Ok this is my first fan fic so please don't yell at me. And please no big flames.
Disclaimer: I don't own the anime card captor's sakura CLAMP owns it!
Ok here are some things you should know:
Italics- thinking
"Quotes"- saying
-Scene- A new scene or time
(a/n) – Author's notes
Sakura was crying, her tear fell like a ever flowing waterfall. " Sakura, its ok u will get over him, don't cry" whispered Madison. "B-b-but I can't believe it" stammered Sakura. I loved him, why didn't he love me back?
-Scene Change-
Madison walked out sakura's house with fury inside. All this time Shoaran loved sakura and now she confessed her feelings he dumped her? "UGH" said Madison. She walked home. She couldn't even talk to that idiot because he went to the airport to go back to Hong Kong. "Eli is such an idiot" whispered Madison under her breath. He just left with Shoaran, (he had broken up with her too) they didn't even say good bye.
-8 Years Later-
(A/n everyone is 18 like sakura, shoaran, Madison and Eli though Tori is 21)
"Madison!" screamed Sakura happily. "Grandpa invited me and you to Hong Kong for Vacation" said Sakura. (a/n ok so I don't know if she has a grandpa but i'm making all this up so bear with me!) "Really, cool! OMG lets get packing" cried Madison. "Yeah we are leaving today!" said Sakura. "WHAT" screamed Madison as she ran to her house to pack.
After getting packed sakura and Madison headed towards Tori's car. " Have Fun tweerps" said Tori. "We are NOT Tweerps" yelled Sakura angrily as she stomped his foot. He winced with pain. Sakura's father wished them both good bye. "Airline 206, going to Hong Kong" "That's us" smiled Madison. "BYE TORI!" said Sakura. "Make sure this time u leave a air hole for me" said a voice coming from Sakura's purse. "All right Kero" said Sakura silently.
-Shoaran's House-
"Li, GET UP" scream a voice. "uh" mumbled Li. He hated it when his mother would tell his sisters to wake him up. "Good Morning Mister Li" Said wei, his butler. "AHH, good morning wei." said Li. He looked at the picture beside him, it was sakura, and he remembered the day he broke up with her. Why wasI so stupid?
-Air Port-
"Miss Avalon, is that you?" said the driver outside the airport. "Nee kun!"(a/n ok don't kill me about the name k?) cried Sakura as she hugged him. "How are you, how is grand pa, are you and everyone taking care?" asked sakura quickly. "Yes" smiled Nee Kun. "This is my best friend Madison" said Sakura with a smile. "Hello" said nee kun and bowed. "Hello" smiled Madison. The went inside the limo. "Ahh, I can't wait to get to Grandpa's house" smiled Sakura. "We are here" said Nee "Kun. Sakura jumped out the limo. "Wow" she cried.
-The house-
The mansion was HUGE. It was marble white and looked so pure. She and Madison walked to the front door. DING DONG "Are you sakura?" cried the maid. Sakura nodded. "OH I missed u" "I missed u too" said Sakura hugging her. "Madison? Wow you 2 have changed." said the Maid. "Come in!" The servants busily took Madison and sakura's suitcases. "Grandpa" smiled Sakura. "Is that really you sakura?" Asked a old man. He wore a black suit with white shirt and had black hair with a few grey outlines. "Yup, it's me!" smiled Sakura. "Oh and Madison you have changed so!" smiled sakura's grandpa. "Thank u" said Madison cheerfully. "Well your rooms are upstairs, I have to go to work" said Grandpa. "ok. bye" and sakura hugged him. "Wow, look sakura how big this is!" said Madison." I know!" said Sakura. Madison's room was covered with a light lavender wallpaper, with matching everything. A door was closed, Madison opened it and gasped. "What is it?" sakura asked. Madison had her own personal bathroom with EVERYTHING the same colour as the wallpaper, including the bathtub! They walked out and noticed another door. They opened it. it was sakura's room, exactly like Madison's except in pink. "This is sooo cool now we can talk to each other secretly!" said Sakura. "And I can videotape u all the time" smile Madison. Sakura had a huge anime sweat drop.
-Li's House-
"My dear descendent, how are you?" smiled Eli. "Stop calling me that." said Li angrily. "now, now why in such a bad mood?" said Eli. "you are in one 2 aren't u?" said Li now turning towards him. "yup I am" sighed Eli. They sat on his bed. "I can't believe I left Madison/Sakura!" said them both in unison except Eli said Madison and Li said sakura. Yelan happened to walk by and hear this.
-Grandpa's house-
"Sorry miss, but your grandfather wants both of you to get ready because of the ball tonight" said the maid. "A ball?" screamed Madison. "I have to make new dresses for you Sakura, oh and a matching purse" said Madison. Sakura sweat dropped. "Um, its ok" said Sakura. "Nonsense, the most beautiful girl must wear the most beautiful dress no?" asked Madison. Sakura blushed, "I am not beautiful you are!" said Sakura. It was true Madison's hair grew a bit longer and she grew taller and more beautiful. Sakura looked even more beautiful, if it was possible and had her auburn hair flow down to her waist, her emerald eyes seemed to twinkle always. She was slender and still her cheery athletic self."Oi I shall wonder if I shall me my Prince Charming at the dance!" said Sakura dreamily. "yup and I will be there to videotape it too" said Madison smiling. Sakura did an anime fall!
-Li's House-
"Li oh my gosh there is going to be a dance and we can hook u up with the girls there" squealed Li's sisters. "Ugh I don't want to be set up with NO ONE" yelled Li on the top of his lungs. His sisters had already left.
-In Yelan's room-
"There is no need to 'hook' him up with any girl, I am pretty sure the card mistress herself will be coming.." said Yelan with a small smile. "Really" squealed the girls. "isnt she that cute little girl that came once in the spring break?" asked Futtie (a/n I don't know the Li sister's name so I am making it all up) "AWW" said Fetia "We can watch them dance" . "Of course Eli and Madison too" said Yelan. "KAWAII" said the girls together.
Ok so far what do you think? I know it's not good but hey be nice. And please leave reviews, I need some ideas! And it doesn't take long to write a small review!