Hey! This is my first attempt at Kim Possible fanfic and I'd appreciate any feedback! Thanks!
Disclaimer: Kim Possible and all of it's character's belong to Disney. I did not create them, I'm just borrowing.
"I can't believe high school is actually over," said Kim Possible dreamily as she stared into space. Her and her best friend, Ron Stoppable, had stopped at Bueno Nacho after their last day of school to celebrate with nacos and chimeritos. Ron was chowing down as usual along with his buddy Rufus.
"I know isn't this great?!" said Ron enthusiastically with his mouth full. "It's the day every teen dreams of!"
"Yeah, you're right." Kim didn't seem as excited as her buddy Ron though. Everything had gone by so fast. This was going to mean huge changes. She was looking forward to Middletown University in the Fall though. Ron would be there too, so they could continue saving the world as usual. But it wouldn't be the same. "I guess this is just gonna take a lot of getting used to."
"Hey, don't sweat it KP! We still got the prom tomorrow. Our last chance to par-tay with our high school crowd."
Rufus chuckled. "Par-taaaay!"
Just then Monique walked over to the table. "Hey Kim! Hey Ron! You guys excited or what?"
"You know it!" yelled Ron. Kim nodded.
"Why are you looking so glum Kim? I just heard the news that you are going to prom with the hottest guy in Middletown," Monique squeeled. "Josh Mankey!!"
Kim smiled. "Oh yeah. Guess news travels fast."
"Who's your date, Ron?" asked Monique.
Ron waved his hand dismissively. "Dates are so overrated. I figured I'd fly solo so I could be free to chill with all the ladies. There's enough Ron for everyone, you know."
Kim and Monique rolled their eyes simultaneously.
Meanwhile.....
Drakken was polishing up his brand new evil robot and staring at it adoringly. "Isn't it fantastic Shego?! Twenty feet tall, 1,000 tons of bulletproof metal, built in laser beam, right at my fingertips for my destructive purposes!!!........Shego?.......Shego!!"
Shego swiveled around in her chair to face Drakken, filing her nails absently. "You've seen one evil robot you've seen them all...."
"Shego, this is no ordinary robot! Once activated it's fully autonomous! It thinks for itself and there's no need for remote control! It's the latest technology in artificial intelligence!"
"Uh huh. Right." Shego wasn't impressed. She had seen plenty of Drakken's evil plots to take over the world foiled by Kim Possible, no matter how sophisticated. "So what exactly are you gonna do with it?"
Drakken opened his mouth to speak then stopped himself. "Hmmm...well..... I....I can.... AH HA! I'll destroy Kim Possible!!!!"
"Mmm hmmm. Yeah, so what else is new."
"I'm serious Shego!" Drakken whined. "This robot is just the thing I've been needing to bring down my arch nemesis!"
Shego sighed. "Alright so when does this plan take place?"
Drakken thought about this and lit up as an idea came to his head. "We'll target Kim when she's the least prepared and never expects it! Not only that, but we'll be able to ruin one of the most sacred and treasured rituals of teenage adolescence!!!"
"Excuse me?"
"PROM NIGHT!!! MUAHAHAHAHA!"
Ron stood by the refreshment table, decked out in a black tux, sipping on punch and snacking on potato chips. He glanced at his watch. Almost 9 o'clock and Kim still wasn't here yet. "Where is she?" He looked at Rufus who was wearing a matching tuxedo and comfortably munching on chips in Ron's pocket. Rufus shrugged. Most of Middletown's graduating students were on the dance floor and having a great time. Ron stood back just watching and waiting anxiously for Kim.
Just then Ron glanced over at the gym door to see Josh Mankey making his entrance. Ron smiled. "Finally!" He rushed over to meet Kim who was probably right behind Mankey. This was supposed to be a special night and Ron was looking forward to having his best friend in the whole world to spend it with.
"Hey it took ya long enough!" Ron yelled running over to Josh, "I thought you'd nev....whaaa.....AHHHH!" Rufus gasped and dove down into Ron's pocket. Josh was arm in arm with BONNIE!
Bonnie chuckled. "Who were you expecting? You're little buddy Kimmie? Please."
Ignoring her, Ron turned to Josh confused. "Where's Kim?"
"Uhhh...," stared Josh nervously. "Well, you see, Bonnie and I had this talk. And....well...you know how everyone knows Bonnie's a shoe-in for prom queen. And uh...the odds are favoring me for prom king. So we thought it would only be right if we...you know...we uhh...." Josh trailed off as he caught sight of Ron's extremely angry glare.
"Prom king?!" Ron yelled. "You had Kim Possible for your date and your worried about being PROM KING?! You're more like....uhh....like uhhh....JERK KING!"
Bonnie laughed. "Ooooo, nice one loser." But Ron had already run past them at full speed and down the street headed for Kim's house. He knew she was probably crushed and was in need of her best friend right now....
