to Girl #2's side,
"Oh god, Sarah," girl #1 says close to tears.
"Krystal, help me," Sarah says hoarsely, the invisible force closing around her throat.
FLASHThe girl moves her hand as if trying to shoo away the invisible force.
"My power isn't working. I'm so sorry, Sarah," tears were now trickling down her cheeks.
"Run, he's coming after you next, Krystal."
"Who?"
"Him," Sarah said inaudibly trying to gesture at the invisible force, "Now run before he gets you too."
"But Sarah, I don't want to leave you here."
"RUN," Sarah screamed using the last of her breath.
"I'm sorry," Krystal whispered grabbing her gun and making her jacket fly toward her while running out of the house, her tears falling like a waterfall down her cheeks.
Sam jumped out of the cheap motel bed, "Dean," he yelled grabbing his brother by the shoulders and shaking him roughly, "we have to leave now!"
"Where?" Dean said sleepily.
As if on cue his cell phone started ringing. Dean picked up his phone to find he had just gotten a text message from his dad. 79 Perry Street; Apartment # 35; New York, NY 10042.
Sam and Dean quickly packed and jumped into Dean's black Chevy Impala driving like hell to get to New York.
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