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Current Time and Date: February 3, 2005
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Chapter 26: White Day
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Naraku grinned at the helpless dog demon that stood before him. Couldn't this hanyou just accept his demise?
All for the love of one person.
Pathetic…
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Sango filled a bucket of water in the kitchen. She then approached the sleeping Kikyou. "Sorry Kikyou," she whispered. "But there's not time to waste." and She tossed the water all over Kikyou's lifeless body, utterly soaking the priestess.
Kikyou sat up abruptly, water flinging from her damp hair. Her almond eyes traveled across the room and fell upon the demon exterminator. "Taijiya…" Kikyou looked down at her clothes. "Why am I wet?"
"I freed you from your bottle, then I dumped water on you to wake you," Sango explained. Then something tugged at Sango's mind playfully and a grin flickered across her face. "Kikyou, do I get three wishes since I freed you?"
Kikyou frowned at Sango, not answering the question, and simply asked her, "Is InuYasha here?"
"Well…not in this household. He's fighting Naraku outside right now," Sango replied sadly. "Miroku is here with us too. I was hoping you could help InuYasha in finding a weak spot."
Kikyou shook her head bitterly. "No, Naraku has none. He has no weaknesses. There is only one person who can stop Naraku."
"Oh?" Sango stared at her. "Who's that?"
Kikyou smiled knowingly up at Sango. "Think, Sango. What is the thing Naraku wants to kill?"
Sango chewed her lip anxiously in thought. "InuYasha." she replied.
"Guess again."
"Kagome?"
Kikyou shook her head. "Think, Taijiya!"
What was the one thing that Naraku wanted to kill most?
"What was he after last time? What did he want to eliminate from the world?" Kikyou urged the slayer on.
Sango's forehead wrinkled in concentration and her eyes widened in realization. "The-"
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Miroku crashed through a window. "Sango!" he cried out.
The slender woman in black appeared in the doorway with a priestess behind her.
"Kikyou!" Miroku stated in shock. "What the-?" His eyes didn't leave Kikyou's pale face.
Sango shook her head trying to get his attention. "I'll explain later. Miroku, we need to go back to the real world."
Miroku raised an eyebrow at her. "Why?"
"Something there might possibly stop Naraku," Sango took hold of his hand and started to run towards the door. She stopped, allowing Miroku to crash into her, and looked back to the pale priestess. "Kikyou, stay here and try to help InuYasha as much as you can, all right?"
"Fine. I will," Kikyou answered solemnly.
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Sesshoumaru spotted two figures running towards the group. He unsheathed his sword. "We have company." he growled.
"Wait!" Rashi grabbed Sesshoumaru's arm and forced him to lower it. "You smell that scent?"
He sniffed the air lightly and then responded, "A monk. A taijiya."
"Miroku and Sango," Rashi smiled excitedly. "I can tell who they are. Miroku wears that great smelling cologne, Adjak. And Sango wears that light perfume, 'White Lilac'. I love both smells!"
Sesshoumaru didn't bother to give her an odd look, Kohaku, Shippo and Souta had already taken over this job.
"Sister!" shouted Kohaku as Sango came, through the fog and into view.
"Kohaku!" Sango stopped directly in front of him and clutched his shoulders tightly. "What on earth are you doing here?" she asked exasperatedly.
"I came to help you," Kohaku answered. "I was training all day with Kaede. She's really a good trainer."
"I bet she is…" Sango sighed, brushing her bangs back from her eyes. She looked to the rest of the group, before handing out orders. "Rashi, stay with Sesshoumaru. Sesshoumaru, you help InuYasha. Souta, Kohaku, Shippo, think you can handle some spider demons?"
"You bet!" they all answered.
Sango was unsure if their enthusiasm was a good thing, but pushed it off anyway. "Okay, Kohaku, Shippo and Souta will go to the fighting area and kill all the spider demons. Do not let them bite you!" she warned. "I just want you to rid InuYasha's surroundings of smaller threats. All right?"
All three of the boys nodded.
Sango looked to the demon lord. "Okay. Sesshoumaru, I want you to try and keep Naraku busy while I go back to the real world. Miroku, I need you to stay here and help the boys," Sango instructed.
"What's in the real world?" Rashi asked wonderingly.
"Something that will destroy Naraku."
"And that would be?" Rashi inquired.
"The-"
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InuYasha's body could barely fight Naraku's strength. He was torn and bloody from the several boulders, walls, and floors that he had been thrown at.
