The Untouchable

Chapter One: The Beginning

By: Ruth3

Disclaimer: I own nothing, all belongs to the magnificent mind of J.K. Rowling!

Summary: Lily Evans, now Fifth Year at Hogwarts, was made an Untouchable – someone who CANNOT date within their own house. What happens when James Potter (the Ladies' Man) wants her? *R&R* to find out!

Author's Note: This is my second attempt to a Lily Evans – James Potter romance. This one will hopefully be really good, because I know it would be something that I would really want to read. Please enjoy it and any feed back – good or bad – is welcomed! Enjoy!

         

        Lily lay helplessly in her four-poster bed in the Girl's Dormitory of the Gryffindor Tower. It is now an official week since Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry started its newest term, and all week Lily has had the same problem - sleeping. Every time she was asleep, she'd wake up – sweat covering her entire body and trickling down her forehead. She would toss and turn, her head buzzing with emotion – all because of an incident, an incident that happened long ago. It happened on her first day at Hogwarts, now in Fifth Year, this incident still haunted her in a negative and positive way – an incident that played the most important role to her social status…

Flashback

          A little red-headed girl boarded the Hogwart's Express and made her way, dragging her trunk, to the last compartment that was, fortunately for her, deserted. Lily would be attending Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. A witch, Lily? Lily didn't even know that magic had existed until she got her letter a month ago – how proud her parents were, a witch in the family! Unfortunately, her use-to-be-best-friends sister didn't feel the same – she figured Lily was a traitor – abnormal – a freak. Her sister, Petunia, wouldn't even look at her and if she did, it was a look that held pure loathe and hate.

        Lily already had it hard as it is, not very popular in her Muggle Private School, actually she would be called a "Loner." She had no friends – only her books and studies. She had no sense of style, other than what Petunia has helped her with. She was a very plain girl, she wore blouses – either blue, white, or cream and skirts that came down three inches below her knees that were either navy or black, she only owned two sweaters – a tan one and a black one. She wore knee high stockings and navy buckled-shoes, and to top it all off – she wore glasses. Since she had no friends she sat by the same tree everyday and read her books, and during class she was the girl who knew all the answers but never said what they were – too shy and unconfident for her own good.

        Coming to a new school, she figured it would be the same – no friends, just books. She sat down on the empty seat in the empty compartment and pulled out her favorite magical book; Hogwarts, a History – it would be her fifth time reading it. About fifteen minutes later two girls entered the room, Lily who was too absorbed into her book – didn't even notice their presence. They, however didn't notice Lily as well – probably thought she was invisible like everyone else.

        One of the girls had waist-long, straight blonde hair and had stunning brown eyes. The other girl that accompanied her had shoulder-length brown hair with gorgeous blue eyes. Both were about the same height – and looked about the same age – maybe even possibly Lily's age.

        "Bella this one seems to be em – " The girl with brown hair started, until finally spotting Lily.

        "Mind if we sit?" The blonde girl asked.

        Lily just stared at them – too nervous and unconfident to say anything.

        "Alright then," the blonde girl said, "Name is Arabella Figg." Arabella stuck out her hand for Lily to shake, but Lily remained frozen. Arabella cast her friend an uncertain look and nodded.

        "Oh right," the girl with brown hair said, "My name is Paris Patil…and you are?"

        "L-Lily E-Evans," Lily stuttered helplessly, taking interest in the ground where her feet were perched.

        Paris shrugged her shoulders and sat down, Arabella following suit. Paris and Arabella consumed themselves into conversation between themselves – not bother Lily and Lily not bothering them. Lily returned to her book and read silently. When the train started to slow down Lily unnoticeable changed into her school robes, Arabella and Paris finally taking notice, did the same. The train came to a complete stop, and Arabella and Paris excitedly exited off the train, Lily being as small as she was – had trouble dragging her trunk off the train, which made her go slower. She finally exited and was pushed and shoved over to a giant-like figure.

        "Firs' years over here!" A man, or was it a giant, yelled. Lily was then summoned into a boat that was on a deep, scary looking lake. She was accompanied by the two girls who shared the compartment with her – Arabella and Paris, and a boy with dark hair, a handsome face, and glasses. The three of them were whispering frantically and kept on sneaking glances at Lily – obviously talking about her. It's already begun, Lily thought, my peers dislike me already!

        Soon they were being led into the castle – and then into the Great Hall. All the First Years lined up and were led to the front of the Great Hall, where every eye in the room was staring fixedly upon them – staff and students. Soon one of the professors brought out a stool and a wizard hat. The professor placed the stool in the middle and than sat the hat neatly on top. She than opened a long parchment that evidently had a list of names on it. She shouted out the first name and a tiny boy walked up to the stool, sat down, placed the hat upon his head, and nervously fidgeted. All of a sudden the hat seemed to come to life and started to barely move.

