Star Wars Episode VII
Chapter 1
(Editor's note: in no way do I own or work with Star Wars (ha I wish) and this is based more on the Young Jedi Knight's (duh). Except I've changed a few things. Please if you read tell me what you thought. I'm no great shakes with Grammar but I've at least tried to get the characters names spelled right. If anything's amiss let me know politely! Also if you've read this BEFORE I do own the plot line anyways. I had previously posted this under lothlorienjedi and it was all complete but something went wrong with fanfiction.net so I had to rewrite it again (what a nerd I didn't save it!) so that's why. Anyways read, enjoy and review!)
"Why are we negotiating with THEM again?' Twenty six year old Jaina Solo asked her father. Jaina looked a little like Han she had his same wavy brown hair (though hers was longer) and pretty blue eyes from her mother. "Because THEY have a secret weapon that could destroy everything do you understand? As far as I know and I know a lot they haven't made a deal with the Siths YET but it could be tempting for them especially if their offered the Freedoms which we ourselves can give them." Master Luke (Jaina's Uncle) said coming in. As always on "business trips" Uncle Luke wore his black traveling cloak. Uncle Luke had short wavy blonde hair and blue eyes. "Everything will work itself out." Princess Leia Organa Solo said walking up to her husband who was in the cockpit and placing a hand on his shoulder while giving Luke a reassuring smile. "I hope so." Luke said. "We shall make it Master Luke we have the Force remember?" Tenel Ka said. Tenel Ka was trying to fix part of the computer system that had gone bad during the long journey to Talathea. "Here let me help you." Jacen Solo offered his best friend besides his twin (Jaina) as Tenel Ka sighed in frustration. "Dad I think something else -" Eighteen year old Anakin Solo said falling down a few steps as the ship lurched forward. "Jacen let me HELP Tenel Ka because your the VET remember?" Jaina said sliding across the floor. The ship shook froze and the lights went out.
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Eighteen year old Kerri Simpson sat on her bed showing her best friends Nineteen year old Stacy Nazar and Twenty year old Melissa Dominguez her "song book" a new song that she had recently written. "What do you think of it?" Kerri asked when she finished singing. Kerri had long brown hair and blue eyes slightly on the short side (okay four feet and eleven inches). "It was pretty good just some of the wording needs to be fixed." Melissa said pulling her dark black/brown hair into a pony tail. Melissa was part Mexican and had dark brown skin and brown eyes. "That's it but otherwise it's awesome." Stacy said nodding. Stacy had short black hair with blonde streaks in it and brown eyes. Though the middle aged one Stacy was taller than either girl beside her. Melissa was a foot taller than Kerri.
"Kerri it's time for young women's." Mrs. Blackman (Kerri's mum) said poking her head into the room. (Editor's note: Young women's is a Mormon thingy but it's not the main point in the story so you're saved. LOL. No uh it's just where I want one of the events to happen but anyways you'll see what I mean. Continuing with the story.) Mrs. Blackman had short brown hair with blonde highlights it was obvious where Kerri's height came from. "All right I'll get going." Kerri said sighing looking at her watch. It was only seven oh five sure it was SUPPOSED to start at seven p.m. but it never did people would be there but some would be missing and they'd wait for them before starting. There was a joke that it was MST (Mormon standard time) everybody was late.
Kerri grabbed the keys to her Jeep Wrangler and beckoned her friends outside. Melissa and Stacy followed though both went rather slowly. Melissa usually stayed away from religious fanatics but had befriended Kerri because she wasn't physco. Stacy wasn't a crazy religious nut either so Melissa was comfortable with both girls. Kerri got in the driver's seat as she trusted nobody else with her baby. If there were two things Kerri loved in life besides her family and friends it would be (1) her car (2) independence okay three things (3) San Diego City California. Kerri was unfortunately or fortunately stuck in a college town in Norman Oklahoma. Her real Dad lived in San Diego and she was sent out to visit him every year so she loved the City.
