The days and nights of Allana of trebond

Hi well this is my first story so don't laugh at its crappiness "please" well basically its about Alana and well its sort of a diary and sort of not it starts with Thom wanting out off the whole switch thingy so Alana goes to the convent ( I feel her pain).

(Maude's point of view)

Maude talon (I don't know her whole name) house maid to sir trebond, whom had, looked after his children as there farther sunk further and further into depression after his wife's death 12 years ago. Put aside her loom and watched as Allana the barons only daughter walk past the door in a hasty manner and Thom (her twin) came briskly behind her calling her name

"Allana, Allana, be reasonable I had no choice"

That's when Allana turned on her heel and was face to face with her twin and I could see her screwed up face red not from crying but probably from yelling at someone (nasty temper that girl has)

"You had no choice, HOW COULD YOU NOT HAVE A CHOICE" she may have been small but when she's in a mood she seems to grow 6 feet.

(Alana's Point of view)

FLASHBACK

She had been packing her bags and was in a wondrous mood which meant everyone else should be too, when Thom walked in grim faced and when Alanna asked him what was wrong he mumbled so quite that even a mouse squeak could be heard over it.

" impullingouticant' he mumbled "Thom I swear im not going deaf so speak up and don't look so damned depressed" "I cant d d do do it any more Allana"

"Do what brother "her voice sounds like evil and sarcastic

"Well get caught" he whimpered as he saw her go purple with rage,

"WHAT YOU PROMISED I HATE YOU, AND IM NEVER GOING TO SPEAK TO THE LIKES OF YOU AGAIN"

Umm so yeah that was it I no it deserve and award for the crappest thingy ever but give me a chance. I'll try to make it better.