This Time Around
Sequel to Lily
Evans
Chapter 1
By Dorthey Star
Yes, this story
is the sequel to my story Lily Evans (it is stated above). You do not have to read
Lily Evans before you read This Time Around, but some things (like Red Rosie)
would make more sense if you did. If you want a summary of what happened in Lily
Evans, you can e-mail me at [email protected] J
This Time Around is dedicated to all my lovely Lily
Evans reviewers.
This chapter is dedicated to the late
Douglas Adams
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Lily,
Mum is taking me and my little
sister Abbi to Diagon Alley on Friday. Can you meet me at Madame Malkin's at
nine o'clock? I hope to see you then.
See you,
Maria
Lily put down the letter.
"Mum may I go? Please?" Lily begged
her mother. The whole Evans' family (excluding Petunia who ran out of the room
when the owl had flown through the window) was sitting at the breakfast table.
"I guess." Mrs. Evans looked over at
Mr. Evans who nodded in agreement.
"Thank you!" Lily ran upstairs and
wrote a letter to Maria saying that she could.
Friday morning Lily, Daisy, Mr. Evans, and Mrs. Evans all
took the underground to London and walked to Diagon Alley.
"G'morning!" said Tom the toothless innkeeper.
"We need to go to Diagon Alley." Mr.
Evans told Tom.
"Right. Follow me." Tom took them to
the back alley and showed them which brick to tap. It was five minutes after
nine when they arrived at Madame Malkin's. Maria's parents whisked Mr. and Mrs.
Evans off for a drink at the Leaky Cauldron leaving Lily, Daisy, Maria, and
Abbi with money to shop with.
"Lily, this is my sister Abbi. Abbi,
this is Lily Evans." Maria said. Abbi had large brown eyes and brown hair.
"This is my sister Daisy. Daisy,
this is Maria Blankenship." Lily, Maria, and Abbi (who was starting Hogwarts
that year) all stepped up to get fitted for Hogwarts robes.
"Where's your other sister? Petunia,
wasn't it?" Maria asked.
"She didn't want to come." Lily
grinned as she thought back to that morning. Mrs. Evans had asked Petunia if
she wanted to come (being the polite woman that she is). Petunia had screamed
"NO!" and ran out of the room.
When they all had new robes (except
for Daisy who, of course, wanted some but wasn't getting any) they went to
Flourish and Blotts. They were bent over a display when Lily felt a pair of
hands being clapped over her eyes.
"Guess who?" an amused voice said
into her ear.
"Ummm…Queen Elizabeth?" Lily
guessed.
"Guess again."
"Professor Dumbledore?"
"Nope."
"Snape?"
"Ugh! No!"
"Sirius?"
"Yup!" the hands were taken away.
Lily turned around to see James Potter and Sirius Black standing behind her
with identical grins of their faces. She rolled her eyes.
"Hi Red Rosie!" James said
cheerfully.
"How I had hoped that you would have
forgotten about that." Lily muttered.
"How were your summers, you two?"
Sirius asked, slinging an arm across each other the girls' shoulders.
"Horrible." They both said together
and laughed. James was playing a game with Daisy. She was on his back,
laughing, as he spun her around.
"I dare say that you two know my
sister Daisy." Lily giggled.
"This is my sister Abbi. She's
staring Hogwarts this year. Don't terrorize her too much. You'll corrupt her for
life." Maria smiled, "Abbi, this is James Potter and Sirius Black."
"Would we corrupt her?" Sirius asked
innocently.
"Wait, don't answer that one." James
grinned.
"So do you two have all your school
supplies?" Lily asked and picked Daisy up.
"Yup. Are you done shopping, too?"
James asked.
"No. we only have our books and
robes. There's still the Apothecary to visit, and…shoot. Where else do we have
to go Lily?" Maria asked her, looking at Lily.
"Umm…I think that's it, right?" Lily
looked at James and Sirius.
"Don't ask us. Our parents did our
shopping." Sirius shrugged.
"Can you imagine my parents
doing my shopping?" Lily laughed, trying to picture a pair of Muggles shopping
for magic supplies. James and Sirius stayed with Lily and Maria as they
finished their shopping. James decided to be nice and bought Daisy a pretty
jewelry box that had a ballerina that danced inside and played music. Daisy
decided that she liked him and that Lily should marry him.
"I'll see you Sunday!" Lily called
to her friends as she left with her family. Mrs. Evans saw that box that Daisy
was holding.
"Where did you get that from?" She
asked Daisy and Lily.
