0.O wah WAH! ARIAGATO GOZAIMAS ARIAGATO ARIAGATO! Hehe you guyz really brighten up my day haha. U reviewers are so nice D
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What Happens To A Fallen Angel – sorry if it was disturbing the kissing part lol. My friend is also a writer in fanfics and she loves to read parts with heavy snogging. HAhA. Lol. She wanted it to look very un-PGish. HAHAH. So I changed it to PG-13 hehehehe!
anonymous – hehe it does sound like hot gimmick hehe. The plot is kindaishly from Hot Gimmick heheheh. But most of the things that happen in the story is my own creation. MUHAHAHAH hehe. (and I HAD to put the Station part, where they have their first kiss. COS ITS SO SWEET I CUDNT MISS IT OUT)
kawaiiseeker987 – HAHA. It took me a while to finish reading your 'PLS UPDATE' review hahahah very fun. I love spamming too. Pity that not much ppl do. But I LIKE IT heheh!
Starry Sun - hahah thx a bunch for the long review! Cheers lol u like my name XD lolx (embarrassed) umm I tend to like shiny things hahaha. Anywayz I will try my best to make things a little more 'hot' between sakura and syaoran hehehehe
umm btw ppl…I have a question…Im kinda new in fanfiction dot net. So Im not sure. When ppl give me ther email…what am I suppose to give them? Im confused. They tell me to send something but Im not sure what haha. Can someone explain to me. Cos ppl tel me ther emails, and I feel guilty for not answering them back. Sorry sorry sorry. T.T (this is my first fanfic. T.T)
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Hehe. Im sorry Im a cruel person MUHAHHA. I am not going to start the story with Sakura's thoughts. Actually, Im gonna start with Eriol's thoughts o.O hahhaha ;P
Someone once told me that, if you write a chapter, and then the next chapter is just the continuous of the last, it can get very boring.
When a story has many different stories and POVs that are different but still connected in a way that can explain the plot, can make a brilliant fiction. (Has anyone read Louis Sacher's 'Holes' Its VERY good.) That's what I am trying to do. T.T so forgive me if you hoped for Sakura's POV. Sakura's thoughts and emotions will be explained though.
OH and I did a slight .. ok fine.. BIG change with ShunHei Wong. You'll see.
And…um this chapter is also short.. cos I'm currently doing 5 fanfictions at the same time haha. Sorry.. Gomen Nasai! It's quite boring too haha.
Chapter 14
Perfect
'Are you an Angel?'
Her smooth ebony hair swayed with the wind, guiding my eyes back and forth as her hair followed the breeze. Her laughter is ringing in my ears as it fills my very conscience.
I watch her shiver from the breeze, and I have an urge to wrap my arms around her, and keep her protected from the cold. Such delicate pale skin she has. Such seductive.
She proves the world that there actually is someone who is absolutely perfect.
She is perfect.
…….and me? I am a wreck.
Once I had thought myself as perfect. I mean, I didn't have any flaws. I mean I'm clever, I know that; I've got lots of friends; I am pro at any sport, including skiing; I'm gentlemanly, for the sake of my woman; I have great manners; I am polite to my peers; so what makes me not-perfect?
Well…Her.
You are an angel.
The actual proof that there is a flaw in my life; that there is someone who is absolutely more perfect than I can ever be.
Daidouji Tomoyo.
I don't want to admit it…but she is the most beautiful person I've ever seen. Much more beautiful than I am.
I wonder since when had she become so important to me. Was it first sight? The first day I kissed her hand in polite? Was it the first day you smiled at me thankfully when I helped you carry your books? Or…or…that first day I saw you cry…
Flashback
"Sorry…Eriol-kun… haha….I shouldn't be crying like this in front of you. I'm so stupid… Sorry…I..I'll go now.." Tomoyo slowly lifted her weak body up, as she rubbed her eyes roughly, trying to get rid of her tears. "Wait." With that simple word, Tomoyo found herself wrapped in between two steady arms.
"E-Eriol?"
