Greetings top20fan13 here, just letting all of you know THIS IS THE LAST CHAPTER. After reading though this with my brother I realized it's not really that good, it's down right bad. though we had fun tearing the story a new one as we read though it. Anyways since the poll ended in a tie, here's the rest of the current plot line.

Warning) this chapter has been injected with self-mocking humor and forth wall breaking. Should you review this DO NOT go easy on me, also all edits are in bold so we can all see my mistakes, yeah past me, you rock.

Once again thanks to the Youkai of Endless Possibility for being the best beta-reader ever as well as adding some amusing references to the following chapters. I look forward to having some more chapters for you to beta read soon.

A Code Lyoko Sequel: a pitiful Adventure
Chapter eight ) something about Amy

Last time on the story Amy learned about the virus XANA gave them, upset about the problem she caused, Amy took a bus ride to calm down. Then she got a mysterious call and went to the factory hoping to find answers but only found a trap. Is this the work of XANA? Let's find out.

Time) later that day
Place) the house

"She's been gone for several hours now, I hope you're happy." Cyndi told Jeremie.

"Calm down, you know she likes to ride the bus, that one day she was gone almost all day, I'm sure she's fine." James said reassuringly.

Just then the front door opened and Amy walked in. She was wearing a dark purple dress and she had a neutral expression on her face that appeared to be void of any emotion at all.

"Are you OK?" Odd and Cyndi asked at the same time.

"Yes, why wouldn't I be." Amy replied.

"You did not show up at your history class, this is not normal for you." Odd replied.

"Really. I missed one class, that's not a big deal." Amy replied in a voice that also lacked emotion.

"This is collage, it's very important you attend your classes. don't forget we are your friends if something is bothering you we can help." Cyndi informed her.

"I don't need your help." Amy stated before walking past them and up the steeps to the second floor.

"It looks like she's still mad. I should probably go talk to her." Cyndi noted.

Cyndi then walked up to the second floor and to Amy's room. Amy had just placed her laptop computer on a table and was waiting for it to start up.

"We had a deal. I can tell something is not right, though I can't help you if you don't let me." Cyndi pleaded.

"I don't need help. now why don't you go pester someone else." Amy replied.

Warning: everything from here to the end was written in 2011, so if the writing style changes that's why, also all jokes are not to be taken seriously, it's just a little self humor, now back to the story.

"Amy you are my best friend and…" Cyndi stated to say

"And your boring me, goodbye." Amy stated before punching Cyndi in the gut with enough force to send her flying out of Amy's room and crashing into the wall on the opposite side of the hallway before gravity took over sending her crashing to the ground.

Amy took a second to admire the work she did before returning to her computer, which was still in it's start up process. Stupid inferior electronic device hurry up already she thought as she stared at the screen.

That's when she noticed something next to her computer with a note which read.

I happened to come across this game recently it's hard, though fun once you get used to it. I also had Jeremy apply the English patch so you can actually read the text. The note was also singed by Odd. With the note was a case containing touhou 12.8 Fairy Wars.

However before Amy could even open the game case Jeremie exclaimed "What did you do?"

"Gave her a free trip because she couldn't get a clue." Amy replied with little emotion in her voice.

"You could have killed her!" he exclaimed.

"You mean I didn't. from the way she landed I concluded she was dead." Amy replied in a plain tone that any genius could tell was not human however the cast has not proved themselves to be smart in this fan fiction yet, why should they start now?

At the same time Odd had just gotten back from probably a food run and was walking up the steps when he saw the scene still happening in the hallway.

"Did we get robbed or something?" Odd inquired.

"Amy did this. there is something seriously wrong with that girl, though that's not the only thing bothering me." Jeremie stated.

"Is that so?" Odd replied concerned.

"It is, why are we all living in the same house. exactly how big is this house anyways, I mean there are ten people living in this house and only two of them are employed. Amy has a part time job as a cashier and James works at a small café. Only a mansion could support this many people though we don't have the income to pay for a mansion. I can't be the only one to see a flaw in that." Jeremie concluded.

Odd looked at Jeremie with a confused look on his face. "Maybe you're the one that's not okay. you're not making any sense."