Every time InuYasha succeeded in landing a blow upon Naraku, he quickly regenerated himself. Things were definitely not in his favor. The sword in his hands was losing life. He could feel its heartbeat steadily growing less and less.
Naraku rushed forward and stabbed InuYasha's arm and he let out a growl of rage mixed with pain. InuYasha clutched his left arm in an attempt to stop the bleeding. The blood bathed through the rat fur.
Naraku was about to strike again when Sesshoumaru appeared in front of InuYasha and forced Naraku back.
"This concerns you not, Sesshoumaru," Naraku replied icily.
"Though you came to the hotel I was staying at and tried to kill Rashi and I both. On our honeymoon no less. Yes, this definitely concerns me," Sesshoumaru replied coldly.
Naraku's sword clashed against the Toukijin and Sesshoumaru stepped forward slightly, parrying Naraku back even farther.
"I am superior to my half brother," Sesshoumaru informed. "I am a match for you! Unlike the fool behind me."
"Hey!" A rock hit Sesshoumaru on the head. "Who're ya callin' fool?" yelled InuYasha angrily. "No one asked ya to come and fight my fight!"
"Even your half brother wishes your presence was nonexistent," Naraku commented as he leapt away from Sesshoumaru and onto a building.
Veins bulged out as Naraku's lower torso bubbled and ruptured. His skin ripped savagely and eight long spider legs were born from his flesh. His human legs were consumed into his body.
"Fear my demonic power!" Naraku wickedly chortled as he transformed into the new form.
Sesshoumaru's eyes narrowed and he held up his sword. "I'm shivering," Sesshoumaru replied sneering.
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Sango ran out of the tree, only to be greeted by a horde of wasps. "Not the wasps!" Sango cried out as they began to attack her, stinging her and buzzing around.
"Kirara!" Sango yelled and the cat demon arrived like a feather. Sango jumped onto her back and they flew away from the wasps and into the sky.
"Take me to Kagome's," Sango instructed the two tail.
Kirara growled in response and moved faster towards Kagome's home.
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Sesshoumaru caught his balance as Naraku threw him back. Naraku had become even faster than before with his eight legs.
Both of his arms had mutated into large, pointy, glowing swords that lashed out at Lord Sesshoumaru.
Sesshoumaru blocked one of the lances, but missed the other and it drove deep into his stomach. Sesshoumaru's pupils grew small.
"Sesshoumaru!" he heard Rashi cry out.
Sesshoumaru's left hand clutched the blade in his stomach and removed the blade from Naraku and pushed him back. Naraku's was weapon still in his stomach and now detached from his body.
Sesshoumaru yanked it out and threw it aside as he straightened up. He raised his sharpened claws to his lips and his tongue came out to lick the blood from his stained hand.
His eyes reddened and his face molded into a silvery muzzle. His body multiplied in size and his hands and feet became that of paws, enormous paws.
Sesshomaru lifted his dog head and let out a ferocious growl. His claws whipped out and caught the spider in his grasp.
The large white dog had a small wound on his stomach where the blood flowed freely onto the ground and all Rashi could do was watch; Her eyes never leaving Sesshoumaru and his wound.
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Souta had finished putting sutras up in a circle and all of the males jumped in it as the spiders came at them. As soon as the spider demons hit the sutra field, they disintegrated.
"Nice work!" Kohaku praised, throwing his Ningama (sickle and chain) at some demons, stabbing two in the head.
Miroku's prayer beads were wrapped around his hand as he fought off some spiders with his staff. He was giving his hand some time to rest since he had been using it all night.
Shippo was throwing his fox fire at the nearest demons, hoping to kill enough spider demons to be of some help.
Souta used a blunt arrow with sutras attached to it and shot it in the air. As soon as it started to fall, sutras scattered about, landing on several spiders and they vanished.
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Chiisuchina was in her mother's comforting arms. The infant was showered with precious little kisses from Kagome.
Chii giggled endlessly as her mother tickled her tiny little feet and kissed her little button nose.
Kagome smiled at Chii. "I love you, my daughter."
Chii only let a small smile slip on her face in return.
Kagome hugged her close and rocked her softly to sleep. Now only Kagome was awake. Kaede was asleep on the bed. Buyo was tied to the bed frame and Chii was asleep in her arms.
She watched as spiders danced around the windows. She looked away unable to watch any longer. "InuYasha…be safe…"
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Sesshoumaru had Naraku between his fangs. He shook Naraku with his head, hoping to break every bone in his body.
