Breakin' all the rules
By SailorRaven1619
A Sailor Moon fic!
Summary: The senshi are desperate! Makoto lies in a coma on the brink of death after a horrible youma attack. Usagi is overcome with guilt, Ami's grades drop, Rei is silent to all, and Minako becomes a thief? What for? The senshi have a dirty little secret to save Mako's life, but can they handle it?
Disclaimer: Don't own Sailor Moon! . Oh well Naoko does. Any songs used, don't own either!
Author's Note: This story is actually written by two writers. SailorLita18 (who is currently typing) and Raven Kino, my best friend. We both thought it would be a cool idea to write one together. We even made a name to use for this. This story is still in the works, so updates won't be updated like any other story. Please read and review!
Prologue
Super Sailor Jupiter screamed in agony as she was thrown headfirst into a steel metal door. Eternal Sailor Moon and Super Sailor Mars both screamed in fear, "Jupiter! Iya!"
Jupiter felt unconsciousness creep over her. Before she fainted, she thought, 'Minna, gomen that I am not able to save you. Usagi, onegai...' with a sigh, she fainted. Her fuku flickered repeatedly until she was a 17 year old high school student.
Super Sailor Mars was pissed, and fired an attack, "Mars...Flame...Sniper!" It hit the youma and it went fling back into a building. Eternal Sailor moon ran to Makoto, who was badly beat up. Makoto was fighting the youma for quite sometime, before Mars and moon showed up. When they arrived, the youma seemed stronger, and Makoto got the beating of a lifetime. The youma hurt her terribly; its mission was to kill her. But the youma's mission didn't include the other senshi, who stopped him.
Eternal Sailor Moon gently picked up Makoto in her arms, and whispered to her friend, "Makoto, onegai. Wake up! Onegai!" Eternal Sailor moon felt the tears well up in her eyes that threatened to fall at any given moment.
Just then, Super Sailor Venus, and Super Sailor Mercury arrived. Mercury took out her goggles, and mini-computer. Venus saw Eternal Sailor Moon holding a bruised and battered Makoto, and her blood boiled. She stared at the youma and yelled with anger, "You fucking piece of shit. You are going to pay for what you did to Makoto!" She then fired her attack, "Venus...Love and Beauty Shock!"
The youma dodged it, and fired an attack at the senshi. The youma yelled, "Laser!" It struck Mercury, who was thrown into a tree, causing her to fall unconscious. Then it struck Eternal Sailor Moon from behind, and she went into the same metal door Makoto was thrown into.
She lost consciousness, as well. Mars and Venus were beyond angry at this point. They wanted to kill this damned thing that caused them great pain.
Venus fired another attack at the youma, "Venus Love-me chain!" She was able to tie up the youma, who glared at her with its red eyes.
Mars fired up an attack as Venus held it, "Burning Mandala." (AN: is that spelled right?) The youma was struck and thrown back, as Venus released her grip, not wanting to be thrown back as well.
Venus raced to Eternal Sailor Moon and Makoto, as Mars raced to Mercury. Mercury moaned as Mars shook her, "Mercury, are you alright?" Mars' worried voice was dripped with anger, but it was not directed at Mercury.
Mercury fluttered her eyelids, and finally opened them. She was confused for a moment, before realizing the situation. She sat up, and glanced over at the youma, who was still on the ground, obviously hurt. She then turned her eyes towards at other three.
Mars helped her up, and the two hurried to where Venus was attempting to awaken Eternal Sailor moon. Mars gently shook Eternal Sailor Moon, but got no response. She then realized Eternal Sailor Moon must have hit the same door Makoto did, for there were two large bumps in the door.
Mars said, "I will fight this thing, since y power is much more powerful then you two. If I need assistance, I will call you. Venus and Mercury, keep your guard up. Onegai, we don't need anymore senshi hurt."
Venus nodded and Mercury asked, "Should Venus and I watch over Usagi and Makoto?" Mars nodded, and said, "Onegai, make sure Makoto is no longer in danger. We need to protect her."