"OK then how about this. Why has James done nothing, his wife is lying on the floor hurt and he has not even moved an inch." Jeremie retorted.

"Well there's one way to get to the bottom of this. Amy did you do this to Cyndi?" Odd asked.

"Yes, now go away. your show is getting boring and I have some fairies to freeze, take that you pitiful excuse of a enemy." Amy replied.

"Is my head still in one piece?" Cyndi asked as she slowly started to get up.

She had regained consciousness during the previous pointless scene.

"There is something wrong with Amy." Cyndi managed to say though the intense pain she was in.

"She only punched…" Cyndi said before taking a small break pain still flowing though her body.

"…me once. I think that XANA thing you fight… might have… something to do with this."

"You know about XANA." Jeremie gasped.

"It's a long story." Cyndi replied.

"Maybe we should continue this conversation in Jeremie's room. I don't want anyone else to learn our secret." Odd stated.

"Don't worry I won't tell." Cyndi stated as she struggled to get to her feet.

After a while they made it to Jeremie's room which took a while because of Cyndi's injuries.

"It can't be XANA's doing he can't attack people directly." Jeremie told them. (1)

"Well then how can you explain the way Amy is acting?" Cyndi demanded.

"Personal reasons, stress, maybe it's that time of the month for her, there's a lot of reasons that could explain her behavior." Jeremie replied brushing her off.

"And I'm sure girls her size are capable of punching someone with the force of a cannon." Cyndi said sarcastically.

"Well… I can't explain that." Jeremie sighed.

"Are you ready to admit that maybe XANA is controlling Amy." Cyndi replied.

"I told you XANA can't attack people directly!" Jeremie shot back.

"He's right you know. I have not been anywhere near the factory. I only went out for ice cream. While I was out I just realized I needed to change the way I act. This is not XANA's doing, it's my choice." Amy stated from the doorway to Jeremie's room.

"I don't know who or what you are XANA, though you're not fooling me. now release control of my friend!" Cyndi exclaimed.

"Well you thought wrong, and considering the nonsense coming from your mouth it wouldn't be the first time. Don't listen to her, she has no clue what's she's taking about. XANA controlling people, laughable." Amy said in a cold and cruel manner, very much unlike her.


Time) the next day (Friday)

Odd had just finished his breakfast and was taking Jeremie's breakfast to his room. That guy just can't be bothered to leave his computer when he's working on something.

"What are you doing?" Odd asked as he entered Jeremie's room.

"Working on a device to get me out of this fanfic." Jeremie replied.

"Stick to the script." Odd whispered.

Jeremie sighed "Well with XANA back I'm working on a better way to detect XANA attacks. This way Aleita won't need to be in Lyoko for us to know about activated towers, and I conveniently finished right now." he stated.

The program started up and quickly found an actavted tower in the mountain region.

"What is XANA up to this time?" Odd asked.

Jeremie looked over the information on his computer before responding "I don't know."


Location) the factory

Thomas had entered the factory and was about to use the elevator when he heard a loud thud. Frightened he turned on his simpleteck 400 and asked "what's that sound?"

The noise was heard a few more times, then the simpleteck 400 replied "readouts show it's the sound of metal striking metal."

"Well it's creeping me out, where is it coming from?" he asked.

"Readouts are somehow able to tell the sound is coming from an old Janitor's closet and the door is made of metal," the simpleteck 400 replied.

"Is this place ever not weird?" Thomas asked.

"Depends on your definition of weird," the simpleteck 400 replied.

"Well it sounds like bad news to me, I'm getting out of here," Thomas said before turning off his minicomputer and running for the exit.


Meanwhile in the Janitor's closet)

"Stupid metal door, who puts a metal door on a Janitor's closet," Amy complained as she continued to pound on the door with a hammer she found in said Jainitor's closet.

"Let me out, I've been locked in here all day!" Amy exclaimed.

Amy could not remember how she ended up locked in this small room. Last thing she remembered was coming to the factory for answers. Next thing she knew she was locked in this room and her purse and phone were missing. All she could do was hope the others noticed she was missing. They would notice, wouldn't they, they had to. She decided to give up on trying to break the door open as she was making no progress. She just stared at the door and told herself it was going to be ok. for now it was all she could do.

