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The sun was about setting and the breeze picked up just a little. Boton, Kuwabara,

and Yusuke had found Hiei in a tree and Kurama just below it sitting on a bench.

All of them were just standing there, Yusuke got annoyed. "So what are we waiting

for!" asked/shouted Yusuke, "it's not like we need an

invitation or something, lets go already to meet her or whatever already!"

He crossed his arms and waited for an answer impatiently. Yusuke was about to shout

again when he was interrupted be Hiei, " There is a demon presence, baka". Hiei turned

to glare at him. All of them got in a fighting stance when the presence got closer to them.

A giant scorpion youkai came out of nowhere and surprised Boton, Yusuke, and

Kuwabara. The wind picked up again and had a bad feeling in it. Kurama took a rose out

of his hair, Hiei withdrew his kantana, (sp?)

Yusuke got his hands ready for a sprit gun, and Kuwabara got ready to use his

sprit sword. They stood there waiting for an attack.

Meanwhile


"You know what Koenma ?" Kagome said, "if your other Sprit Detectives don't show up

soon I'm going to leave." Kagome stood up. "Well I don't know what's taking them so

long" Koenma said. Then, suddenly Boton's face appeared on the screen. "Koenma sir,

we are going to be a little late because of a sudden demon escaping the Makai". The the

screen went off. "I guess we'll be waiting a while then," stated Koenma. He turned to

look at Kagome but she was gone.

With Yusuke and the gang

The scorpion demon swung its tail at them.

"Sheesh!"Yusuke yelled, "This damn thing just ain't going down!"

Yusuke tried another sprit gun but it just bounced off like a ball. Hiei kept on swinging

his kantana (sp?), but the outer shell was to hard and of course Kuwabara was knocked

out in one swing by it's tail but didn't get poisoned. Kurama tried to tie the youkai legs

together, but that didn't work either. The scorpion swung the tail at Kurama and cut him

in the chest. It hurt a lot more than it should of for a demon but he remember that

scorpions had a course poison in their tails. The group was about to give up when a black

blur raced by everyone and towards the demon, a speed that could match Hiei's. Before

they could even calculate what had happened just there, the demon fell to the ground and

disingrated(sp?) into dust then blew away in the wind. Everyone turned to look at the

fighter, they only saw a figure in a black cape. Kurama flinched from the pain of the

wound he had. The figured came closer to him and everybody that was awake or could

fight got in a stance just in case the figure attacked Kurama. The figured in the cloak

raised its hand and a small glow came from it. Kurama flinched again. He or she put its

hand on his chest and suddenly the wound was gone. Kurama was going to say

thank you, but it raced off again before they could ask who he or she was.

"Wow, wonder who that was," stated Yusuke.


So anyway how do you like it so far? Oh and the polls are:

Hiei:13

Kurama:8

Yusuke:6

You guys better vote fast! I'm ending it on when I put up the fourth chap you can't vote anymore. So that means vote now and on the third chap cause that's your only chance!