The two senshi nodded, and Mars went to do her stuff. She fired her attack, "Mars...Flame...Sniper!" It caused the youma to fly back even further, and it wasn't moving. Mars started walk in over to it, very slowly, and cautiously. She reached it, and saw no signs of movement.
Mars leaned towards its face, and when it grabbed her around the neck, catching her off guard. She screamed and it tightens its grip around her neck. Her eyes were wide with fright, and she used her hands, trying to pry its grip from her neck!
Mars felt darkness, and then heard an attack, "Star...Serious...Laser!" The youma was hit, and went falling back into a building, after it dropped Mars. Mars rubbed her neck, as she turned to look at her savior. Surprisingly, there were three of them. Mars uttered one word, "Starlight's!" She then fainted.
Venus got up, and turned to Mercury, "Watch them." Mercury nodded and watched Venus ran over to Mars. Venus kneeled down besides Mars and said, "Mars, wake up." Mars was breathing, but not responding.
Sailor Star Fighter appeared next to Mercury and said, "You go help Venus. I will watch odango and Makoto." Mercury asked with worry, "Are you sure?" Fighter nodded, "Hai. Healer and Maker will fight with you two."
As soon as she said that, Healer and Maker jumped down and stood next to Venus. Venus gave them both a sideway glance and smiled. The two Star Lights smiled back at the blonde. A year was such a while for them and it felt having them by her side once again.
Mercury ran away to side by Venus and the other two Starlight's side. Fighter held Makoto in her arms and whispered, "Makoto. Onegai! Wake up!!" Makoto was motionless in Fighter's arms. Fighter felt the tears welled up in her eyes, as she held the very weak, battered, and bruised Outer Princess in her arms. (AN 1)
Eternal Sailor Moon heard noises, and words, yet what she heard did make any sense. She felt coldness all around her, and felt a presence near her. Her heavy eyes, against her will, opened and she saw blurs and fuzziness in her vision. She then focused on the figure next to her.
She stared hard, and gasped, "Fighter." Fighter turned as she heard her name. She then saw Eternal Sailor Moon had awakened. Fighter gently set Makoto down, as she went to help Eternal Sailor Moon. Eternal Sailor Moon felt Fighter's incredible strength help her to a sitting position. She said, "I am fine. How is Makoto?"
Fighter replied, "She has awakened. I believe her condition is very serious."
Eternal Sailor Moon nodded, "Okay. Let me help minna fight the youma." Fighter nodded, and watched over Makoto, as Eternal Sailor moon raced to join the others.
Mercury released her attacked as the youma came back from inside the building, "Mercury, Shine Aqua Rhapsody!"
The youma dodged it and grinned. It yelled, "Laser!"
Everyone jumped, and combined their powers, "Venus, Love and Beauty, Shock!"
"Start Sensitive Inferno!"
"Star Gentle Uterus."
The youma felt to the ground in power! Eternal Sailor moon yelled, "Silver Moon. Crystal Power Kiss!" It hit the youma full force, but the youma became ash, for that it was it was made from. Eternal Sailor moon then rushed to Mars, "Sailor Mars, wake up! Onegai!!" Eternal Sailor Moon just stood there, as the wind around her brushed up against her face. Two of her friends got injured trying the best to save her, and now look at them. Battered, bruised and weaken until they lost consciousness. Eternal Sailor moon said, "Minna, we need to get Makoto and Rei to a hospital." Everyone de-transformed and help the two injured teens.
Usagi stood in the waiting room, after the others brought the two girls to the hospital. They were both currently in emergency, after being emitted. Ami placed an arm around Usagi, and said, "Usagi, onegai, sit down." Usagi shook her head, and shrugged Ami's arm from around her neck.
Her two best friends were there, fighting for there lives, and Ami was telling her to sit down? No, she wouldn't. She had to be strong for Makoto and Rei. Minako sat between Yaten and Taiki. Seiya was leaning against a wall. Seiya had called Haruka earlier, and the two didn't have a very pleasant telephone conversation.