Kerri pulled into the Church parking Lot at seven thirty p.m. Okay they were more than a little late so the meeting's would have been started by then (they had stopped at seven eleven) but to Kerri's surprise the parking lot was completely empty. Kerri frowned. "Are you sure it's Wednesday?" Melissa asked sighing feeling a little restless. "Yeah I'm positive come on." Kerri said pulling into a parking spot and shutting the engine off. "Well the parking lot's not positive." Stacy said nervously sharing a look with Melissa. Something weird was going on. Kerri however seemed not to notice it or determined not to notice it. "Come on let's take a look around maybe they went somewhere and we can meet em there." "Yeah but you guys aren't allowed to drive to the places without a leader." Melissa said slightly teasing. Kerri saw Melissa and Stacy share a look when Kerri opened the unlocked door to the building. "What?" "Isn't it a LITLLE weird when there's not a soul insight and the church door happens to be unlocked and its activities night so this place should be full of PEOPLE?" Stacy hinted. "Maybe it was supposed to start at eight we are playing Volleyball in the gym. Come on let's go set things up in the Gym." Kerri said firmly leading them down the hall. "Kerri come on be realistic." Melissa pleaded. "What I am! You two are acting well extremely odd." Kerri said rolling her eyes. "You mean you don't get the feeling something's going to happen?" Stacy asked incredulously. "Uh hello we're in the church building what's the worst that could happen?" Kerri asked pulling open the gym door before hesitating a little. Melissa flicked on the lights.
The Gym was really a Basketball court with a high wooden stage with two hoops on either end. Kerri hoisted herself up onto the stage. Melissa and Stacy followed shrugging their shoulders. "Let's get things set up." Kerri said pointing to a ladder on the far side of the stage that led to a door. "Right after you." Stacy said grinning. "All right I'll hand things down to you." Kerri said with absolute no fear on her face or in her voice even though she too was beginning to have very deep misgivings. Somebody had to act rationally. With a determined look Kerri began to climb the ladder and opened the top door. Meanwhile Melissa sat on the stage and pulled out a book she had been reading earlier on Wicca. Stacy stood at the bottom of the ladder waiting for Kerri to reach the top. "Would you hurry UP my clothes are going out of style." Stacy joked. "Your clothes were NEVER in STYLE." Kerri hollered back finally opening the door.
Kerri gasped all she could see was the inside of the Millennium Falcon or the inside of another space ship totally like it. The light's inside were blinking blue and green and were going on and off. Kerri caught of a boy struggling with some sort leverage. Kerri was thrown full force into the boy who had been struggling with the leverage. He had light brown wavy hair and blue eyes. "Can you get off me so I can shut the door?" The boy snapped. "Sure no problem it's not like I ASKED to be thrown onto you full force." Kerri grumbled getting up. "Every woman wishes she were." He said giving her an impish grin. "Please than all women must have bad taste." Kerri retorted upon seeing Luke and Leia fainting promptly.
Stacy and Melissa heard their friends cry for help. Melissa shot up the ladder first. "Don't try to close the door yet." A woman ordered. A woman with one arm helped Melissa into the space ship. "Thank you." Melissa froze when she saw Han Solo standing next to Luke and Leia. "Somebody tell me I'm dreaming." Melissa murmured as the latch to the Mellennium Falcon closed shut. "SOMEBODY HAD BETTER OPEN THE DOOR I REFUSE TO FLOAT THROUGH SPACE ON THE BACK OF THE BLOODY SPACE SHIP!" Stacy screamed. Kerri upon hearing this woke up saw Leia and groaned. "What kind of drugs did they give you people?" Kerri asked. "You are not dreaming and we're not on drugs." Luke said firmly. "Oh God what did I do to deserve this." "Honey someone needs our help she's over there clinging to the ship." "I'll get her!" Anakin volunteered. Kerri rolled her eyes at the boy she had landed on. "And I suppose you're a hero too?" Kerri couldn't help snapping. "I'm more of one than you are. I'm training to be a full fledged Jedi Knight do you have the FORCE?" Anakin argued. Jaina caught Jacen's eye and they snickered. "I will get the woman." "I MEAN IT I'M SUING!" "Somebody please get her down from there." Kerri begged. "I'll do it." Tenel Ka volunteered. Jacen nodded. Within minutes Tenel Ka had Stacy safely inside the Falcon.
