Good news, I can see my reviews! time to respond to them but before that:

-There are a few guests speaking spanish, I appreciate the reviews, and while I use Google trad to understand them, I would appreciate it if you stuck to English (or hell, even french seeing as I am french and can understand it), cuz I am an absolute shitter at Spanish, can't even write my OWN name.

-Sarii: Glad you think so! Also, that's mostly what I thought about, everyone talking about how Astolfo is prettier than Freya and her children taking offense that. Freya was extremely amused by the whole thing and Ottar even got a good fight out of it so she's not that mad.

-Onishin Tsukitenshi: Thanks for the review. Also, I don't know honestly, romance isn't going to be a BIG part of this story (I know, No romance in Danmachi? What a stupid thing to write.) I'm going to go with maybe on Astolfo's preferences.

-gerhman: Thanks for the review and of cours people are going to get confused by Astolfo's gender, isn't that the whole point?

-Bluecore: Me too kid, me too, I'm waiting for it.

-1995Hzq: No longer is it glitched, I can now read! Thanks for the support.

-God Eater Fenrir-Chan: First of all you have a great name and I love it. Though I am sorry to say that I'll probably stick with the Japanese honorifics, I feel they fit better.

Nofirekiller12: If you are referring to the Freya incident, then do not fear, if I do find myself blocked in general, I will employ the greatest tactic ever conceived, evade it till I can confront it, just like Secret Final bosses in RPGs, they're always stuck in a certain room, I just need to not walk in it! and yeah, Danmachi Memoria Freese is a great game, though REALLY it's a computer game, seeing as it takes Around 4 Gb of space, I'd recommend installing NoxPlayer if you haven't.

-Yametee: Whoops, I thought Bete was already level 6, Fixed it, thanks for pointing it out.

-ClassicRider065: Glad you think so, I'm gonna do my best!

-Schwarzald the reaper: Seeing as until today, I couldn't see my reviews, you're not actually late buddy, thanks for the support.

-Fallen99 Kitsune: Thanks for the support, gonna do my best!

-AlphaOneOne: Toodles to you too!

-RhongoMyniad: Could finally read your whole review, thanks for pointing out my mistakes, and I really like the chant, though I'll have to add Concurrent chanting to his list of abilities, cuz otherwise it's not realistically possible for him to use it in a fight.

-Ptl: Sadly, I do not know enough about Orlando Furioso beside the fact that it's italian and Astolfo plays a part in it so I can't imagine it...

-Fangking: Pretty good chant honestly, sadly, Rhogomyniad's got you beat, his is really good and while I love them both, I'll have to go with his, thanks for the review and suggestion though.

-17Konbro: I hope it'll be funny at least, cuz I'm a very Sarcastic and dark jokes type of guy and am really bad with jokes in general so...

-EmperorCeph: Oh don't worry, I already know how the main cast is gonna learn about Astolfo's gender.

-Phantom Thief of hearts: It is going to happen more of course, that's a given, the whole Astolfo confusing everyone with how he dresses and all is a must in any Astolfo fanfic IMO.

I've never actually played or seen Danmachi Raphsodia, so I'm sorry to say but probably not, though it's not set in stone. As for him using his other abilities, well, if you give me a good enough explanation for them sure, cuz I don't know how magic can explain hundreds of Astolfo copies running around or Hipogriff.

For other servants, we'll see.

-Guest: Aha! so Favourited is a word, good for me.

-JackWhiteknight: Glad you like it.

Pfiou, that was a lot of reviews, thank you all for the support.

Can you believe I've just found that there's an option to edit chapters WITHOUT deleting and re-uploading them? Me big dumb dumb.

It's. So. Hot! The heat where I live is killing me, it's not Australia level of heat, but it's the highest it's ever been (Just like every year, keeps getting higher and higher...) It's killing my motivation to do anything but stay in the bathtub in cold water.

Is it wrong to have a Little Sister?

"I can't do anything about it."Judging by the scowl on her child's face, it wasn't the answer he wanted to hear, he'd barged in the meeting, and proceeded to ask Loki about what to do about his newest friend situation.

And what a situation it was, Born in a Familia, with parents that didn't want her, then they got themselves killed in the dungeon, leaving the Chienthrope to fend for herself with the rest of her Familia not helping her.

On the contrary, they bullied her, taking everything she owned whenever they wanted and beating her when she resisted.

Loki sighed, and help up her hand to stop her child when he tried to speak up. "Listen, I understand why ya hate it, I really do, but we got no proof beside her word." She took a swing of the alcohol bottle she'd brought with her before continuing, "It's Familia business, Soma has no word on how I run my Familia, and same for me about his Familia, I can't just walk in his home and tell him what to do, otherwise what's to stop the others from doing the same, it'd devolve into petty fights within the week if we started." She paused for a second, thinking, "He probably wouldn't care even if I talked to him about it anyway, he only cares about making his wine." She added with a grimace.

"But Loki-Sama, I can't just leave Lily-chan with them!" Her child retorded, getting up and leaning over the table, "She's not safe with them, her status hasn't even been updated for 6 Months now and just last week they stole every single valis she'd made for the past months!" He argued, growing desperate, "We helped the Miach Familia why can't we do the same with Lily?"

"Because we gain nothing out of it." Finn interrupted, Astolfo's turned to him, no doubt to say a few unkind words to her captain but just like Loki, he interrupted her before he could and continued, "When we helped the Miach Familia, it was in exchange for a cut of their Monthly earnings, along with a discount on their products."