End of Flashback
As I watch her smiling, small parts of me hope that she would be staring back at me…but…
Tomoyo Daidouji…you're also the most hard-to-read person. You hide yourself so well, that no one can read your mind. Like me...So much like me.
So much like me, that now I can read beyond your actions…because they are so similar to mine. So much like me that I can see that you are also loving and caring for someone; so much like me that I can see that you are also hurt; so much like me that you also see someone as perfect. So much like me that I can see who you are protecting…
Sakura Kinomoto.
Is she why you won't accept me?
You can see too can't you? That Sakura is already protected by someone else…If only you gave me the chance.
I am currently jumping on my bed, as I bite my lips harder and harderWhy can't I stop crying? What are these tears for anyways… I can't stop them. They just keep on flowing and flowing. Why should I cry? I know I'm crying because of that jerk… I shouldn't be. He doesn't deserve it. He would love to see me cry I bet. If I cry I'm just making him more satisfied… and why is it so hot here? God…my face is turning all red! Ooooooo…like a to-ma-to….ooooooooooo…hehe um I MEAN-HMPH. How dare he kiss me. I know he is teasing me…
But…more than that…Why did he kiss me anyways? Was he trying to make me one of his obnoxious fans, thinking that I will fall for him just because of a stupid insignificant kiss?
Well that means he must have kissed every fan in his fanclub of his huh?
FINE. I don't care. I ain't gonna be one of those hopeless fans of his. HMPH. I don't care if he goes around kissing everyone! I DON'T CARE! ARGH IM NOT ANGRY!
AHH I bet he is trying to make me like him, and then going to treat me like a slave, and then force me to buy his lunch, and then carry his books..and then..and then.. and then and then AHHHH
(-.-;; she is angry.)
A minute of pouting later, Sakura noticed that all her tears were gone. Sakura stopped and blinked innocently , as she scratched her head in confusion "um…why was I crying again?…I forgot…hehe who cares I'm hungry...ONI SAAAAAAAAN!"
(-.-;; haha typical of Sakura)
Tomoyo POV
I watched as Sakura started to bite her lips again, and touch her lips now and then. Actually, I'm quite sure what she's thinking about. I was so stupid to not notice it before.
Syaoran Li.
The boy who obviously had already taken Sakura's heart, which I'm sure Sakura-chan hasn't realized. The boy who I am letting Sakura go to…I am willing to let Sakura go…if she's happy. I know she will be happy with that boy… Hiragizawa Eriol's friend… Eriol…
Flashback
"Sorry...Eriol-kun I'm in love with someone else…Besides…Eriol, you deserve someone better anyways. I mean, your good-looking, you're clever, you're gentlemanly, haha you're perfect for anyone! Haha I bet any girl would be willing to be in your arms."
End of Flashback
I knew that my hidden affections were useless since a long time ago. Before Syaoran Li and Sakura even met each other, I had that feeling that sparks would fly. That's why I won't let anything go between them… Which means I'll have to make things straight with ShunHei Wong… make sure that guy don't interfere.
"TOMOYO CHAN! IM HUNGRY. HEHEHEEEHE" haha its so typical of Sakura to
"Syaoran Li!" Syaoran heard his name being called from a distance, as he was heading for his locker. He turned his head towards the owner of the voice, a long ebony haired girl, who he was sure he has seen before… But where? "Good Morning. I don't think you remember who I am, but I'm Tomoyo Daidouji, Sakura's friend." Syaoran's attention went all to Tomoyo, as she mentioned Sakura's name. Tomoyo noticed that and smiled to herself. 'ah…I remember, Sakura's friend…hey wait…her name is Tomoyo Daidouji…then isn't it that girl, that Hiragizawa…ahh whatever.' Syaoran's eyes were empty from deep thought.
"umm Syaoran Li? Well, I came to do some business with you." Syaoran cocked a brow, he clearly got the wrong idea. Tomoyo reached up, and put her hands around his ears, to whisper. "Li-kun you like Sakura-chan right? I can help you…."
oh yea. THIS IS WAT A EDIT! i edited this chapter because of such really umm how u say... 'overeactive' parts hahahah
so here ya go yall.