(end chapter 8)

Chapter notes

1) the original code Lyoko Novel took place before the season where XANA gained the power to take over people, in this plotline (a code Lyoko novel) he/it never did that.

This would be the end of the chapter however since this is the last update, this will be a double chapter, so let's just keep going.

A Code Lyoko Sequel: a very shameful SequelChapter nine ) something about Amy part two

Last time on the story Amy returned home acting weird and punched out Cyndi. then she played touhou 12.8 fairy wars.(why not that game rocks, really it's worth trying). As for the rest of the cast most of them got a get out of chapter free card. Lastly we learned that Amy is actually locked in a Janitor's closet in the factory with an amazingly sturdy door. Will Amy get out of the closet and will the others learn what the other Amy really is before it's too late? find out as top twenty starts right now. 20 - 19... Wait I mean our story continues.

Place) Jeremie's room
Time) twenty minutes after the end of the last chapter.

"Do you know what XANA is doing yet?" Odd asked.

"No as far as I know there is only an activated tower. no unusual headlines in any newspapers. no strange happenings. I'm not sure what XANA is up to. maybe it's a trap?" Jeremie contemplated.

"Correct as usual Jeremie. just a silly trap, though we're not going to fall for it. it's not even worth going to the factory." Amy remarked.

"When did you get here, are you spying on us?" Jeremie asked.

"Just happened to be passing by. thought I would add my point of view to the discussion." Amy explained.

"Well I'm still going to the factory anyways." Jeremie replied.

"There's no need to. XANA can't attack human directly plus there's a huge trap just waiting at the factory. bad news. Don't wanna go there." Amy insisted in a way that any normal person would find suspicious.

"You know maybe Cyndi is right." Odd commented.

"I'm currently working on a system to detect XANA attacks quicker and I need to do some work down at the factory. now please move out of the way." Jeremie told Amy.

"No." Amy replied in the same plain tone.

"Do I need to move you?" Odd asked.

"That is not possible you lack the strength needed for that task." Amy replied pointedly.

"What is your problem you have not been yourself lately and now that I think about it your voice lacks emotion. almost like you're a robot of some kind." Odd commented.

"A robot, that makes sense. it's not mind control. you're a fake." Jeremie exclaimed.

"Looks like you caught on to me. Oh well I guess I'll just have to destroy you now. Your chance of victory is zero percent. You are trapped and your combined power is nowhere near mine." the robot imposter taunted.

"Now that I know your not really Amy ,I don't have to worry about hurting you anymore." Odd remarked grinning.

"Let me make this clear. nether of you will get out of this room alive, and your friends will soon meet the same fate as you, and there's nothing you can do about it." the fake Amy remarked.

"I never thought I would be doing this." Odd thought as he ran up to the imposter and punched her in the gut.

It felt like he punched a steal wall however, and did no damage to the imposter at all.

"You got to be kidding me." Odd commented.

"My turn." the imposter stated before trying to punch Odd.

He was able to dodge the attack. The Amybot tried to attack a second time though missed again and ended up punching a decent sized hole into the wall. This did not phase the robot at all.

"I'm very certain that's not Amy." Jeremie gasped.

"Wow that line was stupid." both Odd and Jeremie thought.

"Anyways we need to get to the factory. I think the real Amy might be trapped there. besides we need to deactivate the tower. Right now there's only one, though XANA might start mass producing these robots if given enough time." Jeremie concluded.

"OK, now how are we going to get past that thing?" Odd asked.

"I have a plan just be ready to run." Jeremie stated.

Jeremie then grabbed a glass of water he conveniently just happened to have next to his computer.

Jeremie then splashed the Amybot with the water, some of it got in her ear temporary immobilizing the robot. Odd and Jeremie then ran out of the room as quickly as possible taking advantage of the robot's stun time.

Jeremie ran to Aleita's room while odd ran to tell Ulrich and Yumi.

Before long they were all on their way to the factory however so was the Amybot.

"It's all downhill from here." the Amybot said as she smashed though the wall of Jeremie's room and leapt down to the ground instead of using the steps simply because it was more extreme. Besides this story needs to go out with a bang not a whimper.