An acid taste fell upon Sesshoumaru's large tongue and entered his throat, to his stomach. Sesshoumaru spat Naraku out and he began to throw up large quantities of green liquid.
His eyes went gold again and his body returned to its normal form. Sesshoumaru was only keeping himself up by using his arms and legs. He was still vomiting, even in his normal form.
"Like my poison?" Naraku seethed as he stood before Sesshoumaru. "Dog tonic. It's supposed to kill dogs in a snap. Unfortunately you are full demon so it should only make you sick to the point of near death. You cannot die from the tonic, but seeing as you are so weak I could kill you easily."
Naraku raised his sword and brought it down like a knife cutting into butter. Only his blade didn't slice Sesshoumaru in two.
Blood splattered on both demons and dirt rode up into their eyes, blocking the person that had thrown themselves into the blade from their view. Sesshoumaru rubbed the dirt out of his eyes and spotted the half demon.
There she was.
In two clean cut pieces.
Rashi.
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Sango leaped from Kirara's back and stumbled to the door. She kicked away some demon spiders and pushed opened the door.
She ran up the stairs, tripping every so often from exhaustion. She barged through the door and into Kagome's room.
"Kagome! I know the way to kill Naraku!" she screamed into the room.
Kagome almost screamed when she saw Sango burst through. Then she seemed to process what the slayer had said. "What is it?" she asked in a rush.
"Well I kind of need your-"
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"Rashi! Nooo!" InuYasha yelled out as he witnessed the whole event.
Naraku rose the sword, ready to strike Sesshoumaru. As the sword came down, Rashi jumped in Sesshoumaru's place with lightning speed.
The mirroring blade sliced Rashi in two pieces. Blood had splurged everywhere staining everything close including the grass and the two demons.
No last words. No last cry. That was it. Not even a week Had she been married to Sesshoumaru.
InuYasha did not want to see his brother's reaction. He would not want to be Naraku at that moment.
"You bastard!" InuYasha bellowed at the demon. "You damn, fucking bastard! You asshole!" InuYasha could not believe that Rashi had died that simply. Not Sesshoumaru's mate. Sesshoumaru always picked strong women. Rashi had been the strongest in spirit than any of the ones Sesshoumaru had before.
Rashi, his friend Rashi, was dead. Rashi was the only one who he could go to when he was well…in trouble. Rashi had loved everyone. She had comforted everyone and made things enjoyable. She even the intolerable things tolerable.
She had always greeted things with an enthusiastic smile. Now Rashi was on the floor. Her heart detached from her body. Her eyes wide with terror.
She had died to save her husband. Her friends. InuYasha couldn't stand Naraku now.
They had to win.
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Sesshoumaru's eyes were wide as he stared at the lifeless body of his wife. His eyes closed and he scooped Rashi's mangled body up in his arms. Blood dripped freely to the ground beneath them.
He opened his eyes and glared daggers at Naraku. The glare was paralyzing and Naraku stopped dead in his tracks. His laughter was caught within his throat and his gaze was locked with Sesshoumaru's.
Sesshoumaru walked away from Naraku, but he never broke eye contact. He set Rashi down, beside InuYasha.
He did not look at InuYasha, but continued to stare at Naraku, still keeping Naraku in a paralyzed state.
Sesshoumaru unsheathed Toukijin in his left hand and his claws began to glow on his right. He whipped out the long, gold lighten strand and in one quick movement sliced Naraku into fragments.
Skin and muscle tore away to reveal Naraku's heart and Sesshoumaru drove forward to pierce it with Toukijin.
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Crisa Rei: …
It's not the end! Mwahahahaha
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Naraku's red heart crusted and then shriveled into dust. That was it. It was over. Sesshoumaru had avenged Rashi's death.
Sesshoumaru stared down at the dust pile for a moment. The dust pile moved and shifted around in a circle like ants. Something's not right…Sesshoumaru concentrated on the dust pile. His eyes narrowed.
The particles formed together again and made another heart. The muscle was dark as the evil that had inspired Naraku. Naraku's pieces came together and formed a faceless, naked body.
Then the face appeared. Naraku's eyes weren't red any more. They were black as the darkness that had consumed Rashi, perhaps darker.
He picked up the heart and bit into it. Black blood spilled over his lips and fell down his naked chest to the ground below. He bit into it again as if it were an apple. Once more the dark liquid streamed down his pale skin.
Once he had devoured the entire muscle and licked his lips free of black ink, Naraku's skin began to glow a deep shade of purple. "The Toukijin…in that sword lives an evil demon. That evil demon and I have something in common." His black eyes flickered from Sesshoumaru to InuYasha. "InuYasha's parting of this world."
