This is in response to Cassia and Sio's "Tears Like Rain". It inspired me to write a poem as did Captive of Darkness so please read it and tell me what you think.
I own nothing the credit goes to J.R.R. Tolkien and Cassia and Sio for coming up with such a wonderful story.
There was a time when I looked up to you
When I loved you with all my heart
When you were the one I came to
But now we are drifting apart
You don't seem the same as you were before
Some thing has changed inside
Inside you I'm looking I don't know what for
I don't know what's truth and what's lies
You used me I'm hurting inside and out
Now I see who you are
And within me there is no doubt
I see you have drifted too far
Now I've grown much time has passed
I've let go of most of the pain
But I still remember some things still last
When I cried those tears like rain
There it is I hope you liked it please read and review! See that blue button? It's there for a reason:) Please also read Fears and Triumphs in response to Captive of Darkness thanks!
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