This is my first fic so go easy on me and please give me some ideas.
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The Griffin's Problems
It was a gloomy day outside in Quahog when Chris started to shout. "Dad there is an evil monkey in my closet!" "Shut up Chris, something is happening to your sister." "She's turning evil, said Peter." "Yes, yes, yes my evil mind control machine is working, said Stewey." "If she keeps struggling she will end up dead." One hour later Meg went totally berserk. She was smashing and breaking everything in the house until Lois called the police. When the police arrived to the griffins they handcuffed Meg immediately. Before she left she shouted, "I'll break out one day and KILL you all!!!" On the way to prison Meg kicked the passenger cop through a tiny hole. "Ouch! the cop screamed" "What happened? said the driver." "That dang kid kicked me." "Whatever, said the driver." At prison meg was put in a prison cell and that's when she started to plan her great escape.
Please give me some ideas for Chapter 2. Thanks.
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The Griffin's Problems
It was a gloomy day outside in Quahog when Chris started to shout. "Dad there is an evil monkey in my closet!" "Shut up Chris, something is happening to your sister." "She's turning evil, said Peter." "Yes, yes, yes my evil mind control machine is working, said Stewey." "If she keeps struggling she will end up dead." One hour later Meg went totally berserk. She was smashing and breaking everything in the house until Lois called the police. When the police arrived to the griffins they handcuffed Meg immediately. Before she left she shouted, "I'll break out one day and KILL you all!!!" On the way to prison Meg kicked the passenger cop through a tiny hole. "Ouch! the cop screamed" "What happened? said the driver." "That dang kid kicked me." "Whatever, said the driver." At prison meg was put in a prison cell and that's when she started to plan her great escape.
Please give me some ideas for Chapter 2. Thanks.
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