Hello my loyal fans...I know...it's been awhile...butI still live! Contrary to popular belief, I am not dead! Aren't you all excited!

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...Ahem. So, anywho, I hope no one has forgotten my masterpiece in the making. . It's getting better...lol...


Jack breathed a sigh of relief, sinking back into the co-pilot's chair. She was finally leaving the planet she had been practically imprisoned on for five years. Finally, Riddick was taking her with him.

Riddick set course for a solar system about a month away; a place they could hide out for awhile. He slid his goggles off and unstrapped himself from the pilot's chair, going over to Jack.

Looking up at him with tired but relieved eyes, she could see he still Maybe even worried about her.

'I'M FINE!' she wanted to scream. But she settled for another sigh, this one more weary than relieved.

"Jack."

"Hmm?" she said, closing her eyes and pulling her knees up to her chest. She was so…drained.

"I'm not carrying you to your bed, so keep your ass awake."

Wow. So much for the concern.

Jack's eyes snapped open.

"I wasn't falling asleep," She told him, lamely, " I was just…resting my eyes." She stood up and stretched, yawning as she did so.

" Uh-huh. Sure you weren't. Now come on, let me give you the grand tour. Then you can go to sleep." He walked out the door to the navigational bay, and the sliding door slid shut behind him.

Jack groaned and slumped back into the chair. "Why can't I just sleep now?" she said to herself. 'stupid guys and their stupid obsession with mechanics...'

The doors slid open again, and Jack could hear Riddick's footsteps coming up behind her. He grabbed her chair and swiveled it around. Leaning in, he leveled eyes with her. Jack's eyes were open wide in surprise at his sudden closeness.

"Are you coming or not?" he murmured to her. Jack visibly gulped and nodded her head. "Good." He turned and walked to the door, waiting for Jack to get up and follow.

Jack stood slowly and walked over to him, her bare feet making no sound on the floor. She could tell Riddick was watching her, without even looking at him. She walked up to him, closer and closer until she was within inches of touching him. 'Oh we can play these games...'

Riddick growled at her brazen approach and resisted the urge to touch her. 'Down boy. She's just a kid.' But in his head, she was never a kid. Kids don't survive what Jack has had to. T2 wasn't a place any kid would have survived. But then again, not many people would. No, Jack was special. Different. Her will to live use to astounded even him. And now, at almost 18 years of age, Jack's will had begun to fade. But he would fix that. With time.

Jack couldn't believe what she was doing, but she couldn't just chicken out now. She leaned in even closer still, not touching him, but just by centimeters now.

"Well?" she whispered seductively in his ear, " Am I going to get the grand tour?" She was beside him now, and he watched her from his periphereal vision.

" Jack..." he growled in warning. ' God, she smells so damn good...'

"Yes?" she chirped innocently.

"Are you forgetting...who your dealing with..." he ground out. The things she was doing to him...and she had no idea.

Jack was being wicked. And she knew it. But the best part is, wicked is what she likes best.

"Nope..." she whispered, so close to his ear that he could feel her breath. She trailed a finger along his shoulder blade.

He exploded.

Riddick whirled around and before she could blink she was pinned against the steel wall. He pressed himself closer to her, his right knee between her legs and his face buried in the nape of her neck.

Jack gasped audibly, suprised at the sudden turn of events. 'Oh god...breathe...don't forget to breathe...air is needed...oh dear god...'

"Are you sure you remember who your dealing with?" he said, huskily. His hands suddenly found themselves elsewhere...almost everywhere actually. Along her sides...feeling the slight ridges of each seperate rib. Jack's heart was beating so fast...she wondered if he could hear it. Her world was pure bliss. Riddick continued his actions, as if to see how far she would let him go. His hands slid up her arms...hesitating in a forbidden area and then sliding elswhere...down to her hips...with no sign of stopping his descent...

And Jack exploded.

Her eyes shot wide open and she moved away from him with cat like speed. She turned from him, rubbing the back of her neck.

"Uh...so about that tour..."

" Yeah...come on, we'll start in the mess hall." he said, and walked out the door. Jack suddenly envied his ability to act as though nothing...out of the ordinary... happens. She put a hand to her burning face...oh yeah. Deffinitely envied it.

She followed after him with shaky legs, making their way to the mess hall. It was different than she expected it to be. It looked normal, for one thing. Jack had been on very few ships before and none as big as this. It wasn't the most glamorous of ships, but it was big.

"Riddick...why did you get something so big?" she asked, referring to the ship, after he had just showed her the padded gym, which was huge.

Riddick didn't answer for a good minute or so, and she wondered if he had heard her.

" For a few different reasons. One, the mercs will be expecting me to be travelling in something small and unnoticable. Second, because I felt like it. Here, this is your room." He placed his hand on the panel beside the door and it slid open. The open doorway showed nothing but inky blackness, and Riddick walked right in.

Jack hesitated. She could see his silvery eyes shine in the darkness.

"Whats the matter Jack? You scared of the dark?" he teased. Jack rolled her eyes. She stepped forward and was plunged into his element. Did I mention she couldn't see her fingers in front of her face? As soon as she stepped inside, Riddick placed his hand on the panel inside the room and the door slid shut.

" Riddick?" Jack walked slowly towards what she thought would be the center of the room. She brushed against Riddick and he moved away, smirking. This was his favorite game.

Jack nearly fell backwards in her attempt to escape a Riddick who was already on the other side of the room. She slowly moved forward, trying to slow her racing heart.

A handwas suddenly placed on her neck, and she shuddered but couldn't find the motive to move. (AN: lol...hmmm...i'm being brushed up against in the dark by riddick...am I supposed to flee?) He stood behind her and he could hear her heart pounding.

"Jack, you seem...skittish." he smirked. She could only whimper in reply. She was scared. She was aroused beyond belief. She was tired.

"Evil bastard..." she muttered, his body closing the space between them. Her eyelids slid shut, giving in to thebliss.His hand slid from her shoulders down to her hips, and he stroked her stomach lightly with his fingertips.

He chuckled soflty.

"So, is this a good enough...tour...for you?" His hands rose to just below her breasts. There was a sharp intake of breath.

"Goddamn evil bastard..."


And I will end it there. lol...this only took me...oh lets see...whenever the last time i updated was...until now. lol...school sucks. not having a computer sucks. Not having a computer for summer really sucks. :wails piteously:

please review...tell me how you think it's going. Pweeezz? Again, flames are welcome. not really encouraged...but accepted. .

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