Any comments so far? I'll have the next chapter real soon!
Disclaimer: Kim Possible and all of it's character's belong to Disney. I did not create them, I'm just borrowing.
"I can't believe high school is actually over," said Kim Possible dreamily as she stared into space. Her and her best friend, Ron Stoppable, had stopped at Bueno Nacho after their last day of school to celebrate with nacos and chimeritos. Ron was chowing down as usual along with his buddy Rufus.
"I know isn't this great?!" said Ron enthusiastically with his mouth full. "It's the day every teen dreams of!"
"Yeah, you're right." Kim didn't seem as excited as her buddy Ron though. Everything had gone by so fast. This was going to mean huge changes. She was looking forward to Middletown University in the Fall though. Ron would be there too, so they could continue saving the world as usual. But it wouldn't be the same. "I guess this is just gonna take a lot of getting used to."
"Hey, don't sweat it KP! We still got the prom tomorrow. Our last chance to par-tay with our high school crowd."
Rufus chuckled. "Par-taaaay!"
Just then Monique walked over to the table. "Hey Kim! Hey Ron! You guys excited or what?"
"You know it!" yelled Ron. Kim nodded.
"Why are you looking so glum Kim? I just heard the news that you are going to prom with the hottest guy in Middletown," Monique squeeled. "Josh Mankey!!"
Kim smiled. "Oh yeah. Guess news travels fast."
"Who's your date, Ron?" asked Monique.
Ron waved his hand dismissively. "Dates are so overrated. I figured I'd fly solo so I could be free to chill with all the ladies. There's enough Ron for everyone, you know."
Kim and Monique rolled their eyes simultaneously.
Meanwhile.....
Drakken was polishing up his brand new evil robot and staring at it adoringly. "Isn't it fantastic Shego?! Twenty feet tall, 1,000 tons of bulletproof metal, built in laser beam, right at my fingertips for my destructive purposes!!!........Shego?.......Shego!!"
Shego swiveled around in her chair to face Drakken, filing her nails absently. "You've seen one evil robot you've seen them all...."
"Shego, this is no ordinary robot! Once activated it's fully autonomous! It thinks for itself and there's no need for remote control! It's the latest technology in artificial intelligence!"
"Uh huh. Right." Shego wasn't impressed. She had seen plenty of Drakken's evil plots to take over the world foiled by Kim Possible, no matter how sophisticated. "So what exactly are you gonna do with it?"
Drakken opened his mouth to speak then stopped himself. "Hmmm...well..... I....I can.... AH HA! I'll destroy Kim Possible!!!!"
"Mmm hmmm. Yeah, so what else is new."
"I'm serious Shego!" Drakken whined. "This robot is just the thing I've been needing to bring down my arch nemesis!"
Shego sighed. "Alright so when does this plan take place?"
Drakken thought about this and lit up as an idea came to his head. "We'll target Kim when she's the least prepared and never expects it! Not only that, but we'll be able to ruin one of the most sacred and treasured rituals of teenage adolescence!!!"
"Excuse me?"
"PROM NIGHT!!! MUAHAHAHAHA!"
Ron stood by the refreshment table, decked out in a black tux, sipping on punch and snacking on potato chips. He glanced at his watch. Almost 9 o'clock and Kim still wasn't here yet. "Where is she?" He looked at Rufus who was wearing a matching tuxedo and comfortably munching on chips in Ron's pocket. Rufus shrugged. Most of Middletown's graduating students were on the dance floor and having a great time. Ron stood back just watching and waiting anxiously for Kim.
Just then Ron glanced over at the gym door to see Josh Mankey making his entrance. Ron smiled. "Finally!" He rushed over to meet Kim who was probably right behind Mankey. This was supposed to be a special night and Ron was looking forward to having his best friend in the whole world to spend it with.
"Hey it took ya long enough!" Ron yelled running over to Josh, "I thought you'd nev....whaaa.....AHHHH!" Rufus gasped and dove down into Ron's pocket. Josh was arm in arm with BONNIE!
Bonnie chuckled. "Who were you expecting? You're little buddy Kimmie? Please."
Ignoring her, Ron turned to Josh confused. "Where's Kim?"
"Uhhh...," stared Josh nervously. "Well, you see, Bonnie and I had this talk. And....well...you know how everyone knows Bonnie's a shoe-in for prom queen. And uh...the odds are favoring me for prom king. So we thought it would only be right if we...you know...we uhh...." Josh trailed off as he caught sight of Ron's extremely angry glare.
"Prom king?!" Ron yelled. "You had Kim Possible for your date and your worried about being PROM KING?! You're more like....uhh....like uhhh....JERK KING!"
Bonnie laughed. "Ooooo, nice one loser." But Ron had already run past them at full speed and down the street headed for Kim's house. He knew she was probably crushed and was in need of her best friend right now....
Any comments so far? I'll have the next chapter real soon!