OK everyone here is a sort-of revised version of the first chapter. I been struggling to make it better than before, but its worth a shot to get back into the creative mood here people.
As before I do not own the Legend of Zelda series. But I may own some OC's that will come up later in the chapters.
Legend of Zelda
It has been hundreds of years since the Hero of Time saved the land of Termina from the moon and the wicked Majora's mask. The mask used a skull kid as its host as it tormented parts of Termina as well as sending the moon into the land in three days. Link gained masks especially the Fierce Deity, which transformed him into defeating Majora. After Link defeated the mask the evil was removed from it and was returned to the salesman.
When the gods flooded Hyrule, no one questioned what had happen to the land of Termina. No one knows if it survived or was lost during the flood.
All previous knowlege of Termina was erased during the passage of time.
A hundred years later into the future after the great flood, the kingdom of Hyrule has ceased to exist as we know it; mountains became islands, and the fields became the Great Sea. A few years has passed since the reincarnation of the Hero of Time, Link had saved the world from the return of Ganon, with the help of Tetra the great descendant of Zelda have been able to stop the great king of evil.
He had met many creatures descended from the original races of the land of Hyrule. The Rito; a race of bird-like people whom live on Dragon Roost Island home of the great-dragon Valoo. It is said that they may have evolved from the Zora.
The Korok's; descendants of the Kokiri children that once lived in the forest before the flooding, they took different forms in order to adapt to their new home.
All other races such as; the Sheikah followers of the Royal Family, the Goron's still survive on several islands and the Gerudo a tribe of woman who were thieves and pirates, they gave birth to a male every hundred years and all were extinct except for Ganon, the last of the Gerudo.
Link came along with Tetra and her crew to explore new lands across the great see until one day they will face the biggest experience of their lives.
Recently they had come across the Ghost Ship, controlled by a monster called Bellum. It was draining the life force out of people, and kidnapped Tetra.
Link woke up to see he was in a strange forest he was not familiar with at all. It had a small fog surrounding the area, he saw two small balls of light; one crème the other purple.
'Hello' he asked at the two beings when he got a closer look, they were actually little fairies. 'Can you help me?' he asked and the passed by him as if he didn't exist, then something jumped from one of the trees and landed on the ground. It looked like a kid, but he had no face and he saw another figure on a horse; the figure was him!
He saw the strange kid walked up to the look- alike Link "It was fun to see you again, promise to be friends forever" it said and he and the fairies disappeared. As darkness crept in he saw a strange energy emitting.
It began to take form of a strange mask with purple markings and small spikes sticking out of it. A dark figure began to emerge from the mask and laughed at him "It is time, hero you shall meet your demise!" it said in a cruel voice as it fired a large black ball of energy at him. When he thought he would be a goner a voice started to reach him.
"LINK!" shouted a female voice that startled the boy falling out of his cabana. He stood up to see Tetra smirking at his fall.
"What did you do that for Tetra?" he asked her and got a sly look in her eye.
"Just want to have some fun" she replied and turned her head back to him "besides it's been years you saved your sister, saved the world and saved me from Ganon and recently from Bellum do you think I would cut you some slack?" she then fell down. He rubbed his head at where he hit the floor.
"Come on, we have a day ahead of us right now" she said.
"You do like to make fun of me do you Tetra?" he said as the soreness went away.
She returned a smirk to him "Now I understand what your sister sees."
Link was about to give a remark, but a sudden rocking hit the ship hard.
"What was that?" he asked and it happened again harder than before.
The two managed to get up and headed to the main deck to see the problem. "Miss Tetra" cried Gonzo one of the pirates on her ship called out to her. "What is with the rocking!" she shouted only receiving another rock on the boat. "Miss Tetra, this storm it came out of nowhere!" he cried as he felt a violent push shoving him back.
"Everyone stations, all main the sails and keep the ship in course!" she ordered them and they were struggling with their tasks. Suddenly, Link's eyes were in surprise as he spoke "Tetra look at that!" he shouted which caught her attention and looked at the same direction he was; a giant purple cyclone coming towards them.
"What in the name of Cyclos is going on?" she shouted as they fell down and they felt the ship being lifted out of the water and going into the cyclone. Everyone blacked out as the cyclone pulled it closer and suddenly disappeared.
There it is. It may not be much, but I fixed alot of it and put some improvement in it. I hope all f you like it better than before. I don't own the Legend of Zelda series.
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