Luke sat in front of Kerri, Melissa, and Stacy soon they were introducing themselves. Anakin stood behind Kerri his arms folded with a look of dislike for the girl in front of him on his face. Kerri was scowling with equal displeasure at the boy behind her. "You three have been bought here at the hour of need. You will be trained as Jedi. We need to go back home." Luke said. "But Uncle - "No butt's. Negotiations will have to wait the safety of these three is more important as is all of us." Luke said. "Ready to fly a ship?" Han joked with Kerri. "You serious?" Kerri asked mouth opened wide. "Absolutely kid." Han said. "I'll teach her." Anakin volunteered. "You will NOT." Kerri barked at him. "I'll teach her since I know how to fly this thing better than any of you since me and the Falcon go way back." Han said. Kerri slid into the cockpit seat rather nervously. "You were born to fly kid." Han joked. "I could fly better." Anakin said peering over their shoulders. "No you could not." Kerri said her eyes narrowed as she accepted the challenge.
It took them a few hours to reach the jungle moon at Yavin Four. It was a beautiful forest planet where the Jedi Academy was held. "Preparing for landing. Let me step in kid." Han said moving Kerri over. Kerri stood next to Anakin against her will because on the other side of him Jacen, Jaina, Tenel Ka, Leia and Luke had gathered around the cockpit. "You're always in the way." Anakin hissed at her. "ME I didn't ask to be thrown onto the bloody ship in the FIRST PLACE!" Kerri said. Everybody looked at them including Stacy and Melissa who had just joined them. "Sorry." Kerri and Anakin apologized throwing each other dirty looks. "Kids I know your madly passionately in love but please try to control your tempers." Han teased them receiving an icy glare from two directions. "Daneith am I clear for landing?" Han asked the control towers of Yavin four. "Copy that mate. Platform's all yours baby." Daneith responded.
Han landed the Falcon smoothly on the square platform that floated in midair. Kerri couldn't help but be impressed with the Jedi School that was built like an old temple. It was beautiful blue and white with other colored stones in it. "Wow." Kerri said softly. "Never seen anything like this have you?" Anakin smirked. Kerri elbowed him. "OW!" Anakin complained. Leia shot her son a look. "Sorry mum." Anakin said grinning. Han opened the latch for the landing platform to be released. "All ready to get off?" Han asked. "More than ready." Kerri said grinning. "This way please." Jacen said taking her arm. Kerri smiled.
As soon as their feet touched the platform all Jedi's and trainee had their Light sabers out. Leia and Han had pulled out laser guns. Han threw Kerri an extra one Kerri stared at it numbly. Something went whizzing by her ear. "Watch out!" Anakin told her. Kerri stumbled backwards as more fired was aimed at her. Light sabers were blocking storm troopers there was too many. "What's happening?" Stacy asked. "Judging by the state of this hostile take over!" Kerri muttered clumsily shooting her gun at whatever was in a white storm trooper's outfit. "Uh Dad time to go?" Anakin suggested. "Now would be a good time." Luke agreed. "NOW!" Leia shouted as one they all ran into the ship. Han fought to shut the landing ramp again as storm troopers threatened to come up. Luke, Leia, Tenel Ka, Jacen, Kerri, Stacy, Melissa and Anakin were fighting the storm troopers that had managed to get on. "TAKE HER UP!" Han ordered. Kerri slipped to the cock pit she had barely got the engines running when she saw a drop of her blood fall to the floor. Her arm had been shot and wounded. "I'll take over miss." Anakin said slicing the storm trooper in half and grabbing the Falcon's wheel. "Radio's dead." Han said grimly after they cleared the rest of them away and were heading away from Yavin four. "I hope Daneith can keep the school safe for us." Luke remarked. "Me too." Jacen said slumping in a seat that was built for a Wookie (Chewbacca Han's friend) to copilot the ship. "Oh dear. Let me fix that arm for you." Leia led Kerri back into the back as Yavin Four faded into the distance.
