Oh no, not another season 1 what-if! I can hear it now. Unfortunately, I can't seem to help myself. This particular plot bunny came from a discussion with Phillipe363 about an early draft of the Arrow pilot featuring a much different Quentin Lance to what we got, more of a Sheriff of Nottingham type to Oliver's Robin Hood. I couldn't help wondering how that might change some things, in particular Laurel's character arc and how she engaged with the plot, and so this little teaser was born. No promises as to when a continuation would be written, but I thought I'd share what I had for you all. I've tried to strike a bit of a balance between Lance's canon characterization and this earlier idea, so hopefully any Lance fans can indulge me on this one.
Many thanks to both Okoriwadsworth and Kylia for beta-ing this idea. I hope you all enjoy, and thank you for reading!
-RayWritesThings
Sheriff, Hood and Maid
It had been a moment of weakness. After losing Sara, seeing the bodies of all those young girls pile up one after the other, with stiff limbs and sightless eyes, it was too much. He'd have done anything to make it stop, to catch Mathis.
Anything, as it turned out, had meant selling his soul.
He'd received a call tipping him off to a location Mathis was supposedly using to conduct his sick experiments. When he'd arrived, there was no Mathis and no equipment. Just a mid-ranking member of one of the local cartels.
Quentin had been angered and then infuriated when the thug had proposed his deal. Immunity for him and his side in exchange for information. He had stormed out of that warehouse and not looked back.
Then another girl had turned up dead. And another. Before he could think it through too many times, he was dialing the number that had called in the fake tip.
What else could he have done? It wasn't like people weren't going to buy the drugs anyway if he refused to play ball with the cartel. He'd gotten a location and led a raid to catch the Dollmaker in the act. A serial killer behind bars.
"Just remember the favor you owe us, Detective," he'd been warned. "Or your pretty daughter with the fancy new law degree is gonna wish it was Mathis that got to her."
Okay, so one cartel was going to walk the streets knowing he'd look the other way. So what? They didn't have the manpower to bring them all in.
The funny thing was, once one deal was made, it didn't seem so bad to make more. It was like they could sniff him out all of a sudden. Maybe there was talk. He didn't know.
Quentin found himself with a lot more convictions under his belt and a lot more friends in low places. His tab was always paid at his favorite bar before he even made it there after a shift. It wasn't like he was letting all the criminals walk. There were still bad people getting put away.
How was it any different than Nudocerdo hobnobbing with the big wigs in their ivory towers? How was it any different than Moira Queen or Malcolm Merlyn paying all the right people to get their kids off the hook for crimes they ought to be serving sentences for?
Whenever he happened to be in a charitable mood, which he rarely was, Quentin could admit it wasn't very different to all the wheeling and dealing he'd done behind the scenes to keep Sara's record clean.
If he had one saving grace, it was Laurel. She alone was untouched by all the dirt and corruption their city was swimming in. He was prouder than he could say, and it burned at him more than he could stand sometimes the way she would remind him of all the things he had once taught her about the law and doing what was right. He snapped at her more than was warranted for it, and he knew she just couldn't understand.
He never wanted her to. If she ever knew…
But it was pointless to even worry about that. The associates he'd acquired over the last few years would ensure he was never ousted, so long as he kept up his end of the deals he'd made. And he would, for her sake. This city was rotten to the core, and if all he could do was save one person from it, it damned well wouldn't be the rich elites who could bribe their way through anything or the teens with rap sheets already a mile long. It would be his own flesh and blood, all he had left of it in the world.
With enough drink in him, most nights he went to bed with a muddied conscience. But it was enough to let him sleep.
SH&M
Laurel had had a bad feeling for a long time. Various bad feelings, she supposed, but it was hard not to when her sister and boyfriend died while screwing each other, her mother left and her father fell into drinking. There weren't many good feelings left in the wake of all that.
But this specific one had more to do with her work. Ever since she had started at CNRI, things had felt a little… off.
At first she hadn't noticed, too caught up in the high of winning her first official case, saving a man's son from prison for a crime he didn't commit. Other little victories here and there.
But then, every time she tried going up against something big, the systemic forces truly plaguing their city, roadblocks constantly sprung up in her path. A judge threw the case out, witnesses disappeared, evidence went missing from the police lockers and, lately, her boss had been getting very particular about handing out or approving assignments.
If she'd talked to her father about it once, she must have talked to him about it a million times. He'd been a sympathetic ear at first, promising to keep an eye on things at the precinct, but as time wore on he did little more than sigh and tell her that she couldn't expect to change the world overnight. Joanna did him one better and suggested Laurel do something with all that pent-up frustration, which had led Laurel to seeking out boxing lessons at a gym not too far from their office.
