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Chapter 1:

Mulan and Shang were riding through the country side they were on their new assignment. Protect the emperor's daughters while getting them to Kigon. They were riding in front of everyone Mulan and Shang had gotten into a fight. Mulan was shocked Mushu just told her how he tried to get her and Shang apart and thinking the marriage wasn't a good idea.

"I Have to tell Shang I love him" Mulan said as she rode through the rock that kept the roads apart
"Shang" she said

"Wha?" He asked as he looked back at her.

"Ambush" she said as bandits came and grabbed the princesses, Yao, Ling, and Chim po got them free but Princess Mei was being carried off by one of the bandits. Mulan and Shang raced after them on the bridge Shang got Mei lose and Mulan pushed her off the bridge to land into Yao's arms. The bridge was cut by the bandit and Mulan held onto Shang from the rope that was holding them both.

"It won't hold both of us"

"Yes it will it will "Mulan said with tears coming down her cheeks

"Mulan… I'm Sorry" he said as he let go of her hand and let it slip out of her grip.
"SHANG!" SHE SCREAMED

"Mulan take my hand" Ling said he was skinny enough to have the rope hold him and Mulan to get her to safety.

"Ling, Chim po , Yao take care of the princesses let them do what they like they will miss the date of the marriage anyway so it doesn't matter so choose what ever you all want" she said with more tears as she then looked down.

"Mulan No" Ling said

"Ling don't worry I'm following my heart always follow your heart okay tell that to everyone okay"

"Mulan you can tell them yourself okay I don't" he said with tears in his eyes about his friend that was about to kill herself along with her love.

"What's going on?" Chim po asked as he and Yao leaned over to see what's going on

"Hold on Mulan we'll get you back up here."

"No just go okay you guys I'll be okay alright everyone take care of yourself okay" she said with more tears came down her cheek as she then let her hand go limp and she plunged down the cliff just as Shang did.

"MULAN!" they yelled as she fell looking up at them smiling almost as she fell and looked at them. You all are very precious to me but Shang I will not let him die alone he may of died for my sake but… Mulan thought as she looked at the rope in her hands as she let go it broke on her so it didn't even matter. The rope broke anyway it wouldn't matter …Shang wait for me I'm coming she thought as she closed her eyes not being able to see her friends anymore she was very close to land and soon would be with her love.Mulan hit the water so hard it would of knocked her out but the coldness of the water was enough to keep her awake as she laid motionless in the water her head half in the water and half out Shang did you leave me already? She thought as she let her eyes close and fall asleep as the current tore her between rocks, plunged her under the water scraping her back on even more rocks and more.

The next day

Shang pulled himself to shore with what little strength he had left in him as he fought the river trying to survive at least Mulan survived and without another thought he passed out then and there right into the mud.

Back with the group

Everyone was morning the death of the two solders who died everyone held each other the princesses cried and the other soldiers were on the brink of tears but wouldn't show it. They cried in the rain Mushu and Crikee were in Mulans sack crying and Mushu's guilt was heavy on him he pushed them to do that.

Back with Shang

Shang opened his eyes to see a bright blue sky. I'm still alive? Mulan I hope you're safe because I'm coming back for you even if I have to walk on my tired weak legs till the day I die. Shang thought as he stood on his tired, weak legs they were wobbling but he didn't care he had to get back to Mulan tell her that he loved her. He was about to walk away from the river when he heard a slight cry.

"What?" He said as he looked back to the river he didn't see anything. He then looked to the side of the bank where he lay and there was something different there a piece of clothing was there. That's not mine that's a girls kimono piece Shang thought as he picked it up this isn't a girls it's a man's but it doesn't belong to me it's green and white I'm wearing brown…wait Mulan was wearing this kind of material. Oh God Mulan

(:) hey i hoped you like it i know this is my first Mulan fic and it probably is bad but it gets better please read and review i want to know what you think