Afallenstar
Chapter 1
(Editor's note: in no way do I own or work with Star Wars (ha I wish) and this is based more on the Young Jedi Knight's (duh). Except I've changed a few things. Please if you read tell me what you thought. I'm no great shakes with Grammar but I've at least tried to get the characters names spelled right. If anything's amiss let me know politely! Also if you've read this BEFORE I do own the plot line anyways. I had previously posted this under lothlorienjedi and it was all complete but something went wrong with fanfiction.net so I had to rewrite it again (what a nerd I didn't save it!) so that's why. Anyways read, enjoy and review!)
"Why are we negotiating with THEM again?' Twenty six year old Jaina Solo asked her father. Jaina looked a little like Han she had his same wavy brown hair (though hers was longer) and pretty blue eyes from her mother. "Because THEY have a secret weapon that could destroy everything do you understand? As far as I know and I know a lot they haven't made a deal with the Siths YET but it could be tempting for them especially if their offered the Freedoms which we ourselves can give them." Master Luke (Jaina's Uncle) said coming in. As always on "business trips" Uncle Luke wore his black traveling cloak. Uncle Luke had short wavy blonde hair and blue eyes. "Everything will work itself out." Princess Leia Organa Solo said walking up to her husband who was in the cockpit and placing a hand on his shoulder while giving Luke a reassuring smile. "I hope so." Luke said. "We shall make it Master Luke we have the Force remember?" Tenel Ka said. Tenel Ka was trying to fix part of the computer system that had gone bad during the long journey to Talathea. "Here let me help you." Jacen Solo offered his best friend besides his twin (Jaina) as Tenel Ka sighed in frustration. "Dad I think something else -" Eighteen year old Anakin Solo said falling down a few steps as the ship lurched forward. "Jacen let me HELP Tenel Ka because your the VET remember?" Jaina said sliding across the floor. The ship shook froze and the lights went out.
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Eighteen year old Kerri Simpson sat on her bed showing her best friends Nineteen year old Stacy Nazar and Twenty year old Melissa Dominguez her "song book" a new song that she had recently written. "What do you think of it?" Kerri asked when she finished singing. Kerri had long brown hair and blue eyes slightly on the short side (okay four feet and eleven inches). "It was pretty good just some of the wording needs to be fixed." Melissa said pulling her dark black/brown hair into a pony tail. Melissa was part Mexican and had dark brown skin and brown eyes. "That's it but otherwise it's awesome." Stacy said nodding. Stacy had short black hair with blonde streaks in it and brown eyes. Though the middle aged one Stacy was taller than either girl beside her. Melissa was a foot taller than Kerri.
"Kerri it's time for young women's." Mrs. Blackman (Kerri's mum) said poking her head into the room. (Editor's note: Young women's is a Mormon thingy but it's not the main point in the story so you're saved. LOL. No uh it's just where I want one of the events to happen but anyways you'll see what I mean. Continuing with the story.) Mrs. Blackman had short brown hair with blonde highlights it was obvious where Kerri's height came from. "All right I'll get going." Kerri said sighing looking at her watch. It was only seven oh five sure it was SUPPOSED to start at seven p.m. but it never did people would be there but some would be missing and they'd wait for them before starting. There was a joke that it was MST (Mormon standard time) everybody was late.
Kerri grabbed the keys to her Jeep Wrangler and beckoned her friends outside. Melissa and Stacy followed though both went rather slowly. Melissa usually stayed away from religious fanatics but had befriended Kerri because she wasn't physco. Stacy wasn't a crazy religious nut either so Melissa was comfortable with both girls. Kerri got in the driver's seat as she trusted nobody else with her baby. If there were two things Kerri loved in life besides her family and friends it would be (1) her car (2) independence okay three things (3) San Diego City California. Kerri was unfortunately or fortunately stuck in a college town in Norman Oklahoma. Her real Dad lived in San Diego and she was sent out to visit him every year so she loved the City.