The telephone conversation
Seiya dialed Haruka's cell number after Usagi gave it to him. She couldn't bear to tell Haruka that her Princess was in the hospital, fighting for her life. Haruka answered after the first ring, "Hello?" Seiya responded, "Haruka-san. This is Seiya. Makoto is in the hospital!" Haruka's voice became cold as she heard Seiya. She asked, "What did you do to her?" Seiya became angry, "I didn't harm her if that is what you are insinuating. We came to help the sensh!. You and the outers weren't helping and Makoto got injured very badly!!" Seiya voice became sarcastic, "I can tell you really care for Makoto!" Haruka blew up, "Listening to me, you fucking son of a bitch, Makoto is my princess, friend, and the Imooto-chan I never had! Don't you fucking say I don't give a shit about her! I love her, and you tell me I don't care? You are going to fucking die, you hear me?" Seiya said, "Yea whatever. She is at Jubann General. I'm sure you know where that is!" Haruka said, "I know where it it! I'll be there!" Seiya just hung up, not wanted to hear Haruka. The two never liked each other very much.
End of telephone conversation
Seiya glanced at the doors. The outers hadn't shown up yet, and Seiya was less than thrilled to see Haruka again, especially during this hard time. Suddenly the doors flew open, revealing an angry group of the outers. Haruka's eyes fell on Seiya, who was leaning against the wall. She smirked at him, and he sneered at her.
Michiru ran to Usagi and asked, "What happened?" Setsuna was holding a crying Hotaru to her. Usagi whispered, "A terrible youma attack. Both Makoto and Rei are in there." Michiru nodded and gave Usagi a hug. The small moon princess returned it, crying on Michiru's shoulder.
Suddenly another door opened, revealing a doctor. The doctor asked, "Are you all here for Miss Kino Makoto, and Miss Hino Rei?" The group nodded, and looked a bit scared at the doctor's serious expression. The doctor started, "Both of the girls lost quite a bit of blood. Miss Hino Rei has a broken arm, and a slight concussion. Now Miss Kino Makoto isn't so lucky. She has three broken ribs, a broken right arm, her left leg was fractured, her abdominal area was severely wounded, and she has fallen into a coma. I'm surprised she had made it this fair. I am sorry, but I am not sure she is going to make it through the night." Everyone bursted into tears, and the hollowness in their hearts would never go away!
Author's note: I hope y'all like it. I am sorry if it is not what you were thinking, but I'm in college and it's crazed to try to keep up with everything. Raven and I (SailorLita18) both have busy lives. I hope y'all enjoy this. We will review as soon as we get 5 reviews! Onegai!
Also the thing about Makoto being the outer's princess. Basically since Jupiter was a rogue planet, she wasn't a senshi for the inners. During the Silver Millennium there wasn't a Sailor Jupiter until near the end. You see, Princess Serenity had 4 senshi: Mercury, Venus, Earth, and Mars. During this time, everyone knew Queen Beryl was around. Chiba Sakura (sailor Earth) and Prince Endymion's sister, went on a suicidal mission, and never returned. During this same time, the outers: Uranus, Neptune, Saturn, and Pluto protected, since she didn't know much about battles, because she was never trained to be a warrior. When Sailor Earth perished, Queen Serenity called upon Makoto to become a Senshi and become a protector for her daughter. Makoto became Sailor Jupiter, and quickly learned to fight, much to everyone's surprise. So basically, she protects Usagi, and the outers protect her.
And if you are wondering where the outer's were during the battle, they only come if Makoto summons them, and Makoto, unfortunately, didn't have time to. They can felt the strength of their princess, but for some reason, this time they couldn't. Makoto is now near death in a hospital!
We will have pairings in this story, but at the time they are undecided. Which guys do you went in the story?
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Mamoru- 0
Yuichiro (Chad)- 0
Shinozaki (Ken)- 0
Ryo (Greg)- 0
Motoki (Andrew)- 0
Please vote for at least 3. Well that's it for now. No matter who you vote for everyone is staying, but it's just a matter of fixing who with who. Well, arigatou minna!