Hi readers!!!!!!!! This is a Kai/Hilary story; I hope you like it, please, leave reviews!!!!!!
I'm checking all the spellings and grammar mistakes from the first chapters. I really hope they get better. That doesn't mean I'm going to delay updating, just I can't stand seeing the story with lots of mistakes. Anyway, I can't guarantee this'll be perfect, I'm sorry.
Ages:
Kai: 15 almost 16
Ray: 15.5
Tyson, Max, Kenny: 15
Hilary: 15.5
Enjoy!
Surrounded by pinkish walls, lying on a soft bed with pink covers, wearing a white skirt, a long sleeved, black t-shirt, was a brunette girl, completely lost in her feelings and thoughts.
HILARY'S POV
"As I see him now… well, he's a really cool Blader and a pretty nice guy… but years ago, he was not the guy I actually know. My friends used to call him 'Mr. Strict' or 'Mr. Sourpuss'. But since I know many things have changed, however, don't know exactly when this happened. He has always been a good Blader, but he has too many things in his –even now- secret mind, that we don't know. Now he's a 15-year-old teen, but still a loner. I wish I knew more about his childhood. Because when I first met him, he didn't… even… say 'hello' or something. It still annoys me thinking about that.
Nowadays, he's my bishie, but I'm afraid of him finding it out… he's always aware of everything, besides, I know Tyson always says I'm so evident, I wish I weren't. I love him since he saved my life risking his, twice. But he doesn't know that I like him, at least I don't think he knows.
I just wished he's not in love with another girl… my crush on him is very big, I have to say… Kai… what a strong name."
NORMAL POV
Someone knocked the door. –"Hilary! - Came a voice shouting from outdoors. Someone is looking for you!"
"What?"-Asked the brown haired girl. She stepped down from her bed and opened her bedroom door. "Who's there mom?"
"It's Tyson, he's looking for you dear."
"Hn…" the girl walked to the door and opened it to see the team she was helping. Ray, Max, Kenny and Tyson were standing in front of her house door.
"Time to practice!!! You wanna come with us???"-Said Tyson. She nearly believed Tyson was going training.
"Who are going to be there?" she asked curiously, only one aim in her mind.
"Ray, Max, Kenny and me. Kai is in the park, he said he needed to think.¬¬" laughed the navy-haired boy.
"I…I…I have to do some homework! See you later guys!" –lied the girl, closing the door in front of their faces.
"Bah, whatever!!"- the boy left immediately.
'What could have happened to him?' though Hilary, as she put on her jacket. "Mom, I'll be back soon!" she smiled, while grabbing the house keys from the key holder. She opened the door and once she made sure Tyson and the guys had already left she started to walk in the direction of the park.
Sitting on the grass, arms folded, eyes closed, was a 15 year old guy completely lost in his feelings and thoughts.
KAI'S POV
'What was I thinking? Telling her won't be a solution! What if she doesn't like me? What will I say? … I have to give up to that idea too. So…, when can be the best moment? No way; I'll write her a letter. But… what if Tyson reads it first? He can do such a thing… and I would have failed again. And there won't be another possibility. Ray said that the best way was telling her face to face. But I've got to admit… I don't have self-esteem when talking about love… I'm not sure if I could handle that…'
NORMAL POV
"Kai! Here you are!"- Said a very familiar voice, which disturbed Kai's feelings and made him blush immediately. Kai turned to his back.
"Hil- Hilary?"
hey! What do you think about it? Any suggestions accepted, don't forget to REVIEW, PLEASE!!!!!
Hope I can update soon,
Bye,
Mika-