Naraku stepped forward, towards Sesshoumaru. "The demon joined me instead of you. You have developed a softness for your brother. Weak! He gave me a stronger heart that once I had chewed through its toughness and guzzled down its liquor, I would be able to do this…"
Naraku's eyes filled with blood like tears. He blinked, the blood streamed down his face, painting stripes on either side of his pale cheeks. His head turned into a narrow shape. His arms and legs blended smoothly with his body. The blood became a mixture of red sparkling coils and scales.
His pupils turned snake-like and his tongue whipped out into a fork. His body lengthened and a large rattler appeared at the tip of the snake's tale. Naraku's head reared back, preparing to strike Sesshoumaru.
His head speedily dove towards Sesshoumaru and Sesshoumaru jumped into the sky, but Naraku's mouth clasped tightly around him. Then Naraku looked pained and opened his jaw, dropping the youkai onto the ground.
"Arghhh! Damn that woman!" Naraku screamed in rage as he shook his head back and forth.
InuYasha looked at Naraku. "Who the hell is he talking about?"
Sesshoumaru smirked. "Rashi sacrificed herself for me, leaving her power behind to protect me. He cannot touch me in a harmful way or pain will consume him. InuYasha, stay back."
"What!" InuYasha looked aghast to Sesshoumaru. "No way in hell am I going to let you fight my fight! I want to kick Naraku's ass!"
Sesshoumaru looked harshly at InuYasha. "I'll keep him occupied, InuYasha. Then you shall strike your fang into his heart. I think that might be able to make him die for a while. He cannot die unless the taijiya brings back the one thing that can annihilate Naraku."
InuYasha stared at Sesshoumaru for a moment. Sesshoumaru had proposed a plan of teamwork. InuYasha shrugged as pain rippled in his skin. "Sure. I'll do it."
"Good."
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Sango thanked Kagome and hugged her.
"Please don't-" Kagome begged her friend.
"Don't worry I won't let anything happen," Sango assured. "I promise."
"I can't believe such a small, fragile thing could destroy Naraku," Kagome whispered.
Kaede nodded. "Great power comes in small packages Kagome. You must be willing to sacrifice the gem."
Kagome nodded. "I am willing, but it's so hard to give up my precious gift."
Sango pulled her into a hug again. She wrapped her arms around her and held her tight. "Don't worry! InuYasha will be there. Everyone we know is helping. You just rest. Since Naraku is occupied, he can't attack you. You must rest your soul and mind." Sango stroked Chii's head softly.
Kagome sighed, tears in her eyes. The ache in her heart grew more at the very thought of losing everything and everyone she loved. "I know…" she said in a raspy voice, unable to speak confidentially.
"Until then," Sango waved and then walked out of the room, down the stairs.
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Sesshoumaru sailed through the air, his hair masking his face as his back hit the concrete. His facial expression was stone as he struggled to get up. He didn't flinch in pain or shudder in fear. He composed himself.
He looked at Naraku, his eyes glowing red as he thought of what he had left to protect from that beast. Rin.
Sesshoumaru saw InuYasha move frequently in and out of his peripheral vision. Dim wit… He escaped Naraku's attack once again, by jumping into the night.
He couldn't keep avoiding his strikes. Sesshoumaru needed to strike back and injure him somehow. Where was everyone? Of course, they were killing those small, pesky demon spiders.
Sesshoumaru received a fast blow to his shoulder and once more he greeted the rocky bottom. A rock was struck into his back, barely missing his spine. Sesshoumaru yelled not in pain, but in sheer anger at himself.
He rose without struggle and grasped the rock in his back, removing it slowly as blood encased about the rock. Sesshoumaru threw it aside as blood rolled down his flesh and was absorbed by his clothing.
He noticed it now. Blood caked on every rock. The lustful odor he had once craved was now a putrid, toxic smell. Blood wasn't a wonderful thing to see anymore. He was sick and tired of the red and crimson liquid.
Sesshoumaru wanted to end it. He barely saw Naraku's black blood on any of the rocks nor did he smell his rotten, evil blood.
He held up his claws and they began to glow as he formed his whip. "Be gone Naraku!" he screamed in a cold voice. He brought his claws down, slicing through the air. The power rippled throughout the concrete, moving speedily towards Naraku.
The attack hit Naraku dead on. A perfect hit as the rocks around Naraku exploded into the sky, forming thick gray clouds.
