There was only one other NOTEBOOK fan fiction out there so I decided to
write one myself. Basically, its AU, and basically it's "what if when
Allison went on her summer holidays she already had a fiance waiting for
her at home". So I hope you all like it
He saw her for the first time at the Carnival. She was on the bumper cars with some friends, she was laughing, and her blonde locks bouncing everytime she was bumped by another car. That image would be burned into Noah's head for eternity.
"Man, stay away from her." Noah looked at his friend beside him,
"Fin, who is she?"
Fin sighed "that's Allison Hamilton, she's here vacationing with her family before the wedding." He said, making sure he said 'wedding' extra loud. But Noah didn't seem to listen, all he heard was the name.
Noah walked over to where Allison and her friends were getting off the ride. He stopped directly in front of her. "Hi." He whispered gently.
Allison backed away a bit. "Can I help you?"
"Yeah, I was wondering if you'd like to go to a movie with me tomorrow." He said in a hushed seductive voice. All of the girls surrounding Allison giggled and the guys around her glared protectively.
"Ummm, sorry, but I have to go." Allison said politely, walking away with her friends.
Noah was left standing alone for a while, then Fin came up behind him. "Hey, I warned you."
"She's beautiful isnt she?" Noah said, still staring at her. She was now getting on the Ferris Wheel.
"Yeah, she's gorgeous, but she's taken." Noah walked over to the ferris wheel, making eye contact with Allison. "Are you even listeing to me?"
The Ferris wheel was making its way around and Allison and the guy she was sitting with were at the bottom of the Ferris wheel. "Nope" Noah said to Fin and went running up by the Ferris Wheel and jumped into the seats where Allison and the guy were sitting.
"What the hell are you doing?" Allison screamed.
"Hey Noah! Two to a seat! Get down from there!" Noah looked down to see the guy controlling the Ferris Wheel yelling at him.
"Hold On!" He yelled back. The guy next to Allison glared at Noah. "You never answered my question."
"What question!?"
"Will you go to a movie with me tomorrow?"
"Noah! Get Down!" The controller yelled again.
Before Allison could say anything, Noah jupmed off the Ferris Wheel seat and began hanging on one of the bars facing Allison. "So? Will you go out with me"
With a shocked expression, Allison said "No! I'm engaged, I have a fiance waiting for me at home!"
Still hanging on the bars Noah said. "Well, I guess you leave me no choice." Noah let one of his hands go and dangled from the bar.
Allison screamed. "Stop it! Your going to get yourself killed!"
"Say you'll go out with me."
"No"
"I think my hands slipping."
"Ok! Fine! I'll go out with you!"
"Don't do me any favors."
"No, I want to go out with you."
"Say it louder."
"I WANT TO GO OUT WITH YOU!!!"
Noah put his other hand back on the bar. "Alright, alright, I'll go out with you."
"Your horribly." Allison uttered. She then stood up from her seat. She placed her hand on Noah's belt, then undid them, then unbuttoned and zipped down the fly of his jeans, then finally pulled them down around his knees. Everyone at the Carnival saw and laughed at the local boy hanging from the Ferris Wheel.
Ok, so what do you think. I kow its a lot like the movie, but it will change in a few chapters. Feedback is always appreciated!!!!!!
He saw her for the first time at the Carnival. She was on the bumper cars with some friends, she was laughing, and her blonde locks bouncing everytime she was bumped by another car. That image would be burned into Noah's head for eternity.
"Man, stay away from her." Noah looked at his friend beside him,
"Fin, who is she?"
Fin sighed "that's Allison Hamilton, she's here vacationing with her family before the wedding." He said, making sure he said 'wedding' extra loud. But Noah didn't seem to listen, all he heard was the name.
Noah walked over to where Allison and her friends were getting off the ride. He stopped directly in front of her. "Hi." He whispered gently.
Allison backed away a bit. "Can I help you?"
"Yeah, I was wondering if you'd like to go to a movie with me tomorrow." He said in a hushed seductive voice. All of the girls surrounding Allison giggled and the guys around her glared protectively.
"Ummm, sorry, but I have to go." Allison said politely, walking away with her friends.
Noah was left standing alone for a while, then Fin came up behind him. "Hey, I warned you."
"She's beautiful isnt she?" Noah said, still staring at her. She was now getting on the Ferris Wheel.
"Yeah, she's gorgeous, but she's taken." Noah walked over to the ferris wheel, making eye contact with Allison. "Are you even listeing to me?"
The Ferris wheel was making its way around and Allison and the guy she was sitting with were at the bottom of the Ferris wheel. "Nope" Noah said to Fin and went running up by the Ferris Wheel and jumped into the seats where Allison and the guy were sitting.
"What the hell are you doing?" Allison screamed.
"Hey Noah! Two to a seat! Get down from there!" Noah looked down to see the guy controlling the Ferris Wheel yelling at him.
"Hold On!" He yelled back. The guy next to Allison glared at Noah. "You never answered my question."
"What question!?"
"Will you go to a movie with me tomorrow?"
"Noah! Get Down!" The controller yelled again.
Before Allison could say anything, Noah jupmed off the Ferris Wheel seat and began hanging on one of the bars facing Allison. "So? Will you go out with me"
With a shocked expression, Allison said "No! I'm engaged, I have a fiance waiting for me at home!"
Still hanging on the bars Noah said. "Well, I guess you leave me no choice." Noah let one of his hands go and dangled from the bar.
Allison screamed. "Stop it! Your going to get yourself killed!"
"Say you'll go out with me."
"No"
"I think my hands slipping."
"Ok! Fine! I'll go out with you!"
"Don't do me any favors."
"No, I want to go out with you."
"Say it louder."
"I WANT TO GO OUT WITH YOU!!!"
Noah put his other hand back on the bar. "Alright, alright, I'll go out with you."
"Your horribly." Allison uttered. She then stood up from her seat. She placed her hand on Noah's belt, then undid them, then unbuttoned and zipped down the fly of his jeans, then finally pulled them down around his knees. Everyone at the Carnival saw and laughed at the local boy hanging from the Ferris Wheel.
Ok, so what do you think. I kow its a lot like the movie, but it will change in a few chapters. Feedback is always appreciated!!!!!!