Meanwhile James was actually tending to his wife's injuries now, about time he should have been the first one there when she got hurt.


There was a pointless scene here where Cyndi went to pinkstar studios and was told that Jessica's story will be made into a TV show, however Cyndi is still unable to accept commands right now and the scene has been dropped.


Place) the factory

Jeremie, Odd, Ulrich, Yumi and Aleita were at the factory and they heard the same pounding noise Thomas had heard earlier.

Odd decided to investigate the pounding while the others took the elevator to the lower levels of the factory, though we'll get to them later.

Somehow knowing this pounding was not a bad thing Odd followed the sound to a Janitor's closet that for some reason had a solid metal door that was practically indestructible.

Once Odd got to the door he exclaimed "Is that you Amy?"

"Yes it's me, I'm locked in here, let me out." Amy yelled.

Odd then picked the lock because let's face it having proper materials to pick a lock is just as important as your keys and wallet when traveling. Soon the big metal door swung open freeing the real Amy.

"Do you happen to have a cheeseburger on you?" Amy asked.

"It's nice to see you as well." Odd replied, he then said " and no I don't have a burger."

"I've been in there all day I need food and some Mountain dew supernova!" Amy exclaimed.

"Sorry, all that's on the menu today is death." the Amybot stated as she caught up to them.

"Objection!" Amy declared pointing at the robot.

"Overruled." It retorted.

"Being a fake me I can understand why you want to kill me, though can this wait until after I eat, please." Amy commented.

"No." the Amybot replied.

"You're not doing a good impersonation, the real me would have said yes." Amy remarked.

"Your attempt at humor is fail." the Amybot replied in the same cold emotionless voice.

The Amybot then tried to punch Amy because for some reason all it can do is punch. Perhaps it was trained in the art of fighting by the kool aid man. You call this a robot. Anyways Odd was able to pull Amy out of the way before she met the same fate Cyndi did in the last chapter.

"You do not want to get punched by that thing, it can knock you out in just one punch." Odd warned her.

"Then let's get out of here." Amy replied hastily before the two of them ran away from the Amybot which chased after them.

"Foolish humans you can't escape me." the Amybot taunted.


Location) computer room.

"OK the scanners are now safe to use," Jeremie stated.

"Okay lets do this." Ulrich said suddenly.

"Sure, let's go." Aleita added.

"Quit screwing around and start." Jeremie exclaimed exasperated.

After the usual transfer process Aleita, Ulrich and Yumi found themselves in the familiar territory of the mountain region.

(Life point meter activated)

"The tower is to the west, though be careful there's no telling what new tricks XANA has in store for you." Jeremie warned them.

"Don't worry we'll be careful." Aleita stated.

"Odd have you found Amy yet?" Jeremie asked over the phone.

"Yes, though the fake Amy found us." Odd replied.

"And I'm still hungry." Amy added.

Jeremie sighed before saying "Just try to stay alive, Ulrich and Yumi should be able to handle things in Lyoko."


Odd and Amy were still being chased by the Amybot.

"No fair, if you're me you're supposed to be friendly." Amy complained.

"Shut up, you're just being annoying now." the Amybot stated.

Amy then stopped for some reason and held out a hand. For an equally illogical reason the Amybot stopped as well.

"Please tell me you did not hurt any of my friends." Amy told the fake Amy looking her right in the eyes.

The Amybot did not say anything it just used the only attack it's capable of for some unknown reason, it launched a punch at the black haired girl. Odd was once again able to pull her out of the way.

"Cat of ill omen attack directly." he declared menacingly pointing at the robot.

"You're reading the wrong script." the Amybot stated.

"Right. Amy, more running less being stupid." Odd stated before the chase resumed.


Place) back in Lyoko

Ulrich and Yumi were battling a trio of crabs while Aleita was taking cover behind a rock since Aleita actually getting her own attack to use was another thing that didn't happen in "A code Lyoko Novel."

Yumi had managed to defeat the crab she was fighting and didn't take any damage in the process. However the same was not true for Ulrich who had been hit by his foe, though he was facing two crabs not just one.

After blocking some lasers with his sword Ulrich used his special ability to make two clones of himself. All three charged at the crab who was able to shoot down one of the clones which vanished into pixels while the real Ulrich stabbed the crab in the XANA symbol on the top of it's body with his sword.