Kerri pulled into the Church parking Lot at seven thirty p.m. Okay they were more than a little late so the meeting's would have been started by then (they had stopped at seven eleven) but to Kerri's surprise the parking lot was completely empty. Kerri frowned. "Are you sure it's Wednesday?" Melissa asked sighing feeling a little restless. "Yeah I'm positive come on." Kerri said pulling into a parking spot and shutting the engine off. "Well the parking lot's not positive." Stacy said nervously sharing a look with Melissa. Something weird was going on. Kerri however seemed not to notice it or determined not to notice it. "Come on let's take a look around maybe they went somewhere and we can meet em there." "Yeah but you guys aren't allowed to drive to the places without a leader." Melissa said slightly teasing. Kerri saw Melissa and Stacy share a look when Kerri opened the unlocked door to the building. "What?" "Isn't it a LITLLE weird when there's not a soul insight and the church door happens to be unlocked and its activities night so this place should be full of PEOPLE?" Stacy hinted. "Maybe it was supposed to start at eight we are playing Volleyball in the gym. Come on let's go set things up in the Gym." Kerri said firmly leading them down the hall. "Kerri come on be realistic." Melissa pleaded. "What I am! You two are acting well extremely odd." Kerri said rolling her eyes. "You mean you don't get the feeling something's going to happen?" Stacy asked incredulously. "Uh hello we're in the church building what's the worst that could happen?" Kerri asked pulling open the gym door before hesitating a little. Melissa flicked on the lights.
The Gym was really a Basketball court with a high wooden stage with two hoops on either end. Kerri hoisted herself up onto the stage. Melissa and Stacy followed shrugging their shoulders. "Let's get things set up." Kerri said pointing to a ladder on the far side of the stage that led to a door. "Right after you." Stacy said grinning. "All right I'll hand things down to you." Kerri said with absolute no fear on her face or in her voice even though she too was beginning to have very deep misgivings. Somebody had to act rationally. With a determined look Kerri began to climb the ladder and opened the top door. Meanwhile Melissa sat on the stage and pulled out a book she had been reading earlier on Wicca. Stacy stood at the bottom of the ladder waiting for Kerri to reach the top. "Would you hurry UP my clothes are going out of style." Stacy joked. "Your clothes were NEVER in STYLE." Kerri hollered back finally opening the door.
Kerri gasped all she could see was the inside of the Millennium Falcon or the inside of another space ship totally like it. The light's inside were blinking blue and green and were going on and off. Kerri caught of a boy struggling with some sort leverage. Kerri was thrown full force into the boy who had been struggling with the leverage. He had light brown wavy hair and blue eyes. "Can you get off me so I can shut the door?" The boy snapped. "Sure no problem it's not like I ASKED to be thrown onto you full force." Kerri grumbled getting up. "Every woman wishes she were." He said giving her an impish grin. "Please than all women must have bad taste." Kerri retorted upon seeing Luke and Leia fainting promptly.
Stacy and Melissa heard their friends cry for help. Melissa shot up the ladder first. "Don't try to close the door yet." A woman ordered. A woman with one arm helped Melissa into the space ship. "Thank you." Melissa froze when she saw Han Solo standing next to Luke and Leia. "Somebody tell me I'm dreaming." Melissa murmured as the latch to the Mellennium Falcon closed shut. "SOMEBODY HAD BETTER OPEN THE DOOR I REFUSE TO FLOAT THROUGH SPACE ON THE BACK OF THE BLOODY SPACE SHIP!" Stacy screamed. Kerri upon hearing this woke up saw Leia and groaned. "What kind of drugs did they give you people?" Kerri asked. "You are not dreaming and we're not on drugs." Luke said firmly. "Oh God what did I do to deserve this." "Honey someone needs our help she's over there clinging to the ship." "I'll get her!" Anakin volunteered. Kerri rolled her eyes at the boy she had landed on. "And I suppose you're a hero too?" Kerri couldn't help snapping. "I'm more of one than you are. I'm training to be a full fledged Jedi Knight do you have the FORCE?" Anakin argued. Jaina caught Jacen's eye and they snickered. "I will get the woman." "I MEAN IT I'M SUING!" "Somebody please get her down from there." Kerri begged. "I'll do it." Tenel Ka volunteered. Jacen nodded. Within minutes Tenel Ka had Stacy safely inside the Falcon.