        "Hufflepuff!" It cried. More boys and girls went up to the stool and placed the hat upon their head until finally the professor called,

        "Evans, Lily!" Lily nervously walked to the stool, keeping her head faced down – watching her feet briskly move. She sat down upon the stool and placed the hat onto her head. Everything went dark – she was so tiny the hat had completely covered her vision. She then thought she was going crazy, for she thought the hat was speaking to her! But, alas, it was speaking – and to her!

        "Hmm, where to put such a brilliant mind as yourself. Ravenclaw would suit you best by your wits – but what about personality? You may be shy, but there seems to be another side that no one has seen – not even yourself. Where to put you? Hmm, difficult, yes. Well, I never yet have been wrong, so we better make it –

        "Gryffindor!"

        Lily quickly put the hat back upon the stool and clumsily walked to the Gryffindor table where there was clapping and cheery faces smiling and beckoning her towards them. She sat down on the corner, and stared anxiously at the stool – half of her hoping that those two girls would be sorted into Gryffindor as well.

        Arabella Figg was next to being sorted – and to Lily's delight she was placed into Gryffindor as well. Arabella gave her friend, Paris, a thumb's up before taking a seat, coincidentally by Lily at the Gryffindor table. After sever more people, Paris was finally sorted and was put into Gryffindor as well, she briskly walked towards the table and sat beside Arabella and they were already devoured into a new conversation – talking so softly that Lily could not here.

        "Remember what my older sister, Polly, said one day over the summer?" Paris asked devilishly.

        "No, what?" Arabella answered, honestly.

        "She said that Gryffindor hasn't had an Untouchable in years!"

        "A what?" Arabella asked, bewildered.

        "An Untouchable," Paris replied impatiently – rolling her eyes, "Someone who cannot date within their own house – but they become overly popular and everyone at Hogwarts knows who they are!"

        "Oh, that!" Arabella whispered loudly, remembering.

        "Yes," Paris said, her eyes flickering excitedly, "I say we make a magical contract with that red headed girl over there. What's her name again, Lily is it? Yes, I say we make her the Untouchable!"

        "Brilliant!" Arabella excitedly whispered, "But why?" Frowning slightly.

        "She obviously needs friends – and besides, if you look closely she actually is quite pretty, and we don't want her to take the attention from those four boys over there." Paris pointed towards four First Year boys, now that everyone had been sorted, who were sitting on the other end of the Gryffindor table. Arabella looked that way, and grinned devilishly as well.

        "Let's do it!"

        "You make the proposal!" Paris offered.

        "Alright," Arabella agreed. She than turned to face Lily.

        "Hello, once again, Lily dear," she said sweetly.

        "H-hi," Lily mumbled, staring at her plate.

        "No need to be shy – I was actually wondering if you'd like to be our friends." Lily looked up at her, filled with hope, "Seeing that you don't seem to know anyone," Arabella continued, "we would love to get to know you and be best of friends, especially since we will be living together and attending the same classes!"

        Lily smiled, delighted to the thought that two girls actually wanted to be friends with her – Lily Evans! Lily loosing her in confidence said excitedly, "I'd love to!"

        "Wonderful!" Paris cried. "One thing though."

        "Oh?" Lily asked, unsure now.

        "You will be the first Untouchable that Gryffindor has had in decades."

        "Er – sorry – what's an 'Untouchable?'" Lily asked, confused.

        "A person who cannot date within their own house, but is loved and looked up to by all," Paris informed her.

        Lily took a minute or so to think. Having friends was a better deal than having boyfriends – friends were something that lasted a lifetime, boyfriends were just basically 'flings.' Figuring that no guys would ever like her anyhow, she nodded her head in agreement.

        "Brilliant!" Arabella cried as she conjured up a piece of parchment that was obviously a contract. "Please just sign on that line, Lily."

        Lily did as she was told, and as soon as she was done signing her signature that parchment made a "Pop!" and disappeared. Then all three of the girls were busy striking up a delightful conversation.

End of Flashback

        Paris and Arabella had kept their word – they were the best of friends, the trio of Hogwarts. Lily was loved by everyone and looked up to as well. Paris and Arabella had turned her into a "Babe Magnet" by letting her lovely auburn hair down, letting her natural waves go into action, and dressing her in clothing that was still conservative but in a sexy manner, that made her one of the most stylish girls at school.

        Lily kept true to her word – by not dating any guys from Gryffindor, since that was her house, even though too many of them showed too much interest in her. Especially the Marauders, a group of four boys by the names of James Potter, Peter Pettigrew, Remus Lupin, and Sirius Black. Two out of the four were the hottest boys of their year – and almost the entire school, even though they were cocky and airheads, at least by Lily's standards, every girl still wanted to date them or at least have a snog.

        Which brings back the fact that Lily Evans, now Fifth Year, cannot even fall asleep – all due to this incident. Why? Because Gryffindor boys are looking more appealing than ever…

Author's Note: You like? oOo this fic is going to be SO much fun to write…I love it already!!

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Much Luv *xoxo* Hugs N Kisses! *MWAH!*

               

Ruth