Hey.. This is my first fanfic ever, and I don't know if you'll like it, but I hope so ... anyway, please leave a review and tell me if I should continue with this fic... I don't mind criticsm... thanks :D
Marissa lay in her bed, thinking about the events that have been going on this week. Well mostly about Ryan's arrive… When she met him at the end of her driveway they had a connection… She didn't have this with Luke, and she didn't really know what it was… Maybe it was love? Nah, she loved Luke. Didn't she? At least she let herself think that she did… When she first laid her eyes on Ryan, she felt something… and after looking him in his eyes she saw a lost boy… There were so many emotions in his eyes. In those beautiful blue eyes… Diiiiing... Her thought was interrupted by the doorbell… it was Summer, probably asking her to go to one of those stupid partys…
"Hey Sum… what are you doing here?"
"What? Can't I just come over and say hello to my best friend?
Marissa looks at her strangely, not buying this..
"Ok, you win… I was hoping that you'd go with me to Holly's… she's having a party at her beach house.."
"Ohh.. another one of those.." Marissa replied… She didn't really want to go
"Common you have to go"
"Well ok.. let me just get ready" She agreed…
Marissa was ready and they walked out and hopped into Summers car… then Marissa realized that she probably wasn't going to be there as long as Summer so she thought she would go on her own car..
"Hey Summer, I think I'll take my own car… In case I want to leave earlier then you or something… I'm going to run inside and grab my keys.."
"OK Coop, but you promise that you'll come? It's not gonna be like at my birthday when you came so late?"
"No.. I'm just gonna grab my keys and I'll be on my way"
"OK, I'll see you there"
"Yeh... bye"
At the party:
"Hey… you're here… It took you long enough…" Summer said
"Yeh sorry… I got flat tire so my dad had to fix it" She lied… She was actually on her way to the party, then Ryan came to her head… She drove out there to the model home, and just waited outside, just looking at the house… She wanted to go inside but figured that was not the best idea so she went to the party.
"Yeh sure…" Summer didn't really buy her lie, but figured she'd let it go. "Hey, you wanna go outside and talk? It feels like we haven't talked in ages.."
"Sum, we talked this morning.."
"Yeh, but it feels like forever"
"Okay, come and talk" She didn't really want to talk, but decided to go, she didn't want to worry her friend..
"So what's up? You've been all weird-acting lately."
"Yeah? I dunno, I guess ... It's just ... do, do you ever wonder what your life looks like through someone else's eyes?"
Summer starts to laugh.. "Alright, this is what I'm talking about. What is up with you?"
"Nothing. It's just-" But Marissa was caught off by Luke…
"Hey babe… didn't see you coming…"
"Yeh, I just came…"
"Okay, I'm gonna go get one of Holly's margs.. You want one?"
"No….thanks"
"Okay, your loss" And with that he left
"I'm gonna go………get one" Summer said "You sure you don't want one?"
"Yeh, I'm sure…"
A little later:
Marissa walks around the house, looking for Summer… She sees Luke talking to his friends… she just stands there and listens to what they're saying…
"Seriously dawg, we find that punk's trailer park and burn it to the ground." Luke's friend says to him
"Who dat!" Holly asks
"That freak from Chino. He was all up in Luke's grill."
"I heard he was like a total pshyco!" Holly says
"He's a little bitch. I see that kid around again I'm going to beat his ass." Luke finally spoke
Marissa walked to the door and Luke followed her
"Where are you going?"
"Home… I can't be here right now"
"What's wrong?" Luke says, he was clearly annoyed…
"Just leave him alone…"
"Who? That Chino kid?"
"His name is Ryan… why are you so against him? 'Cause you don't know him, you don't know anything about him"
"I know he's a bitch…" Marissa starts walking to the door when Luke stops her. "I'm sorry… it's just that he's clearly in love with you… and I just don't want to lose you.."
"He's not…. He doesn't like me that way… We're just friends"
"Oh.. common Marissa… I've seen the way he looks at you… you can't say that he doesn't like you"
"No, because he doesn't.." Marissa says… "He's been through a lot and he listens to me…" "Unlike some people" She adds under her breath
"What? Did you say something?"
"No… not at all…"
"Oh… cause I heard something…" He throws the glass he's holding to the floor, and it made Marissa jump, and the whole crowd started watching… "I'm gonna kill this bastard"
"Just leave him alone…"
"No I wont…"
"You know what? Fine, do whatever you want… Because I don't care… I just can't take this anymore.. Goodbye" and with that she leaves.. and Luke doesn't follow her this time
OK, so here's my first chapter, to my first story :) that's kinda cool... but please leave a review :)... i have some more posted in my computer, so let me know if u want me to post it ;)