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This chapter I'm hoping will be a better one and lead you more into the story.
Body Snatcher
Chapter One
"Your Majesty," a buck-toothed goblin lisped. "It has come to our attention Belinda The
Thief has returned to the Underground."
"Is that so?" Jareth cooly said. "It's about time. She would have never made it another
day Aboveground. All that energy being used up so stay in that body is such a waste. Well, I'm
going to have to visit her."
"Are you sure that's wise Sire?" another goblin cut in. "After your past history I doubt
that it would be wise to visit the woman that you were going to marry."
"Don't worry about it Artamus," Jareth said back to the elderly goblin. "Belinda
wouldn't let our past interfere with our friendship."
"I don't know about that my King," Artamus started. "She wasn't too happy finding out
about Sarah and you and Belinda had broken off the wedding years before hand."
"Belinda and I have been friends since I can remember and I hope to continue the
friendship even now as she so boldly voiced her opinion about the woman I love."
~Flashback~
"Jareth! What is the meaning of this?" a storming red-headed woman hollered. Her big
blue eyes furious and her teeth clenched together. Jareth looked back at her.
"I see you have a new body Belinda" he said talking a sip of blood red wine from the
elegant crystal glass. "Now back to your question, Of what?"
"Of this woman running your Labyrinth, Jareth you said to me that you would never
allow this woman to run your Labyrinth."
"I did say that didn't I," he pondered. "Well now that were are not getting married
anymore then I don't see why I should keep what I said."
"Listen Jareth, this little obsession of your has to stop. I could put up with it to a point.
You know she will win and it will ruin your reputation and the Labyrinths'."
"Don't tell me what to do. You're the one who broke off the wedding. You have no right
telling me what is right what is wrong. What I should do and what I shouldn't."
"You called her name out when we were making love." she pointed out. "But I still love
you. I want you back." she got onto her knees looked up at him pleadingly.
"Sorry Belinda, " he whispered. I pulled her up to her feet. "I love Sarah." Belinda's
face turned the same shade as her newly acquired hair.
"You will be sorry Jareth, I will make you love me again and your lovely little Sarah will
be gone frm your memory. She is no good for you. Nothing good ever came from marrying a
human. I will see her burn in hell!"
"Enough! Get Out!" Jareth boomed. And she was gone into a cloud of glitter.
~Flashback ends~
Jareth let out a sigh.
"I'll visit her later on in the evening."
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Well that's chapter one. In the next chapter Belinda and Jareth will meet again.
Sarah will come into the story soon.
This chapter I'm hoping will be a better one and lead you more into the story.
Body Snatcher
Chapter One
"Your Majesty," a buck-toothed goblin lisped. "It has come to our attention Belinda The
Thief has returned to the Underground."
"Is that so?" Jareth cooly said. "It's about time. She would have never made it another
day Aboveground. All that energy being used up so stay in that body is such a waste. Well, I'm
going to have to visit her."
"Are you sure that's wise Sire?" another goblin cut in. "After your past history I doubt
that it would be wise to visit the woman that you were going to marry."
"Don't worry about it Artamus," Jareth said back to the elderly goblin. "Belinda
wouldn't let our past interfere with our friendship."
"I don't know about that my King," Artamus started. "She wasn't too happy finding out
about Sarah and you and Belinda had broken off the wedding years before hand."
"Belinda and I have been friends since I can remember and I hope to continue the
friendship even now as she so boldly voiced her opinion about the woman I love."
~Flashback~
"Jareth! What is the meaning of this?" a storming red-headed woman hollered. Her big
blue eyes furious and her teeth clenched together. Jareth looked back at her.
"I see you have a new body Belinda" he said talking a sip of blood red wine from the
elegant crystal glass. "Now back to your question, Of what?"
"Of this woman running your Labyrinth, Jareth you said to me that you would never
allow this woman to run your Labyrinth."
"I did say that didn't I," he pondered. "Well now that were are not getting married
anymore then I don't see why I should keep what I said."
"Listen Jareth, this little obsession of your has to stop. I could put up with it to a point.
You know she will win and it will ruin your reputation and the Labyrinths'."
"Don't tell me what to do. You're the one who broke off the wedding. You have no right
telling me what is right what is wrong. What I should do and what I shouldn't."
"You called her name out when we were making love." she pointed out. "But I still love
you. I want you back." she got onto her knees looked up at him pleadingly.
"Sorry Belinda, " he whispered. I pulled her up to her feet. "I love Sarah." Belinda's
face turned the same shade as her newly acquired hair.
"You will be sorry Jareth, I will make you love me again and your lovely little Sarah will
be gone frm your memory. She is no good for you. Nothing good ever came from marrying a
human. I will see her burn in hell!"
"Enough! Get Out!" Jareth boomed. And she was gone into a cloud of glitter.
~Flashback ends~
Jareth let out a sigh.
"I'll visit her later on in the evening."
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Well that's chapter one. In the next chapter Belinda and Jareth will meet again.
Sarah will come into the story soon.