With the second crab destroyed only one remained however that didn't last very long as Yumi's fan slashed though the crab killing it instantly.

"Great work everyone." Jeremie congratulated them.

"That was hardly a challenge." Ulrich remarked. (70)

"I got a bad feeling about this." Yumi commented uneasily. (100)

"Well, then let's deactivate the tower before anything bad happens." Aleita replied with a smile.

The three of them then made their way towards the tower which was located at the end of a long narrow winding path with nothing but the void on both sides. Though strangely there were no monsters in sight.

Aleita started down the winding path with the computer spotted a monster under the ground, one that Jeremie had no information on, whatever it was XANA had just created it.

"Aleita be careful there's a monster approaching." Jeremie exclaimed. "And it's something we've never seen before."

"I don't see any monsters." Aleita commented as she walked down the narrow winding path. (100)

"It's below you!" Jeremie exclaimed.

Before anyone respond said foe flew out from the void and staring firing round orb shaped attacks at Aleita who ran away towards the others, however it's hard to dodge a swarm of shots you're not looking at and one of the blasts hit Aleita sending her flying towards the others. (Aleita 60 LP)

"Be careful that thing does forty points of damage!" Jeremie exclaimed.

The three of them then looked at their new foe.

This one would have looked like a human if it wasn't for the XANA symbol on her forehead. She wore a simple black dress with a white shirt underneath and her blonde hair looked like it was made out of metal as it was shiny and didn't move at all. She stared at Aleita, Ulrich and Yumi as she floated ten feet above the ground.

"Besides a powerful laser that thing is not too bad." Ulrich commented. (70)

Their foe responded by holding out both her arms and soon the surrounding area became covered in a thick darkness.

"Jeremie, it just covered the surrounding area in darkness. I can barely see five feet in front of me." Aleita gasped. (60)

"You have to defeat it. Though be careful when moving you don't want to fall into the void." Jeremie warned.

For some reason the new foe waited until now to attack, firing the same round projectiles. though now it also fired a laser every now and then as well. thankfully the blast were so bright they could easily be seen, however the only parts of there foe they could see was her hair and the glowing XANA symbol on her forehead.

Yumi and Ulrich had to franticly dodge the bombardment almost getting hit a couple of times, however when Ulrich dodged one of the orbs he moved right into the path of a laser and got knocked down. (Ulrich 30 LP)

"Ulrich you can't take another hit." Jeremie called out concern in his voice.

After blocking some shots with her fan Yumi found an opening and threw her fan at their opponent. her attack zoomed past the various shots and flew though the XANA symbol on the enemy's forehead however it did not explode like the crabs did.

Boss HP 150/200

"You drained one forth of that things life points," Jeremie informed her, hitting the XANA symbol does massive damage however it does not instantly beat this weird foe."

"What are they fighting." Odd asked via his phone

"XANA made something that looks like a girl. Though it flies, fires beams and lasers and has the power of darkness." Jeremie explained.

"What, XANA's attacking them with Rumia!" Odd gasped.

"What's a Rumia?" Jeremie asked.

"Level one boss of touhou six, don't worry she's not that tough." Odd reassured him.

"Odd, this Rumia is in Lyoko and her darkness makes it hard to see where the land ends and the void starts." Jeremie stated.

"Then I guess we got it easy all the Amybot can do is punch. for a super powered robot it's really lame." Odd commented.

As nice as this chatter is this is going nowhere fast, let's just go back to Lyoko so this chapter ends this year.

Ulrich had rushed towards the Rumia based monster before using his super speed to jump into the air and slashing at his foe. If this was not Lyoko he probably would have slashed his foe in half however this is Lyoko so the sword only went though his foe though it did do massive damage. ( XANA's Rumia replica 70/200 HP)

However this ended up being the last move Ulrich got to make as he got blasted by a laser at point blank range before he could get away, out of life points he got devitalized.

"Yumi be careful. the darkness will only go away if you can defeat that Rumia thing. I should have gave Aleita an attack of her own to use, what was I thinking." Jeremie commented.

