I'm grateful for reviews and this time it is from Momi-kunai, July girl and fruitbasketrocks.
fruitbasketrocks, how are you sure it's Tohru and not Tooru? You can interpret it different way since Japanese has a complete different alphabet from ours... I should know since I've studied it for awhile now. I have another fanfiction as well here based on Fruits Basket and there I spell it another way, Tohru. It's the same with Kyou, some say Kyo, and Souma, or should I say Souhma, or Sohma? ^_^ It's just a change of a letter though so it's not really important. =)
~Narrator~
"Thoughts"
[Action]
NOTE: I'm not going to continue with this fic anymore since it hasn't been going that well, kinda sad (for me) but what else is there to do. I had decided with this fic I wanted to try a new style of writing I guess it didn't work that well.
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Shigure: Did you have fun today? ^_^
Tooru: Yes. "I wish I could tell them I met someone, but I have this feeling it would disturb them."
Ayame: TIME FOR DINNER! =D
Tooru: Ah! ^_^ Who made it?
Ayame: I, of course!
Tooru: Great, what did you make?
Ayame: Eh, ah, uh, I forgot to make it.
Hatori: [Gives away a sigh but is not surprised]
Tooru: Don't be too hard on yourself, I'll make it in a jiff!
Ayame: Your kindness just breaks my heart, sweetie. [cries in realif]
Shigure: I made the desert! Guess what it is? TOO LATE! COOKIES is the answer!
Hatori: Don't you make cookies everyday?
Shigure: So?
Hatori: I'm just tired of cookies...
Shigure: Excuse me? Are you trying to break my heart or something? ;_;
Hatori: Nevermind...
Tooru: It's ready soon! Sorry, since I had so little time I didn't make anything fancy.
Hatori: Don't worry about it. Even if you make it in ten sec it's always better than these two.
[Shigure and Ayame cried out]
Shigure: What did I ever do too you? ;_;
Tooru: Let's sit down! ^_^
Ayame: It smells really good!
Tooru: Thanks.
~Soon night falls and everybody goes to sleep, a new days arrives~
Tooru: I'm going out, I think I'll pick some mushrooms for dinner, bye bye!
Ayame: Bye! Be careful!
Tooru: [Takes her basket] Ah, it's such a beautiful day today. ^_^ [Walks deeper in] This place looks good. "I wonder what the boy I met yesterday is doing... He was older than me by a couple of years..."
Stranger2: Oh, I thought I was alone here.
Tooru: O_O Ah! I'm sorry, I didn't know somebody was here.
Stranger2: I was sleeping... [stomach growls]
Tooru: Are you hungry? I know a place where alot of good apples grow. "I know Uncle Hatori warned me but I'm certain this is an honest and kind person, I can see it in his beautiful eyes."
Stranger2: Could you take me there? I would be really gratefull...
Tooru: Of course.
Stranger2: You're very nice.
Tooru: [blushed] What are you doing in this place?
Stranger2: I... I like the forest.
Tooru: It's amazing, I know. [Stops walking] Here it is!
Stranger2: How about you?
Tooru: Eh, I like the flowers here, so I go to pick them here. "Same lie as yesterday, my imagination isn't realy the best" ~_^
Stranger2: I wish I was a flower...[He blushed] Was I weird saying that?
Tooru: No, I guess everyone wishes to be something. How come a flower?
Stranger2: Because they are free... They just gaze up in this wonderful sky, such a life would be wonderful.
Tooru: Please excuse me for my rudeness but what if someone picks you? And the sky isn't always pretty, what if it starts to pour rain on you, perhaps TOO much rain you might die.
Stranger2: [Picks an apple and takes a big bite, can't talk at the moment since his mouth is full ~_^]... I guess your right, I'm just a fool.
Tooru: No, I'm sorry! I shouldn't had such a thing! I was being awfully rude.
Stranger2: No, just honest. I havn't meet a person like you in a long time, I want to meet you again. Let's meet at the same place in a week... if it is alright?
Tooru: Alright! I'm sorry but I must leave, my, eh, parent will get worried, I'll see you soon! "Got to pick those mushroom fast! Everyone will wonder where I am. They get worried so easily."
Stranger2: I'll see you!
[Tooru rushes of]
Stranger2: Hmm... "I recognize her... but that can't be possible..."
~Far away from here Kagure is roaming in her castle, no signs of Princess Tooru has been found and she is in anguish~
Kagura: [Waves with her wand] Show me a picture of Prince Kyou. [She saw a picture of Kyou sleeping] He looks so much like him... He even has the same name...
Unknown person: They share the same soul aswell... He is a recarnation of your love.
Kagura: I'm not certain about that, they aren't alike at all. My Kyou was a kind and gentle man, he tried not to blame people being mean to him because of his... curse.
Unknown person: ...
Kagura: They might not act the same but I like this boy aswell.
Unknown person: Not boy! His seventeen, a man soon.
Kagura: [Touches the picture gently]
Unknown person: You can't waist time anymore. You must find her!
Kagura: I will, she's not sixteen yet, I have time.
Unknwon person: You shouldn't rely on time.
Kagura: Don't worry. I'll find her.
