I decided to write another story about The Patriot as well. And don't worry I will still continue on with the other one.
The Time Turner
Elizabeth Braden and her friend Catherine Okano talked as they explored Charleston, South Carolina. Elizabeth and Catherine had decided to take a trip to historical places on the east coast once they had graduated form high school. They both wanted to start from Virginia and make their way down. Now that they were nearing the end of their trip they wanted to see a place that they thought rather interesting.
" Hey Beth. Isn't this part of a movie?" Cat asked her friend.
" Yeah, they used this in The Patriot remember?" Beth said.
" Right which movie was that again?" Cat asked nervously.
" Cat! I thought you said you'd watch that before we went on our trip." Beth scolded.
" I did! But I skipped all the boring parts, like that one part where they were in some town at a stupid meeting." Cat said.
" Cat, the town is where we are right now." Beth sighed.
" Oh, right. Sorry but I don't like Mel Gibson movies." Cat said.
" Fine, but don't bug me if you don't understand something." Beth sighed.
They turned a corner and found themselves behind an abandoned building. Elizabeth saw the building and gasped.
" This is Aunt Charlotte's house!" She cried.
" Who?" Cat asked.
" She was Mel Gibson's sister-in-law." Beth said.
They found a door on the back and Elizabeth set her hand on the handle.
" I wonder if it's open." She said turning the handle.
The door swung open and the girls peered inside.
" Is it safe to go in?" Catherine asked.
Elizabeth stepped inside and Cat followed. The two of them looked around. Furniture was covered and several dust-covered tables lay in the room. Suddenly the door slammed shut. Catherine raced over to the door.
" It's locked!" Elizabeth was about to help her when suddenly a gust of wind blew through the room and it began to spin. They screamed as they were tossed around. Suddenly color began to pour back into the room and the spinning stopped. They collapsed and saw no more.
Hey let me know if you like it.