The End

Hi everyone! I'm so glad you're reading this because I really wanted to say bye! I wanna say I'm glad you all read this story, wow! I never thought I'd get THAT many reviews.

I wanna tell everybody stuff about me before I get into the details of the Careful What You Wish for story. If you have no interest in me, than SKIP THIS PART! FINE, BE THAT WAY!

Yes, I'm just a plain everyday girl, and I had thought of many other things to do other than this story. I had two other stories actually: Kingdom Hearts, Teen Titans, and a DBZ story. All except the DBZ story fell miserably. The DBZ had lots of reviews; from one person. And she eventually stopped reviewing and my story stopped around what I think was chapter 6. I don't know, but that was a LONG time ago!

I go around all typed of Jak and Daxter stories on here. And if you all want, you can refer some to me, and I'd be happy to be a reviewer to you, as you were to me! . I'm not a big fan of XXX-rated stuff though, heh. Not that I couldn't handle the smexy Jak-ness XD lmfao. Just don't try me. But any R-rated blood and guts stuff is fine.

Anyway, I looked into things like Corad and Bijoux's ((hope I spelled that right, lol)) Palace Stories ((HILARIOUS!)) and was very pleased. I found some strange stuff but that was okay. I even read the stuff where they bashed the characters so much, Naughty Dog would explode on impact ((stuff like random jokes of Torn and Jak being gay, rofl)). I'm not a flamer, although I wouldn't quite like it if somebody suddenly began saying how much Jak sucked in an Author's Note. I'm sure nobody here would.

I'm also into stuff like Trigun, Kingdom Hearts, and Fruits Basket. Love it. I beat Kingdom Hearts 1 and 2 already, so there are no spoilers for me! I'm on my second try beating the second one ((DAMN YOU XIGBAR//hits buttons like crazed twin of Charles Manson/)). Mleh, please don't beat me up if you hate Kingdom Hearts 1 or 2…

I listen to music. LOTS. I listen to Techno and emo stuffs. But I especially /heart/ metal and hard-rock. Marilyn Manson, System of a Down, Stonesour, Mudvayne, Slayer and I LOVE SlipKnoT! OMG, I would give the world to see them live!

Anyways, I'm a member on FictionPress, but it looks like my story isn't going so well. Two chapters, zero reviews. Ah well. I think I may just stay here -. Where I belong!

I was just thinking of how lazy I was during this whole thing, and I'll try to drop that 'tude lol. Nobody likes a couch potato ((unless you gotz a laptop! . )). Not even me! I have all sorts of old favorites on here that nobody ever updates. /Sadness/

Other than all that randomness above this, I just wanna say there's nothing out of the ordinary aboutz me! Or at least I hope not…oh well. Except for my ADD. But that's about it.

Oh and BTW, I updated my profile page since it was like year old XD

ABOUT THE STORY:

This story was first inspired around the time it came out. I was so excited about it, I played it for hours at a time, everyday and beat it in, I think about 5 days. I was a little rusty back then. I always act that way with a new game. The scenery and the characters just jumped at me and fascinated me. So why not my own little version?

Kirsten ((the name based off mine)) was perfect for Jak in my mind, and I thought the age difference would add a little twist. It's not like a made Jak have sex with a 12/13 year old :P That's kinda strange. And remember, she HAD to do stuffz with Errol! It was for survival's sake. I'm older than the character and her age will help future events. Maybe they'll get a little more heated some other time in some other story ((wink wink, nudge nudge)) . I didn't even really know Jak's actual age. I guessed around his early twenties or something. But he may be older. But we'll pretend he's not ((Shh!))

Deleted Scenes:

I was thinking about the first chapter and making to where Kirsten actually fell in front of Jak. But then it would be obvious that she was not of Jak's world, and he would've snuck a peak at her ears. Oops!

Later on, after her becoming a Freedom League Guard, I was going to make an affair scene with Torn and Kirsten. But we all know Torn's not like that .

I thought of a verbal fight scene between Kirsten and Ashelin, but I wouldn't ever consider screaming at Ashelin. Too violent.

I really was going to make an intimate scene between her and Jak, but then again, too creepy. Couldn't do that.

That's the only one's I could think of.

At first, I was going to start making answers to questions in my own review section, but nobody goes back to read the reviews :P

I think another thing that would've been appropriate was a death ending, but it was too sad for me, and I'm not too experienced in the whole tragedy thing. Angst maybe, but not tragedy.

I realized how terrible my grammar was back before the 4th chapter or so. Should I edit the first four? You know, the punctuation and spelling and stuff. I understand that most literate readers don't appreciate it, but is it really worth it? You tell me.

I'm sorry if this story was a cliché. I found one self insert within another story. Only difference; it was in Jak 2. And another girl made a self insert based on Jak 3 like three days after I started mine XD I haven't checked how well it went, but I'm too lazy. ((Yep that's me!))

THE FUTURE:

Alright, so I'm gonna take a break from the Jak Fics. I'm gonna work on a Kingdom Hearts II story. If you're interested, add me to your author alert list! I won't be working on anything but KH2 so nothing you wouldn't like would pop up.

And, you guys have been asking for it…..so……I'll make a sequel. A Jak X one! . . Wouldn't that be nice? So if you add me for the KH2 story, then after that's finished, the first chappie of the sequel shall appear! So add meh!

Okie dokie, guys. I'm going. I luffles you all! Keep in touch, I talk through e-mail. Drop by some Jak or KH stories and I'll possibly review! Thank you SOOOOOO much for the reviews!

PEACE:D