This is my first fanfic so I would love constructive criticism READ AND REVIEW

Chapter 1

Disclaimer: I don't own anything J.K. Rowling does if I did, I would be swimming in a hot tub in my huge bathroom in my glorious mansion…lol

It was the second month of summer of summer break and Hermione was sitting on her queen sized bed staring at her book case. She was looking for a book to read but she had read every book at least fifty times. She started thinking about the summer. What would she do? So far her plans were to sit at home and stare at the wall which was pretty boring.

She usually would go to the burrow but Ron's family went away for the summer well, except for Ron he was home alone for most of the summer. Ginny had gone to Luna's house for the summer His mom had gone to Italy with his dad to spend some time together with out kids around. Fred and George were still working at their shop. She had no clue were Percy was and Bill and Charlie were off working in the United States for the order.

She began thinking of things to do again. She could never go to Harry's house! He still lived at the Dursleys.

Then she thought of it, she would invite both of them to her house! They had never been to her house before. Her parHer parents were home so it was the perfect idea. She was so excited.

Hermione ran down the stairs. She walked in to the kitchen and rushed up to her mom.

"Mom!" Can I PLEASE invite Harry and Ron over for the summer! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE!"

Well I guess its ok as long as you behave because you know how boys your age think! Especially with hormones!

Eww! That's gross I would never do anything like that!

She ran back upstairs to owl them:

Harry,

Hey! I hope you are having a good summer. I was thinking about having you and Ron come over for the summer! Otherwise I'm stuck with my parents all summer! I really hope you can come! I miss you tons!

Hermione

She put it in an envelope and grabbed another piece of parchment and wrote to Ron:

Ron

I was thinking about how you are home alone all summer so I was wondering if you and Harry could spend the rest of the summer at my place. Call your mom and ask her. Tell her that my parents will be home so she won't worry!

Hermione

Again she put the letter in the envelope and sent them off with her new owl.

She looked at the clock which read 9:00 PM it was time to go to bed. She changed into her pink pajamas with purple flowers, brushed her teeth and crawled into bed. She fell asleep instantly as her head hit the pillow.

There's the first chapter tell me if you like it. I didn't spend too much time on it because I can't wait to write the rest of the story. PLEASE REVIEW!