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Ta-Da! The incredible, astonishing, final installment of "Shattered!"- entitled-
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"Batman bites!"
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From the diary of Koriand'r: Earth date June 1, 2004. Page 21 of daily entry
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Robin-love watched TV with me when we got back home. He even held my hand! But he told me that he did not want to go to my room with me. Beastboy and Cyborg thought that to be very funny for some reason. I asked Robin why he did not want to be alone with me in my room, and he started talking confusedly again. So I asked him what he thought about my lost love Raven dearest going on a date with that horrible bat-man. I think Robin likes talking about the bat-man, because he began speaking with much more confidence then. He told me that bat-man has 'histories' with many women, and is never serious. But he also said that he had never seen Mr. bat-man-horrible-glarthog 'fall' with a girl so fast before. (I added the horrible-glarthog part, Robin did not say those words.)
Since Robin did not want to go upstairs, I asked him if he would help me with my confusions. I told him that I was very conflicted with my feelings for him and for poor Raven. I thought that Raven loved me, but she made me date Robin and then left me for the awful bat-man krellbag. Then I explained to Robin that I always wished to love him, because he is so handsome and brave, but he is still not wishing to love me completely. He had not much to say. So I cried, and went to my room.
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Entry from the diary of Ri'is al Tri'vinthos entan Ki'in June 1, 2004.
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Time with Batman was very interesting…
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From the diary of Koriand'r: Earth date June 1, 2004. Page 23 of daily entry
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Friend Beastboy came to my room. He is so nice sometimes, even though everyone thinks he is dumb. Maybe Robin does not love me because I am dumb too. Beastboy asked if I would like to talk. I told him everything. I had to keep waking him up. But he was very nice, and told me he was not falling asleep because I bored him. He said he was very tired from thinking so much. He told me that Robin is stupid not to love me, because I am very special. That made me feel nice, but it still did not help me with my problem…
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Entry from the diary of Ri'is al Tri'vinthos entan Ki'in June 1, 2004.
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…fascinating man, but he is even more disturbed than his 'protégé.' Now I know where Robin gets it. He wanted to talk about me, but wouldn't say anything about himself…
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From the diary of Koriand'r: Earth date June 1, 2004. Page 24 of daily entry
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Beastboy made me promise not to go back to Tamarand. He said that I would surely find love on Earth, even if it is not with Robin or Raven. I asked him if he wished to be my boyfriend. He thanked me many times, but said that he was too afraid of what Robin and Raven might do…
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From the diary of Koriand'r: Earth date June 1, 2004. Page 28 of daily entry
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…then Cyborg said that he was very flattered, and that I am wonderful and that he already 'loves me as his sister,' but he was afraid of Robin and Raven. I do not understand. Robin does not scare me. Raven does, but only when she is angriest. And why would they have jealousies of me with another friend, when they wish not to be with me?
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Entry from the diary of Ri'is al Tri'vinthos entan Ki'in June 1, 2004.
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…talking about our adventures, when I made the big mistake of telling him about Slade. He seems now to be far more 'fascinated' with Slade than he is in me. At that point, I started thinking some very evil thoughts concerning Batman, but I don't want to make Robin cry…
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From the diary of Koriand'r: Earth date June 1, 2004. Page 32 of daily entry
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…getting late. I must talk to Raven, even if she does love the horrid bat-nithrat. I think she is still my best friend on all of the universe, even if she does not love me anymore. She is the only one who really understands…
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Entry from the diary of Ri'is al Tri'vinthos entan Ki'in June 1, 2004.
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…talking about our adventures. Then I made the huge mistake of telling him about Slade. It seems that Batman finds Slade even more 'fascinating' than he does me…
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Entry from the diary of Ri'is al Tri'vinthos entan Ki'in June 1, 2004.
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…home to the tower. Went to my room secretly-needed time to think. Realize now that forcing Kori onto Robin was a big mistake. Even Bigger mistake for me to go on a 'date' with Batman. What happened to me? I used to be logical, and in control. I think I know where this is going. Need to 'consult' the mirror-again. This is getting to be waaay too much of a habit…
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From the diary of Koriand'r: Earth date June 1, 2004. Page 35 of daily entry
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…did not see friend Raven, but the horrid bat-monster came to the tower. He insisted that he must talk to Robin most hurriedly. I told the plarga-eater to go look in the gym…
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Entry from the diary of Ri'is al Tri'vinthos entan Ki'in June 1, 2004.
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Big surprise. Hate and despair were pretty good with the way things were going. But Happy and Love tackled me, and made me promise to do everything I could to make good with Kori. Booyah said that she should kick my ass, but deferred to timid, who is miserable. I have to talk to Kori right away, before things in my head get really ugly. This could really suck…
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From the diary of Koriand'r: Earth date June 1, 2004. Page 42 of daily entry
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…Raven came downstairs. I did not even know she was home! She asked me very nicely if we could go to my room to talk. I told her that I did not wish to have 'mindless-monkey-sex' with her because I was very angry with her. Her eyes got very big, then, and her mouth hung open very far. She started to have her talking-unclearly problem again, but she took a few breaths with her eyes closed, and promised me that she did not want to have sex with me…
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Entry from the diary of Ri'is al Tri'vinthos entan Ki'in June 1, 2004.
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…don't know where the hell she heard that from. I was so taken aback that I had to meditate for a few seconds before I could even talk without stuttering. Well, at least she seems to know what her priorities are…
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From the diary of Koriand'r: Earth date June 1, 2004. Page 45 of daily entry
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We had a very long talk. It was nice to know that Ri'is Ki'in-darling-dearest was truly sorry for the breaking of my heart. I told her that I needed to know I could trust her again before we were to make love again. She agreed, very sadly. She told me that if I really wanted to know her true feelings, there was a way…
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Entry from the diary of Ri'is al Tri'vinthos entan Ki'in June 1, 2004.
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…begged her to forgive my stupidity. Stupid jealousy! She said she wanted to really know-so I told her about the mirror. So relieved that she decided against that…
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From the diary of Koriand'r: Earth date June 1, 2004. Page 47 of daily entry
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I felt better after our nice talk. I think that Ri'is-sweetest really is sorry, and still loves me. I know I still love her. We went downstairs together to make some tea with mustard (not Raven-just me) (the mustard, that is.) Robin and Batman were sitting at Robin's computer-of-crime. While Raven and I made our teas, all the bat-man and Robin talked about was Slade. Raven said 'this figures.' I am not sure I understand what she meant by that, but I agree that Robin seems happier with Slade and his computer than with me.
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Entry from the diary of Ri'is al Tri'vinthos entan Ki'in June 1, 2004.
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..seems much happier with Slade and Robin than with me. Robin got up and stretched, saying that he was hungry. Batman suggested that they go to a quiet restaurant he knows, so they could continue their conversation about Slade…
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From the diary of Koriand'r: Earth date June 1, 2004. Page 48 of daily entry
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Then the Bat-man put his arm around friend Robin, and they left, to continue talking about finding Slade. They looked very happy together…
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