While letting her anger out through her fists did wonders for her emotional self-control, it did little to fix the rest of her problems. Laurel's mind chased itself around in circles night after night, wondering just where the trouble was starting from. Was there some kind of leak between their office and the DA's? Was it Kate Spencer herself? Or was she being spied on?
Laurel started meeting her clients outside of the office and off the books. For a while, it seemed to help as she was happy to note to her dad. But gradually, whatever force was conspiring against her seemed to catch up to her new methods. It didn't matter if she worked with Joanna or alone, if she wrote her files in plain English or in the secret code she and Sara had developed during a particularly boring winter filled with school cancellations due to the wind chill, making playing outside impossible. She was reaching her wit's end with this enemy who seemed to know her as well as she knew herself.
Just as she was starting to wonder if everything was hopeless, an unexpected ally of sorts emerged from seemingly nowhere: an archer dressed in green. He'd appeared on the scene as suddenly as Oliver had stepped back into her life after five years of him being presumed dead, taking in Adam Hunt and his security team before Laurel was slated to lose her case against him thanks to a bought Judge Grell. Then again, he took on Martin Sommers and the Triad after they attacked her home while Oliver was visiting.
It was exhilarating seeing someone finally stand up to the untouchable in this city. She couldn't help to wonder why no one had thought to do it before, couldn't help but feel inspired...
Laurel kept these thoughts to herself while staying at her father's that night. The police were still processing the crime scene that her apartment had become the other night thanks to the home invasion that she suspected was meant to have been an assassination if she hadn't been able to take down one of their attackers and Mr. Diggle hadn't shown up to confront China White. The bodyguard himself might have been killed had Oliver not been extremely lucky with his knife throw. She supposed he must have gotten very good at that sort of thing while hunting for food on the island.
Laurel's dreams of a figure moving through thick, green overgrowth stalking the Fortune 500 were interrupted by the low snarl of her dad's voice. Laurel startled awake, looking around in confusion.
"...don't care that he got away. Sommers overreached, and that's his and your problem, not mine!"
Light shone through the cracks around the bedroom door. He was still awake? Laurel slid off the mattress as quietly as she could, sneaking in her socks to the door. She opened it a centimeter and peered down the hall.
Her father was pacing back and forth, crossing in and out of view as he spoke into a phone. "My daughter comes first. The minute you agreed to his contract, that's the minute you turned your back on me. I wasn't gonna do a damned thing to save that bottom-feeder from some vigilante."
Laurel's mind raced. If this was about Sommers, and her father was talking to a person who had accepted a contract that had to do with her…
"Yeah, I know. I know what you have on me. I'd rather we continue on business as usual, too, but we can't do that unless I have your word that the next time Laurel is in your sights, you let me handle it. Alright? She's my responsibility, not yours. And you can tell that to China White herself."
China White. The Triad. Her father was on the phone with the Triad.
She watched him hang up and rub a hand across his forehead. "Should've just let her go to San Francisco…" he muttered under his breath.
She couldn't keep watching. Laurel shook her head and backed up into a dresser with a muffled bang, too loud for him not to have heard. "Shit," she whispered.
Sure enough, she heard his shoes coming down the hall. Rather than comforting, they sounded loud and heavy and like a threat. What did she do? What did she say?
The door opened before she could make up her mind to flee, and Laurel looked up at her father.
"Honey?" He asked, sounding just as concerned as always. His gun rested on his belt.
She had to play this off. She couldn't risk him finding out she knew. She couldn't trust he wouldn't hurt her — she didn't know who this man was anymore.
"Uh, sorry. I was getting up to use the bathroom, and I couldn't see where I was going in the dark," she explained, hoping the strain in her voice could be attributed to the pain from hitting the furniture.
He nodded. "Okay. Lamp's on the table there for it you need it."
"Uh-huh. Are you going out?"
He looked down at himself. "No. I just, uh, was finishing up some work at the table. I'll get to sleep soon, promise."
Laurel forced a smile that was more a nervous twitch of the lips as she slowly moved past him into the hall, shutting herself in the bathroom. She let out a breath then drew it back in, forcing herself to focus on that and prevent herself from hyperventilating.
Her father was a dirty cop. How long had he been? Since she got her degree? Since the Gambit sunk? Since always?
He was the source of the leak. For three years, she'd been watching herself and who she spoke to, dedicated herself to nothing but work — and the one person she had felt safe in confiding to, the one person she'd thought understood her relentless pursuit of justice, had betrayed her.