Riveria picked up where Finn stopped, "But in this case, the only thing we will get out of helping your friend is an angry Familia and whoever decides to help them get revenge on us, as much as I wish to help, we simply cannot, I'm sorry Astolfo-San" she apologized.

Astolfo's eyes looked around the room, realizing that no was on his side, his eyes teared up, before he shook his head. "I get it." He said, getting off from where he'd leaned on the table, "But I can't just do nothing."

For a moment, looking at his expression, she could feel his resolve, ready to storm the Soma Familia home alone to help someone he hadn't even known for a day, she almost gave in, about to go with him and have a few words with Soma, but someone beat her to it.

"Then don't leave her alone, they can't do anything to her if you're always with her can they?" said Bete, looking uninterested in the discussion, his feet on the table and arms crossed behind his head as he reclined in his chair. "I don't know why you're making a big deal out of this, if she can't deal with her problems, she's not worth your time anyway." He added, yawning as he closed his eyes again.

And just like a switch that's been flipped, Her child, who looked ready to cry did a complete 180, "That's a great idea Bete-Kun!"

"Of course it's a a great Id-" That was as far as he got before a Astolfo-shaped missile flew and crashed into him, sending both of them rolling on the ground, only stopping when they hit the wall and Bete found himself in what would've been a bone crushing hug if he hadn't been a level 5 "WHAT DO YOU THINK YOU'RE DOING YOU STUPID BASTARD!" He howled, trying in vain to pry Astolfo out of him while everyone laughed, Tiona falling from her chair and holding her sides from how hard she was laughing.

"Stop laughing and help me you assholes, I can feel my ribs cracking!"

Once everyone stopped laughing, Loki watched with a smile as her children worked together to pry a smiling Astolfo off of Bete.

She was really blessed with great children wasn't she?

The next day...

"Where are we going Astolfo-Sama?" Lily asked as they walked through the mostly empty streets of Orario. It was early in the morning, the sun having come up a few hours ago. Lily was once again being dragged by her savior, she woke up in the Hostess, had a breakfast on the house, ('just this time, don't expect me to be so generous ya hear me?!') had said the owner Mia Grande. "Shouldn't we be heading to the dungeon?"

Yesterday night, her savior had come back to announce that he wasn't going to destroy the entire Soma Familia like he'd said he would do.

On one hand, Lily was glad her savior hadn't gotten himself killed for her, but a part of her was also disappointed her 'Familia' wasn't gone.

Instead, he'd asked her if she wanted to become his supporter until he'd found a more permanant solution, of course, Lily agreed.

Anyone saying Lily cried is a filthy liar.

"It's planned, but first, we need to meet up with the others." Her savior said as he guided her.

"The others?" Lily Parroted.

"Yeah, the others!" He said again, pausing for a second, "I won't always be able to be with you in the dungeon, usually I go to the floors beyond Rivira, and sometimes my familia goes on an expedition in the deep floors and it takes a week to go down and up at the minimum." He explained, ignoring Lily's shocked expression (Can I get a Pikachu meme here? No? Guessed so, oh well.)

"so I thought it would be best for you to have someone else of your level to stay with, in case I can't make it." Lily had many questions, but she didn't have time to ask them as her savior exclaimed, "And here we are!"

The 'Here' in question is a store with a sign identifying it as 'Blue Pharmacy'.

Her savior entered the store, with Lily following behind.

She looked around as the door close behind them, her savior hopped to the counter, greeting a Chienthrope with brown hair.

"Naaza-Tan!" The Chienthrope looked up from the book she was reading, a smile appeared on her face as she noticed her savior happily waving at her.

"Astolfo-Kun, Welcome, what can I help you and your friend with?" She returned the greeting, snapping the book she was reading shut.

"I need to see my cute little sister, is she here?" Her savior responded, waving his hand at Lily, "Want her to meet my supporter Lily-Chan."

"Sure, I'll go get her..." The Chienthrope turned around, but as she was about to head further into the store, the door behind her got slammed open and a blur barged through it and jumped over the counter, heading straight for her savior, who opened his arms wide and caught it, spinning on himself from the momentum.

"Nii-Chan!" The blur shouted happily.

"Imouto!" Her savior replied happily.

Once her savior had stopped spinning, he put down a little girl as tall as Lily with white hair, she was wearing a black vest, black shorts and black stocking with pink shoes. Both arms of the little girl were bandaged, with a glove on her left hand.

Lily also noticed sheathes holding knives attacked on each side of her belt and a bigger one on her back.

The Chienthrope called Nazaa sighed exasperatedly, "What did we say about running in the store Jack-Chan?"

The girl named Jack turned her head towards Nazaa, not letting go of her savior, "Not to do it?" She said/Asked.

"And what do you have to say for yourself?"

"We're sorry?"

Both the girl and Nazaa held each other's gaze, brown eyes staring into Green-Yellow for a few seconds, before Nazaa sighed again, "Fine, you get away with no punishment this time."

"Yay! Thanks Nazaa-Chan!"

Her savior let go of Jack and turned back towards Lily, Jack following him and finally noticing her "Lily, this is my little sister, Jack." He said as he pat Jack's head.

Jack stared at her for a second, before hopping in front of her.

"Hi! We're Jack!"

Yeah, Remembe that whole 'No other Servants.' thing? Throw it in the trash.

Sorry it took so long again, I'm not a really motivated person in general and I'd rather play video games than write.

No Status for Jack, mostly because I have no idea what to make for spells, skills and all that that hasn't been done in Heroic Myths...

Anyway, It's midnight where I live and I'm tired, so I'm gonna sleep, If you spot any mistakes, tell me and I'll fix it when I wake up in the morning.

Toodles.