Heh, my second Outsiders fanfic. I actually came up with this one before Speechless, but I wasn't sure on the plot or how this one would come out. Like, the other, this is just a trial to see what you guys think of it so far. If nobody likes it, then I'll just work on the other one. Thanks for reading.
Note: Fanfic is told in Ponyboy's POV
The pain...
A sharp jab to the stomach.
... is starting to go numb.
A blow to the jaw.
I'm starting to lose myself.
Something being picked up.
Everything...
A few steps forward.
... is fading from my site.
Item grasped tightly.
I hear a mixture of shouts...
Arms raised high above the head.
... but I can't make sense of anything.
Item is swooped down quickly.
What's going on?
Connects in one, clean hit.
Why is it so dark?