Luke sat in front of Kerri, Melissa, and Stacy soon they were introducing themselves. Anakin stood behind Kerri his arms folded with a look of dislike for the girl in front of him on his face. Kerri was scowling with equal displeasure at the boy behind her. "You three have been bought here at the hour of need. You will be trained as Jedi. We need to go back home." Luke said. "But Uncle - "No butt's. Negotiations will have to wait the safety of these three is more important as is all of us." Luke said. "Ready to fly a ship?" Han joked with Kerri. "You serious?" Kerri asked mouth opened wide. "Absolutely kid." Han said. "I'll teach her." Anakin volunteered. "You will NOT." Kerri barked at him. "I'll teach her since I know how to fly this thing better than any of you since me and the Falcon go way back." Han said. Kerri slid into the cockpit seat rather nervously. "You were born to fly kid." Han joked. "I could fly better." Anakin said peering over their shoulders. "No you could not." Kerri said her eyes narrowed as she accepted the challenge.
It took them a few hours to reach the jungle moon at Yavin Four. It was a beautiful forest planet where the Jedi Academy was held. "Preparing for landing. Let me step in kid." Han said moving Kerri over. Kerri stood next to Anakin against her will because on the other side of him Jacen, Jaina, Tenel Ka, Leia and Luke had gathered around the cockpit. "You're always in the way." Anakin hissed at her. "ME I didn't ask to be thrown onto the bloody ship in the FIRST PLACE!" Kerri said. Everybody looked at them including Stacy and Melissa who had just joined them. "Sorry." Kerri and Anakin apologized throwing each other dirty looks. "Kids I know your madly passionately in love but please try to control your tempers." Han teased them receiving an icy glare from two directions. "Daneith am I clear for landing?" Han asked the control towers of Yavin four. "Copy that mate. Platform's all yours baby." Daneith responded.
Han landed the Falcon smoothly on the square platform that floated in midair. Kerri couldn't help but be impressed with the Jedi School that was built like an old temple. It was beautiful blue and white with other colored stones in it. "Wow." Kerri said softly. "Never seen anything like this have you?" Anakin smirked. Kerri elbowed him. "OW!" Anakin complained. Leia shot her son a look. "Sorry mum." Anakin said grinning. Han opened the latch for the landing platform to be released. "All ready to get off?" Han asked. "More than ready." Kerri said grinning. "This way please." Jacen said taking her arm. Kerri smiled.
As soon as their feet touched the platform all Jedi's and trainee had their Light sabers out. Leia and Han had pulled out laser guns. Han threw Kerri an extra one Kerri stared at it numbly. Something went whizzing by her ear. "Watch out!" Anakin told her. Kerri stumbled backwards as more fired was aimed at her. Light sabers were blocking storm troopers there was too many. "What's happening?" Stacy asked. "Judging by the state of this hostile take over!" Kerri muttered clumsily shooting her gun at whatever was in a white storm trooper's outfit. "Uh Dad time to go?" Anakin suggested. "Now would be a good time." Luke agreed. "NOW!" Leia shouted as one they all ran into the ship. Han fought to shut the landing ramp again as storm troopers threatened to come up. Luke, Leia, Tenel Ka, Jacen, Kerri, Stacy, Melissa and Anakin were fighting the storm troopers that had managed to get on. "TAKE HER UP!" Han ordered. Kerri slipped to the cock pit she had barely got the engines running when she saw a drop of her blood fall to the floor. Her arm had been shot and wounded. "I'll take over miss." Anakin said slicing the storm trooper in half and grabbing the Falcon's wheel. "Radio's dead." Han said grimly after they cleared the rest of them away and were heading away from Yavin four. "I hope Daneith can keep the school safe for us." Luke remarked. "Me too." Jacen said slumping in a seat that was built for a Wookie (Chewbacca Han's friend) to copilot the ship. "Oh dear. Let me fix that arm for you." Leia led Kerri back into the back as Yavin Four faded into the distance.
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