Ok so this is my first fanfic..i hope you guys like...

Takes place after No Sleep Till Brooklyn Pt. 2

At G Major...

Darius: Jude I've been meaning to talk to you
Jude: Darius if its anymore news about how bad my sales are i really dont want to hear it
Darius: Close. I just wanted to tell you that i want you and Tom to go to Studio A and make a hit. I know your sales havent been the greatest but i know that you and Tom will make a hit. Now get to it!
Tommy: ok we're on it, D

In Studio A 30 minutes later...

Tommy: These are really good Jude
Jude: Thanks Tommy. You know with everything going on its nice to hear a compliment.
Tommy's thoughts: Well if you would of stayed away a minute and a half longer than you would of heard a real big compliment that probably would of made your day even better. Stop it Quincy jude is so over you. Plus you have Saidie...annoying, talkative saidie who always has to flirt with you in front of jude. And i love what jude has done to her hair. Yea Quincy could you have been anymore obvious when she came down the stairs? You couldnt keep your eyes off of her. But its so damn hard to keep your eyes off of her when she looks that good. And the way she moves her lips when she talks...wait she is talking to you moron...

Jude: tommy...TOMMY!
Tommy: huh? sorry could you repeat that?
Jude: uh i asked you if you was ready for me to record yet, but now i want to know why you were stairing at me like that
Tommy: Uh i was just telling myself how good you look with blonde hair...i mean how pretty you look with blonde hair...i mean you...
Jude: ok, tommy i get it..you like me with blonde hair
Tommy smiles nervously while Jude smirks
Jude: anyway Quincy are you ready for me to record or not?
Tommy: well that is what i get paid for Harrison
Jude: and here i thought you got paid to flirt with me and daydream about me
Tommy blushes and jude smiles at the effect she had on him
Tommy: just get in there girl
Jude's Thoughts: whoa i never thought i'd see the day. tommy quincy actually blushed. and what was with the stuttering early? if i didnt know any better i would say that he was nervous. but why would he be nervous around me? im too young and he is with my sister. ugh just the thought of it makes me wanna puke. but if he wants my sister then why does he keep on looking at me like he wants to make out with my right on the soundtable. hmmm that wouldnt be so bad..making out with tommy on the soundtable...no bad he is with my sister..yea he wants sexy saidie and not underage punk rocker jude...i wonder if he ever thinks about me like i am thinking about him right now...oh the songs over...

Does it totally suck?