Ok. So, Seeing's new chapter should be up soon (I finally started it) but this is here because it's part of my English homework, and I wanted to know what you guys think of it!

He walked along the road, stumbling as his foot connected with a stone. The strong winds from either side buffeted him, chilling him to the bone and pushing him off course. He ignored it and kept on. He had to keep going. There was a sour smell in the air, and he wrinkled his nose as he caught a fresh whiff of it on the breeze. He bowed his head in order to stop his eyes watering and clouding his vision. He spat. The bitter taste of blood had been building for a while. He had no idea how long. Time had ceased to have all meaning. All there was was the walk, and the promise of what lay at the end of his journey.