"I think Odd is right, these attacks look tough though if you pay attention they have an easy to understand pattern." Yumi observed. (100)

Almost as if proving her point Yumi gracefully dodged between the orbs and jumped to the side to avoid and aimed laser before throwing her fan at the Rumia replica however this time it sliced through her stomach and did less damage.

Enemy HP 50/200

"It's down to 50 HP." Jeremie stated.

With the Rumia clone down to only one forth of it's HP it did something Yumi did not expect. it changed it's attack. It was now firing off long rows of round shots that were aimed at Yumi, not a set pattern like before, there was also a set pattern of smaller shots thrown in as well.

Aleita just watched hiding behind some conveniently placed rocks.

"OK, this may be a problem." Yumi commented (100)

Since 90 percent of the last pattern was not aimed the last pattern was easier however this one was mostly aimed shots with a set pattern thrown in which we all know can prove to be a problem if you're not careful. All it takes is one mistake to get blasted and Yumi made such a mistake and got sent flying back. (Yumi 60 LP)

Yumi got back up and took a deep breath, she stared at the shots coming at her and moved out of the way of the aimed shots just barely avoiding crashing into one of the smaller shot in the process.

Yumi took this opportunity to throw her fan which zoomed past all the projectiles and sliced though the XANA symbol draining the last of Rumia's life points however her projectiles did not vanish right away and Yumi got hit again just before the remaining shots vanished and the darkness went away. (Yumi 20 LP)

"good shooting, you scored a direct hit." Jeremie declared happily.

With no monsters left Aleita ran down the winding path which gave little resistance, if the ground gave resistance that would just be silly.

Before long Aleita had entered the code and returned to the past erasing the events of the last few chapters from history. they should have went farther back erasing this entire fanfic from history, however that's a another story. also because of the Amybot's incompetence it wasn't even a threat and Amy and Odd are OK. Cyndi is OK too since her injuries were amazingly non-fatal though in the end they are still in a lousy fanfic so is it really OK. We'll never know that answer to that though as this story is now no more.

Kyon stared blankly at the monitor. 'I read this' he thought as he stared at the story before him. 'And I thought Haruhi's movie was bad, I can't really put to words how I feel about this.' Kyon sighed as he dragged the mouse down to the review button. 'I can't believe I waited over a year for this. Now what should I put' Suddenly the door to the SOS brigade clubroom flung open. None other then Haruhi Suzumiya walked in. she walked right over to him and pulled him right out of the chair.

"Wait a minute, what's this about?" Kyon wondered aloud.

"I've found something strange, so obviously the SOS brigade needs to investigate!" she declared cheerily.

The other club members followed along, Kyon not even getting to start his comment.

The End

Well that's all. good-bye. sorry to anyone that actually enjoyed this, though I think it's best to just put this story down. Unless someone can give me good reason why I shouldn't delete this story it will be terminated in twenty-one days from the posting of this chapter. (that's June 17th, 2011)

Thanks for taking the time to read this story (if you read the whole thing sorry I can't give you your time back).

If you wish to keep reading my work I'm currently writing a Yu-gi-oh GX story and a touhou story that has Suzelina from my original story ending up in Gensokyo. My other side project is a series of short stories about the girls of Touhou.

The series is called Yukari's story book and the first tale is a story about Youmu and Tenshi. I think it turned out quite nice. The second one is in progress now and stars Koakuma and follows her on an interesting day at the Scarlet Devil Mansion. it's my first time writing a story in first person and I hope it turns out well. Well enough ranting top20fan13 signing off.

Random outtake

"OK the scanners are now safe to use." Jeremie stated.

"Okay lets do this." Ulrich said suddenly.

"Sure, let's go." Aleita added.

"Quit screwing around and start." Jeremie exclaimed exasperated.

After the usual transfer process Aleita, Ulrich and Yumi found themselves in familiar territory of the mountain region.

(Life point meter activated)

"The tower is to the west though be careful there's no telling what new tricks XANA has in store for you."

"Just then a giant box with a picture of a white bunny with a bowl of cereal on the front landed on Ulrich killing him instantly. (Ulrich 0 LP)

Said giant box had indeed been a been a box of Trix cereal.

"Machines will never be able to understand humor." Jeremie sighed.