A/N: ok people here is the first chapter ok hope you like it and even if you don't please review it means a lot to me ok um ok I had a hard time coming up with the title for this chapter but I think it fits the chapter just fine. Oh and ideas and suggestions are welcome, and if there's something you don't like please tell me because I would like to improve in writing for future chapters and stories. Flames are always welcome but don't be to harsh this is my first fic. Ok well enough babbling from me on with the story oh and before I forget,...
Disclaimer: I do not own the adorable hanyou we all love (got to love those ears)
Pronunciation: Nazuyu (Naw zoo you)
Chapter 1
Painful Awakening
"Hey im Naraku what's yours sweet thang?" a handsome young man said form his seat in the bar.
"Nazuyu, what's it to you?" she smiled back.
"Well its just I was walking by and I saw you and I thought that I had walked straight into heaven," he told her his lame pick up line.
"Well thanks for the compliment but, I'm here with someone," she said turning around.
"Oh no your not I saw you walk in here with only your self and if you are where is this guy shouldn't he be next to you defending you from guys like me?" he asked smirking.
"Well he's in the bathroom at the moment," she said trying to cover her up.
"No he's not there aint no one in that restroom at the moment cause its getting cleaned," his smirk could not get any wider as he saw her cave in and look at him in defeat.
"So what do you want?" she asked.
"One dance with you," he told her as she took his hand as they walked off to the dance floor.
TIME CHANGE
Nazuyu and Naraku walked up to Nazuyu's apartment. Well it was kind of hard since they were making out the whole way up the stairs and her legs were rapped around his waste as he was carrying her up the stairs to her room number.
They stood at her door but didn't stop there. They were in the same position her against the wall right outside of her door. No intensions of going in right away.
She got off of him and tried to stop kissing him but it was like she was magnetically stuck to his lips.
"I—have—to—go," she said each time they broke to breath.
"Come we have been going out for two months cant you invite me in?" he asked her giving him her best puppy dog look.
"Oh you know I want to but its late--," she started but he plunged in and swiped her up in a deep kiss.
"Then lets wake up the neighbors," he said as they both started laughing seductively.
"Ok," she said as she unlocked the door and they went inside to 'wake up the neighbors'. As they called it.
TIME CHANGE
"Do you Nazuyu Takanashi take Naraku Higurashi to be your husband for better or worse through sickness and in heath or forever hold your peace?" the pastor called out from the stand.
"I do," Nazuyu replied.
"And you Naraku Higurashi do you take Nazuyu Takanashi to be your lawful wedded wife, for better or worse, through sickness and in heath or forever hold your peace?" the pastor asked again.
"I do," Naraku said as he smiled at his bride.
"Then you may kiss the bride," the pastor said as the whole church fell out in 'awws' as they kissed under the alter.
TIME CAHNGE AGAIN
"AHH HURRY UP CANT YOU DRIVE ANY FASTER!" Nazuyu screamed from the passenger seat.
"I'm trying to hunny just breath," Naraku tried to calm his wife down.
"I'VE BEEN BREATHING FOR THE PASSED NINE MONTHS NOW HURRY YOUR FUCKING ASS UP BEFORE THIS BABY COMES OUT RIGHT HERE IN THIS CAR," she screamed as she had another contraction.
"Ok im going dear im going as fast as I can just try and calm down were almost there," he said wishing his wife would shut up.
"OK WELL I'M NOT VERY COMFORTABLE RIGHT AT THE MOMENT AND IF YOU WERE THERE WHEN MY WATER BROKE AND NOT WITH THE GUYS WE COULD HAVE BEEN THERE ALREADY," she screamed as she had yet another contraction.
"I'm sorry I got there as soon as I could, finally were there now come on get ready to get out once I find a parking spot, oh good there's one in the front," Naraku parked and helped his wife out as he walked as fast as he could with her into the hospital.
"Hello nurse my wife is going into labor can we please get a doctor," he asked the nurse at the front.
"Right away," the nurse ran off.
6 HOURSE LATER AND A LOT OF SCREAMING
"Doctor what's wrong with my wife?" Naraku said as he had nurses pull him out of the delivery room.
"Mr. Higurashi I need to talk to you," the doctor said.
"What!" he yelled he just wanted to see his wife.
"Your wife is having some delivery problems uh the baby has turned it self around and we have to go in through a C-section and one of them might not make it so if that does come to would you rather us save your wife or your child?" the doctor asked him.
Naraku was shocked. They had done everything right why had this happened to them?
"I think you should talk to my wife about this," he said still shocked.
"She said if we have to then she want to save her baby," the doctor looked at him for his answer.
"I wouldn't want to go against her wishes," he said as he sat down in the waiting room.
2 hours after the baby was born
Beep beep beep beep beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep
"Were losing her doctor," one nurse yelled.
"Get the heavy equipment were not going to lose her," the doctor yelled as he shocked her again.
Beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep
"We lost her doctor she's gone," the nurse whispered as they covered Nazuyu's body with a white cloth.
The doctor went out and told Naraku the news. He had held the doctor by the throat but let him go and then break down in tears.
A while after he looked in the nursery window at his baby girl.
"I will name you Kagome, that's the name she always wanted to name her first baby girl," Naraku told the baby behind the glass.
When they got home that day Naraku put Kagome down and cried again.
"If only she had let you die then she would still be here, you little nuisance its all your fault, you'll never be happy because you took the only thing that made me happy away from me," he yelled at baby Kagome and dropped her in the crib he had bought with his wife.
Kagome started crying for the first time but not the last in a long shot. No one was going to pick her up. Shush her too sleep saying it was ok. No one was there to make Kagome happy and there would never be as long as her dad lived.
And with that Naraku Higurashi walked out of that house and into the first drunken madness out of what would be Kagome's life.
5 YEARS LATER
Kagome woke up at seven o'clock in the morning. She tried to get up but she couldn't get up because of all of the cuts and bruises that ran all over her body. If your wondering how she got those bruises its not because of playing out side. Kagome wasn't allowed to go outside nor did she have any friends.
Don't get me wrong Kagome was a very pretty girl she has very long raven black hair. Anyone who stayed 5 minutes in a room with her would grow to love her because she has such a bright personality. She got those bruises from her father Naraku Higurashi.
"I better get up before daddy comes up here," she said as she tried to get up from her bed.
Kagome looked over to her mirror and saw that she was hurt really bad. Oh well I guess ill just have to be careful next time I want to ask for food," she said as she sat down in her little rocking chair.
Kagome soon fell asleep there where she was sitting. She had, had a long night and wanted to get some more rest. Not like she had anything better to do. Her dad would not let her outside, she didn't have any friends, so why not sleep?
Ok this is a improvement from the other 1st chapter and I think its WAY better and ask ne one that read it before you'll be glad I changed it lol. This one explains more of how much Naraku loved Kagome's mom. And how she died. Yeah ok now im going to work on the next chapter im improving It without taking it completely off cause I don't have most of the chapters saved lol. YAY!