Silence fell upon the mirrored earth.
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Sango hit the transportation aura. "What…?" Sango placed her hand on the aura. "It's a wall! The beam is gone!" Sango sighed and fell down on the ground. "It won't let me through…Kirara…"
The cat demon meowed and approached Sango, licking her hand.
Sango held the parcel close. "We'll get through somehow…" The demon exterminator kicked the wall, pain shooting up her leg. "Damn…"
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Kikyou walked up to the purple glass wall. She stroked her index finger down the thick iciness of it. "The portal has closed." Kikyou looked about and grabbed an arrow. She shoved it full force into the glass.
The glass crackled as it shattered into a thousand pieces, revealing the portal once more. She had seen the taijiya stuck on the other side, losing her energy. "Taijiya!" Kikyou cried out. "Jump through now."
The demon exterminator fell through the portal and was flung to the ground as she clutched protectively over the gem.
"Did you bring what was needed?" Kikyou asked her.
Sango nodded and flinched. "Here it is." She reached out to hand it to Kikyou.
"I cannot touch it!" Kikyou snarled. "Foolish woman! If I do I will be burned alive! It is too pure for my hands. Then what help can I be?"
Sango did not say anything as she struggled to get back up on her feet. "Where's…InuYasha?"
Kikyou looked towards the distance where gray clouds and lightning had started brewing. "Over there," she lifted her arm and pointed to the mass destruction. "Within those black clouds and storms."
Sango nodded and began to walk, struggling with her energy. Kirara transformed into the large cat demon and growled to Sango, wanting her to get on.
Sango shook her head. "Kirara, you are too weak to carry me. I know that. We are both weak."
Kirara meowed in her large form and walked beside Sango, giving her master something to lean on.
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Finally the black blood stained the rocks and he could smell that foul stench. Sesshoumaru strained his eyes to see through the black haze. Naraku's silhouette became visible.
He smelled something else in the air. A dying woman. He turned his head quickly and saw the struggling taijiya. Sesshoumaru looked to InuYasha, who stood and watched Sango weakly stepping closer.
Go and help her, InuYasha! Sesshoumaru thought strongly before he charged after Naraku. "GO NOW!"
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Sesshoumaru's yell of orders woke InuYasha from his trance. He blinked and hurried over to Sango. "Sango!" he jumped in front of her and put his hands on her shoulders, noticing something wrapped up in a small blanket.
Sango fell forward, her eyes closed. "Take this…and present it to Naraku. This precious pearl will destroy him…."
InuYasha took the blanketed object and moved the material away so he could see what it was exactly. "Chiisuchina!" InuYasha exclaimed shocked as the innocent baby looked up at him.
The daughter cooed and smiled at her father. She reached out with her little hands to grab InuYasha's hand.
InuYasha let her small fingers close around his large finger. He stared down at his child. "You are the jewel that can kill Naraku?"
Chiisuchina cooed again, laughing with her eyes.
I have to give up my own daughter for this world? InuYasha thought. His brows knitted together as he thought. The baby that came from me and Kagome ?
That's what Sango said. To present Naraku with the gem of love. InuYasha stood up and looked at Sango's lifeless body. Kirara limply curled up beside Sango's face.
"I can't…" InuYasha whispered unbearably, cradling the baby in his arms. "Not Chii…She's just a baby. She has a life to live." he fought with himself. "But it's either…life or death…and Chii is the key to life…for us all…"
InuYasha jumped across the rubble, towards Sesshoumaru and Naraku. Kagome had given Chii to Sango. Obviously Kagome had hope that something would happen. But…why Chii? Why had the Gods chosen InuYasha and Kagome and not Miroku and Sango? Or Sesshoumaru and Rashi? Their love was just as strong as InuYasha's and Kagome's.
He kissed Chii's forehead. "Be safe, Chii."
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He jumped in front of Naraku. "Naraku!" He yelled to the demon
"Ah so the half demon comes out from hiding," Naraku smirked. "Wonderful. Come to die here beside your brother?"
"Actually," InuYasha set the baby on the ground between them. "I brought you a little gift."
As soon as Naraku made eye contact with the baby, Chiisuchina began to wail.
A small pillar of florescent light zoomed across the sky like a shooting star. The light fell to earth and came closer to Chiisuchina before hitting her square in the heart. It pierced her and white liquid seeped from her small body.
The light then exploded, blinding everyone on both earths.
The light reverted itself back to the mirrored world only to show that Chiisuchina was hovering in thin air, her body growing right before InuYasha's eyes.
