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Hi. This is our first Beyblade fanfic. We apologize for spelling errors. Please review.
Characters: Of course our favourite Bladebreakers and a girl named Cree.
Description of characters: Everyone knows the Bladebreakers. Cree is a very pretty girl with a cool attitude. She's around Kai's age. Her eyes are a beautiful deep shade of blue (if you've seen Cardcaptors, their just like Madison's eyes), her shoulder-length raven-coloured hair radiates off her perfect tan (think Sakura from Cardcaptors).
P.S.: We do not own Beyblade. I merely own Cree and the story.
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Cree was walking along the road when suddenly she heard yelling behind her. Turning back, all she saw were five boys running as if for their lives, leaving a dust cloud behind them. They yelled "Get out of the way! Stampede!" She jumped back and pressed herself flat against the wall as they stormed by and turned into a corner.
She just stared in their direction for a while, wondering if they were just crazy, when suddenly, she did hear something resembling a stampede.
A huge mob of girls, all shapes and sizes, rushed in to stand beside her, and a questioning murmur of confusion arose. A pretty raven-haired girl asked Cree, "Hey, did you see five –"
"– Extreeeeeeeeeeeemely cute –" another interrupted.
"– And totally hot –" a third added.
"– glorious looking –" a fourth sighed.
"– guys run past here?" Cree asked, before a fifth could speak up. She already had her mouth open to add something else to the list, which Cree felt would go on for hours if it wasn't stopped. "Um, yeah. As a matter of fact they did. They went straight forward."
"Really?" a blonde asked sceptically.
"Of course." Cree assured them. "They're guys, what else can you expect? If boys were that smart they'd turn this corner right here, like any sensible girl would've."
"She's right. They are, after all, just guys."
"They aren't just guys. They are totally cute –"
"– Handsome –"
"– Gorgeous –"
"– Hot –"
"– Adorable –"
"Maybe you should get going. They're gonna get away." Cree suggested.
"You're right," a brunette said.
"Thanks," they all chorused before speeding away along the road.
Cree sighed and looked around into the corner, and found herself staring directly at none other than the Beybladers. Her eyes widened as she recognized them, wondering what they were doing here, then she grinned. Boy, were they in a mess. Kye was leaning against the wall, looking wiped out. Ray was brushing dirt off himself. Kenny was sitting with his laptop open, checking to see if everything was alright. Max and Tyson were lying on the ground, arms and legs spread out, relieved. All of them were panting and covered with dirt.
"They're gone. You're safe now," Cree told them.
Tyson jumped up and was shaking her hand with both of his before she knew it. "Thank you thank you so soooooo much!"
Max ran up and shook the other, saying, "Yeah, we'd have been toast if you hadn't shown up."
"You're… um… welcome?" Cree said, slightly baffled.
"That was a close one," a female voice floated out of the laptop.
The boys let go. "I'm Max, and this is my buddy Tyson. That's Kenny with the laptop. The grim-looking one leaning against the wall's our captain Kai, and the other one's Ray."
"I'm Cree. Aren't you the Bladebreakers?"
"Yep."
"You look familiar," Tyson stated.
"Do I sound familiar, too?" Cree laughed.
"Yeah. In fact, you sound just like my cousin Cree. She's come to visit here, you know. To take part in the cham… Cousin Cree! Didn't expect to run into you!"
"Me neither. I thought you were taking part in a tournament back home."
"We thought so too. But then we decided to take part in the championships."
"Seems like you've already earned yourselves some glances," Cree smiled at Kai and Ray.
"All we did was win a stupid battle at the arena!" Ray moaned.
"Against the toughest players in town," Kai snorted.
"You mean the Spindles?" Cree asked.
"Uh-huh. You know anything about them?" Kenny asked from where he was sitting.
"Not much, except that they say they're the best around. Reminds me of the White Tigers." Ray looked away at that comment.
"They were saying they'd be entering the match too," he said.
"Then we should turn tail and run," the laptop said.
"Whose side are you on, Dizzy?" Kenny asked the laptop.
"I'm on no one's side. I'm in your laptop."
"Oh, this is Dizzy. She knows everything there is to know about Beyblades." Kenny replied to the questioning look from Cree. "She used to be my Bitbeast, you see."
"Used to be," Dizzy said. "Until a certain someone managed to trap me inside his laptop."
"Give me a break, Dizzy. That was an accident."
"You trapped your Bitbeast inside your laptop?" Cree raised an eyebrow at him.
"And Dizzy's never gonna let me forget."
"Cree's a top blader. Unbeaten champ. She's won loads of tournaments over the world," Tyson ignored the heated argument that continued between Kenny and Dizzy.
"Really?" Ray asked her.
"No," she shook her head. "He's exaggerating. I've been beaten loads of times. Everyone's gotta lose once in a while."
"Yeah, I know that better than most people."
"Why did Dizzy say that you guys should run away from the Spindles?"
Ray looked down. "They're very good. But it's not that, they play very rough. They almost trashed our blades."
"Hey, Cree," Tyson looked at her with a sly grin. "Pay up time. Remember when I first started blading you said I'd never get any girls after me? You bet a hundred bucks."
Cree didn't as much as flinch. "And I was right. If you're referring to those girls who went by, they weren't chasing you, they were chasing those two," she jerked her head towards Ray and Kai, who were the farthest back in the alley, "And no wonder. You are the cutest guys I've seen."
Ray blushed, but Kai didn't even look up.
"Oh yeah? I'll show you," Tyson huffed. He walked out of the alley and straight into the middle of the road. He took a deep breath, then yelled as loud as he could, "HEEEY GIIIIIRLS! I'M BAAAAACK!"
All that moved were some dust clouds, which blew across the road from the wind.
"HEELLLLOOOOO? ANYBODYYYYY?" Tyson tried a final time before returning to stand in front of Cree, who was ginning evilly.
"So, cuz, pay up."
Kai snorted again and walked out of the alley, muttering, "Idiots," as he passed the two, crossed the road, and leaned against a tree on the other side, with arms crossed.
Cree put her hands on her hips, "What's his problem?"
"Nothing. He's just a bit moody," Kenny rolled his eyes. He'd stopped his argument with Dizzy to watch Kai.
"A bit moody?" Max echoed. "I've never seen him laugh."
"Maybe he has laughed, or might, in the future," Kenny said. "But I don't think anyone can possibly make him blush."
"Hmm. Think I can," Cree said under her breath, but Tyson heard. He immediately snatched up the chance.
"Bet you twenty bucks you can't make him blush. It's impossible."
"Deal. Or I'll pay you."
Ray looked over at Kai. "You're making a huge mistake, Cree."
She just laughed.
"Where're you guys staying?"
"At this hotel called 'Salan'." Max said.
"We should get going," Everyone was surprised. It was Kai.
"What's the rush, it's just around the corner."
"Actually, it's across town," Cree corrected.
"What!" the others yelped.
"Oops, must've taken a wrong turn back there," Kenny apologized.
Kai was… say… furious. "I told you to turn right!"
"It was those girls! I lost sense of direction."
"So where exactly are we?"
"Um…"
"YOU!" Kai roared.
"I can take you back there," Cree offered.
Kai looked at her, then regained his usual calmness. "Whatever."
Cree began to lead the way to the hotel. The others followed. Kai didn't even glance at her, just gave occasional replies to Ray when he said something. She glanced at him and sighed quietly. This, she thought, won't be easy.
End of the first chapter! If any of the readers sense something coming up they are completely correct. Please review. Remember to direct it to all three authors.