"A boy gave him to me." Daisy said,
smiling very largely (does that make sense?).
"Daisy, how many times have I told
you not to take gifts from strangers?" Mrs. Evans said angrily, "especially
magic ones!"
"But mum-"
"And Lily!" Mrs. Evans exclaimed,
"how could you let her take it from that person?" Mrs. Evans had her hands on
her hips and looked like she was about to explode.
"MUM!" Lily and Daisy yelled
together as their mother was taking in a breath to yell again.
"The boy that bought her the box is
a friend of mine from school." Lily said.
"Oh, well why didn't you say so?"
Mrs. Evans looked more relaxed.
"Because you wouldn't listen."
Lily woke up early on September 1st.
She couldn't wait to go back to Hogwarts.
"Bye mum, bye Daisy!" Lily called as
she crossed over the barrier. Maria came through right behind her.
"Lily! I tried to get your
attention, but I couldn't. Let's get on the train. I can't wait to get away
from Abbi." Maria and Lily climbed onto the train. They were joined moments
later by James, Remus, Sirius, and (to Lily and Maria's dismay) Peter.
"Hey James, that box you gave Daisy
almost got us into real trouble." Lily put on a high false voice, imitating her
mother. "How many times have I told you not to takes gifts from strangers?"
they all cracked up laughing…all except Peter. He obviously didn't understand
the joke, nor did he know who Daisy was.
"Did you get yourself a six-year-old
girlfriend, James?" Remus laughed.
"No, but Lily's sister, Daisy does
insists that Lily and I marry. Of course, we have no plans of listening to
her…well, I don't, and by the repulsed look on Red Rosie's face, I think that
she doesn't either." James smiled in a carefree way. The door opened and Abbi
came in. Maria groaned loudly.
"Maria…can I sit with you?" Abbi
asked. Maria looked to her friends for help. Sirius, of course offered to help.
"Sure you can. Right here next to
Maria." Sirius led Abbi to the empty seat by Maria (who stuck her tongue out at
Sirius). The rest of the ride was enjoyable to most of the people. Maria wasn't
having fun, and Lily seemed sad.
When they arrived at Hogwarts, Maria
grabbed Lily's wrist and started to run (no doubt to get a carriage without
Abbi).
"Hey, Maria, you did know that first
years go across the lake…Abbi couldn't ride with us…" Lily said in an attempt
to get Maria to stop running. It worked.
"Right…urm…" Maria was speechless.
They walked the rest of the way to the carriages.
After the feast, Lily collapsed in a
chair in the Commonroom.
"Lily?" Sirius said quietly when no
one was around.
"Hmmmm?" she murmured sleepily while
trying to decide if it was worth the effort to climb the stairs to her dorm or
just fall asleep where she was.
"Can I talk to you out in the, um,
hall for a minute?" Sirius sounded more nervous than Lily had ever heard him.
However, this did not register in her mind as she was half asleep.
"Tomorrow, Si…" Lily murmured. She
drifted off into peaceful dreams full of broomsticks and flowers.
Disclaimer: in this chapter Maria and Abbi (I love
that spelling!) are mine! Everything else is JKR's. except the nickname Si for
Sirius…that's rave's I think…er…its somebody's I dunno.
Author's Note: you thought you were rid of me for the
month of June, eh? Well I just missed all my lovely reviewers so much **cough
cough** yeah right **cough cough** erm…anyways. 40 thousand point to whoever
can guess what Sirius wants to ask Lily (come on! Somebody should be
able to guess it….i might not post the next chapter until someone guesses it J). Yes, I know that this wasn't very
long, but, well, I thought that it was a good part to end it. So :P to all you
who complain. Look at it this way: I should get the next part out soon….well I
hope to. I hope to get chapter two and maybe chapter three (depending on
how much time I get on the computer and how well my ideas roll) up before
Saturday June 9th which is when I leave for vacation and won't be
back until Saturday June 16th. doesn't sound like long to you, but
believe me, it might be heaven for me J.
Also, I'm er having
a bit of trouble with this, so if there's a bunch of junk (writing) at the top,
ignore it.
Love always,
Dorthey Star
Oh yes, I'm
looking for a beta reader. Probably not for this fic (I'll email you about that
Amanda) but for Moonstruck or any other fic that I decide to write. I might
have two beta readers. Preferably someone that has very good English skills and
can receive attachments in emails. If you are interested, email me at [email protected]
Thanks! J also, I'll beta read for anyone as long
as I'm familiar with the subject of the fic (or originals).