Chiisuchina's hair grew out into long silver locks, longer than InuYasha's. Her body blossomed into that of a woman. Her eyes were warm, honey and brown. Her face was youthful like Kagome's and her skin was fair as of her mother.
White strips were wrapped around her in a dress like manner. A clear bubble formed around her and she landed on the ground with bare feet, gently.
Her hair flowed around her as if she was in water and her hands were on her chest, as if clutching her heart. Her eyes were lowered to the ground and silver tears poured down her cheeks.
It's not what I took from you
It's not what I said
We are born like this
The time has come to change this
To stretch the thought a mile
We've lost that kind of spirit
We want it back today
The time is right to change this
To make the life we know
We'll get it back again
Somewhere someone's gun is laughing
It's not what I gave to you
It's not what I said
We are born like this
It's not what I took from you
It's not what I stole…
We are born like this
You try your best to mock me
You're always in my way
You've lost what you were given
You'll get it back today
The time has come to change this
To make the life we know
They took what you've been given
You'll get it back
Her eyes lifted to stare at Naraku. "This torment ends here, Naraku."
Naraku choked and sputtered. He lifted his hand to clutch his throat. The muscle formed in his throat and he vomited it back up, black saliva mixed with blood fell to the floor with the beating heart.
Chiisuchina stepped on it with the pureness of her foot and Naraku dissolved in millions of pieces, leaving nothing but a small baby.
"The death of evil will bring birth of goodness," Chiisuchina lifted the baby up. She cradled the baby in her arms. "Welcome to a new life, Onigumo. A life where you shall put a stopper to the worst things to come."
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Kaede stood beside Kagome's bedside as her fever broke. Everyone was waiting around her. InuYasha. Miroku. Sesshoumaru. Shippo. Kohaku. Souta. The now fourteen year old Chiisuchina. Kikyou even.
She looked lifeless, like an angel. Her face was pale as the moon, small pearls of sweat on her face. Her hair was shining and healthy in the room light. Her eyes were closed.
Kagome's eyes slowly opened and everyone leaned forward to see what she would say. Kagome's eyes scanned over the group and a look of cloudy confusion filled her eyes.
"Excuse me…" she uttered softly.
"What?" InuYasha took her hand.
She pulled her hand away from him, making InuYasha looked startled and hurt.
"Who am I?"
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Crisa Rei: And thus ends my story here. I hate writing endings. In fact…I suck at writing them, but this ending went according to plan.
Well who wants a sequel? Should I write one?
I'll let you guys decide that.
If you want a sequel just state it in the review. I also apologize to everyone about my major mistakes. I will go back and correct those…
One of these days. I must get back to working on my other stories because every story on hold just to finish this one.
Oh yes, fourteen years DID NOT pass. Chii is simply fourteen thanks to her saving the world and stuff.
Sango and Rashi are presumed dead.
Naraku is dead like a mofo.
Who keeps the baby Onigumo?
Bwahaha most likely I'll write a sequel. Like…ten chapters…twenty at most…
Reviewer replies:
Secret-punk-rocker: Yes sadly this is the end and it's okay. The new Beta did a good job. Great job in fact.
fluffys-toy: Thanks for calling me a bitch...not really. But that's okay. All my other reviewers love me
Riles: I'm sorry I didn't pick you to beta this story. But you were really good
atth99: Did me trying harder help any? Thanks for reviewing!
sacredarcher45: I was kind of hoping it would be funny. But towards the end it got less funny...oh well...
lost and alone: Five weeks...wow...that sucks. What'd ya do?
InuBunny: Thanks again! It makes me feel happy that my story was good.
ms.joyjoy: I do try...though I think by putting off my other stories just so I could finish this one angered a few...yikes...best run...
aninaig: Well you were right about Chii.
Lady Katreina: I have a creative mind, what can I say?
SerenaClearwater: Tell them you're sane for reading it, the author's just insane for writing it...
ColShaLin: Do you get on gaia? Your name seems familiar other than on this website...
Kebin Katunna: I am deeply honored this story has caught your interest. Though Alternate Universe has some really good stories.
lia200304: Will try. I'll try...but I'm lazy and I have a lot of people to talk to over the net...I roleplay...I'm such a nerd...
To all my loyal reviewers: I cannot thank you enough by helping me improve this story little by little. My mistakes are less (I hope) my battle scenes are getting great and I have someone who even offered to write my lemons and limes for me...
This story has made me feel wonderful inside and I apologize again for the major mistakes.
Thank you so much you guys
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