I am trying my hand at poetry again. I know that it probably sucks, but what else can I do? Even if you don't like it, I will still be happy that I tried this.

Searching through the darkness,

Blood covered hands guide my way.

Dead in more ways than one,

I walk the gates of time.

Never sleeping,

Never waking,

Never dreaming.

Never feeling happiness,

No world of hate,

Just sorrow in the soul.

I am darkness,

I am death,

I am rebirth.

A never-ending cycle in the universe,

Never ending,

Never beginning in a dark world.

Am I never meant to have happiness?

Am I to live when no one else does?

This world is just pain,

Just sorrow.

If only I could feel the wonders of the world,

The happiness that lies there.

If only I could feel this one feeling,

Not in your world,

But in mine.

Am I a pawn for Destiny,

For Fate and Chance?

Always there,

Yet never there at all.

Why must I bare this power,

This pain,

This life and the next?

If only I could end it.

Stop my suffering,

And let it be the beginning of yours.

I will always live this lie,

Yet never live it at all…

Please review this poem. I have written one other poem, but I think that this one is better. Even if you don't like it, I still would like a review. Last but not least, will someone please give me some tips on poetry!