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As I said before, I won't continue with this. Perhaps I will in the future? If I do I will probably make changes.
fruitbasketrocks, how are you sure it's Tohru and not Tooru? You can interpret it different way since Japanese has a complete different alphabet from ours... I should know since I've studied it for awhile now. I have another fanfiction as well here based on Fruits Basket and there I spell it another way, Tohru. It's the same with Kyou, some say Kyo, and Souma, or should I say Souhma, or Sohma? ^_^ It's just a change of a letter though so it's not really important. =)
~Narrator~
"Thoughts"
[Action]
NOTE: I'm not going to continue with this fic anymore since it hasn't been going that well, kinda sad (for me) but what else is there to do. I had decided with this fic I wanted to try a new style of writing I guess it didn't work that well.
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Shigure: Did you have fun today? ^_^
Tooru: Yes. "I wish I could tell them I met someone, but I have this feeling it would disturb them."
Ayame: TIME FOR DINNER! =D
Tooru: Ah! ^_^ Who made it?
Ayame: I, of course!
Tooru: Great, what did you make?
Ayame: Eh, ah, uh, I forgot to make it.
Hatori: [Gives away a sigh but is not surprised]
Tooru: Don't be too hard on yourself, I'll make it in a jiff!
Ayame: Your kindness just breaks my heart, sweetie. [cries in realif]
Shigure: I made the desert! Guess what it is? TOO LATE! COOKIES is the answer!
Hatori: Don't you make cookies everyday?
Shigure: So?
Hatori: I'm just tired of cookies...
Shigure: Excuse me? Are you trying to break my heart or something? ;_;
Hatori: Nevermind...
Tooru: It's ready soon! Sorry, since I had so little time I didn't make anything fancy.
Hatori: Don't worry about it. Even if you make it in ten sec it's always better than these two.
[Shigure and Ayame cried out]
Shigure: What did I ever do too you? ;_;
Tooru: Let's sit down! ^_^
Ayame: It smells really good!
Tooru: Thanks.
~Soon night falls and everybody goes to sleep, a new days arrives~
Tooru: I'm going out, I think I'll pick some mushrooms for dinner, bye bye!
Ayame: Bye! Be careful!
Tooru: [Takes her basket] Ah, it's such a beautiful day today. ^_^ [Walks deeper in] This place looks good. "I wonder what the boy I met yesterday is doing... He was older than me by a couple of years..."
Stranger2: Oh, I thought I was alone here.
Tooru: O_O Ah! I'm sorry, I didn't know somebody was here.
Stranger2: I was sleeping... [stomach growls]
Tooru: Are you hungry? I know a place where alot of good apples grow. "I know Uncle Hatori warned me but I'm certain this is an honest and kind person, I can see it in his beautiful eyes."
Stranger2: Could you take me there? I would be really gratefull...
Tooru: Of course.
Stranger2: You're very nice.
Tooru: [blushed] What are you doing in this place?
Stranger2: I... I like the forest.
Tooru: It's amazing, I know. [Stops walking] Here it is!
Stranger2: How about you?
Tooru: Eh, I like the flowers here, so I go to pick them here. "Same lie as yesterday, my imagination isn't realy the best" ~_^
Stranger2: I wish I was a flower...[He blushed] Was I weird saying that?
Tooru: No, I guess everyone wishes to be something. How come a flower?
Stranger2: Because they are free... They just gaze up in this wonderful sky, such a life would be wonderful.
Tooru: Please excuse me for my rudeness but what if someone picks you? And the sky isn't always pretty, what if it starts to pour rain on you, perhaps TOO much rain you might die.
Stranger2: [Picks an apple and takes a big bite, can't talk at the moment since his mouth is full ~_^]... I guess your right, I'm just a fool.
Tooru: No, I'm sorry! I shouldn't had such a thing! I was being awfully rude.
Stranger2: No, just honest. I havn't meet a person like you in a long time, I want to meet you again. Let's meet at the same place in a week... if it is alright?
Tooru: Alright! I'm sorry but I must leave, my, eh, parent will get worried, I'll see you soon! "Got to pick those mushroom fast! Everyone will wonder where I am. They get worried so easily."
Stranger2: I'll see you!
[Tooru rushes of]
Stranger2: Hmm... "I recognize her... but that can't be possible..."
~Far away from here Kagure is roaming in her castle, no signs of Princess Tooru has been found and she is in anguish~
Kagura: [Waves with her wand] Show me a picture of Prince Kyou. [She saw a picture of Kyou sleeping] He looks so much like him... He even has the same name...
Unknown person: They share the same soul aswell... He is a recarnation of your love.
Kagura: I'm not certain about that, they aren't alike at all. My Kyou was a kind and gentle man, he tried not to blame people being mean to him because of his... curse.
Unknown person: ...
Kagura: They might not act the same but I like this boy aswell.
Unknown person: Not boy! His seventeen, a man soon.
Kagura: [Touches the picture gently]
Unknown person: You can't waist time anymore. You must find her!
Kagura: I will, she's not sixteen yet, I have time.
Unknwon person: You shouldn't rely on time.
Kagura: Don't worry. I'll find her.
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As I said before, I won't continue with this. Perhaps I will in the future? If I do I will probably make changes.