Disclaimer: I read a review where someone actually flamed a person because they didn't use a disclaimer and because they thought that the author stole some other ideas from other people... of course, if this person hadn't flamed the author and instead used kind words to tell the author this, like CRITICISM I would have taken in seriously. So as a lesson, be aware: NEVER take flames seriously because if a person does not have the common sense to be nice about something (no offense...) then they're not worth talking to. ALSO, as much as we hate it, we should at least use ONE disclaimer in our stories-- I don't want anyone getting into trouble.
Before you get confused, this IS the chapter for the story "He's Back" -- If I felt like doing poetry for this one, i have a reason!!! If you don't like poetry, it's RHYMING. (And I can't rhyme for shit, so forgive me if this is terrible).
The two poems are suppose to connect with each other, and if they don't make sense, TOUGH, no just kidding, you can ask me if they don't make sense.
When I was a child
A person told me.
There are things in life
That you tend to see.
One thing is certain
The occurance of death
At one waking moment
You will take your last breath
You may expierence love
It's not certain, but you can.
The romance you feel
With another woman or man.
I suppose that time is now
With me on the brink
Of the death that will occur
I can only think
Of the reasons I have
Of the things I have done
I'm sure it'll be worth it
In the long run.
With the bags under my eyes
I stare at my weak limbs,
My reflection, my life
Am I really throwing it away for him?
It's you I see
Again and again
Our scars unforgotten
Like a paper to a pen.
Is it worth it at all
For me to die for thee?
I believe it is
You did the same for me.
So I may be gone now
But with you I'll be.
Goodbye my friends, my nakama
I am leaving thee.
Wait! I can't do it!
I say as I stare
At the silent ripples of the water
Which I am now giving a glare.
Can I end it?
Can I die,
With no truth in your words
But only false lies?
I move back from the water
And turn away
Only to see you
And for you to say
"You lied to me Nami!"
I didn't, I can't!
"Then you have to die."
No no no! I go on a rant.
I'm not ready to die!
I can't do it!
"Then you won't get my love..."
...It really does end with crimson slits.
"Move over! Is it true?" Ussop says as he pants from running.
They solemly nod, even Luffy, who doesn't have the heart to speak.
"We..." Chopper sniffs. "We found her in there." He points to the tub, filled with water, with Nami's body slumped over the edge of the tub, her face submerged in water.
"Does Sanji know yet?"
"H-He's coming." He hiccupped, and more tears fell.
There was no coming back for her. Unlike him, she had no reason to come back. Her bond with him had not been severed; they were together. They had no reason to come back.
They weren't forgotten, but in a way they were. Had she not loved him each passing day, and he her, nothing would have happened. Not her death, not the sorrow of their nakama.
Perhaps his love for her was the cause of his death. It definitely was the cause of hers.
Um, I realized in the last chapter or two, or whatever, (I'm too lazy to figure out details), I changed the setting after Nami saw Zoro outside... It started with outside, and then inside her hotel room... whoops. Um, let's pretend he "teleported" her or whatever.
And the reason she saw everyone's bodies gruesome in the picture was because Zoro made it so that she sees and feels what he feels and sees. He feels pain all the time, physically he feels a burning, and emotionally and mentally he sees everyone he loves in pain... (meaning he sees Nami dead or whatever and it kills him on the inside, if that's not like Zoro it IS in THIS story!!!). He did this so she knows what he's going through and understands why he's doing this. He can't take it anymore.
The voice in... what, the third chapter? I don't remember at the moment. (Yes, I feel pathetic). If you believe in Satan/Devil/whatever, that was him. The person convincing Zoro to kill Nami…
... That's the end. Yes I know it sucks. If you want more, you wanna give me an idea I could form into an ending? I want a mysterious ending... Where you get whats happening but not really, ya know?
And um, I like my disclaimer note today for some odd reason… probably because I'm KINDA insulting someone I don't know…do you want to read it? Go back up please???
Lol, you don't have to.
And yes you may ask me about ANYTHING, poems included.
I'm gonna miss this story…
Love,
Ivy