RK: Okay, this first poem is alright, but generally since my most recent poems will be added, well, recently, if you want to read the better ones then Id suggest working from the end. These are all pretty much stand alones, so n.n'
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto, just this poem. And a cookie. It's good.
Warnings: These are all sasunarusasu, and most of them are a bit depressing, sooo…. If you don't like the idea of two boys kissing, or if you're looking for something to make you feel all warm and fuzzy inside, then I would suggest leaving n.n'''
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Your eyes
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I can see through
your walls and space,
to your eyes filled with
cold yet sweet
out of place anger at the world
around you.
And you don't see
past your walls to me.
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Your eyes like blood
from fallen flowers
that lick the ground where
their brethren are found;
dead and lifeless
as spring leaves the
flowered trees bare.
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It's beyond your power
to know I'm here,
you're too caught up in
your own despair.
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So close yourself off,
forget the world around,
just doze and dream
of your family and seem
ok to everyone else.
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But don't hide from me,
you're a fool if you think
I don't see you in pain and
you are a fool, don't
you see?
I'm the same.
I can see through
your walls and space
you fill with anger and pain and hate.
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So let me take you from your madness
and then you as well will see
that we're the same, you and me,
you'll see.
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Then you'll see.
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RK: n.n' this is a slightly edited version of the first time I posted this one, so many thanks to Happiness's Deceit, who gave me some wonderful concrits (concrits are the love!).