She sat on the lid of the toilet and willed the tears that wanted to spill from her eyes back. There wasn't time to feel sorry for herself. She'd unknowingly been helping the other side by giving them ready access to information. What was she going to do now?
The first thing was stop talking to her dad about her cases and make sure to lock up her notes even in the safety of her home. And then… what? That didn't feel like enough.
What could she do to help the people who had suffered for her ignorance? The people who would continue to suffer thanks to this corrupt bargain her father had made? Or even, maybe, possibly, her father himself?
Was he just doing this to protect her? Maybe someone had made threats. Maybe he thought it was the only way. They were both semi-public figures. It wouldn't have been hard at all for organized crime to make the connection between them and decide to exploit it.
If she could figure out how deep this went, how far this web of alliances stretched, maybe she could free him from it.
But she couldn't do it as herself. It was clear that either her father would be forced to stop her or the Triad and whoever else would take matters into their own hands, and she didn't want to test her luck a second time. Prosecuting them publicly would mean damning her father, too, and despite everything she had just learned, she didn't know if she was prepared to do that.
She had to work independently of the law. Any misgivings she might have felt about that a month ago melted away now that she knew her father had abandoned his own credo a long time ago. This wasn't some idealized mock trial in school. This was reality. And there was someone out there already proving that the only way to get justice in this city was to get it yourself.
Laurel stood and flushed the toilet to sell her story, washing her hands in the sink as she stared herself down in the mirror. Her eyes were dry and determined.
She would do what needed to be done.
SH&M
Oliver was at a crossroads in many ways. Diggle was on the fence about joining him. Lance was hot on the trail of evidence he'd planted to set himself up for exoneration. And he still didn't know quite where he and Laurel stood since his return in both of his personas.
He knew as Oliver he was making things difficult, wanting to atone for his actions yet also wanting her safe. He couldn't be the man she saw in him in his public life because he was needed as the Hood. And while she seemed far more receptive to the Hood, his first encounter with her had proven… odd.
"How do you decide?" She'd asked him unexpectedly in the dark of her apartment. The little light come through the windows made her eyes look overbright and earnest. "Who gets hospitalized and who lands in the morgue?"
"It's not a decision," he answered eventually. "Not a conscious one. This city is in a fight for its life. In those kinds of struggles…" He had found himself struggling then to articulate what it was to be driven by the need for survival in the heat of battle, how everything else faded away.
But Laurel had nodded as if she understood. "Then it's not a question of targeting."
"Is there someone you wanted targeted?"
To his surprise, she did not dismiss the question, but rather hesitated. "I don't have everything I need yet. And you're right that Declan's case can't wait if he really is as innocent as you think."
He'd let the subject drop, and there had been no time to address it in any of their subsequent meetings. Certainly not at Iron Height, where she had pulled him out of the fog of battle through her touch and voice alone before he could make yet another kill. He didn't know how to thank her for that. Especially when the next time he saw her, it was because she was representing him against her dad, and he couldn't exactly thank her for something he wasn't supposed to know about as Oliver Queen.
It helped that Laurel was convinced there was no way he was the Hood. At least, he thought she was convinced until the polygraph test. Until he revealed some of the truth about what had happened to him there. The look in her eyes… he had fled before she could ask him anything, back to the party he was having Tommy plan at the house.
Oliver walked around the main room, making sure he was very visible as Diggle prepared to head out in the Hood's suit. While he didn't exactly enjoy himself in this type of crowd anymore, he didn't truly tense up until he noticed something.
Outside the glass doors to the patio, someone was watching.
The strobe lights from the party illuminated her for a moment — he thought it was a her, though he couldn't make out her face beneath the dark shawl she wore over her head and wrapped around her shoulders. The patio went dark and then light again, and in that time she had turned her back as she dropped something in one of the potted plants.
Oliver sucked around people as he made his way to the patio and the far edge, but he could make out no one in the darkness of the grounds. None of the attendees seemed to have noticed anything, either, thought that likely was due to their inebriated states.
He went back to the plant and pulled out what she had left behind.
It was a manila envelope with a note scrawled on one side in almost exaggeratedly bad handwriting.
For the Hood, if you know him.
Oliver's heart thudded in his chest. This woman had clearly decided to believe Lance, or at least believed he had some role in the Hood's appearance in Starling.
Did he open it? Ignore it to avoid proving this woman's suspicions? But then, what did she want?
Oliver took the envelope back to his room and opened it, spilling the contents onto his desk. Pictures printed on computer paper. Typed notes. It was rudimentary and low-budget, but he was looking at a dossier. A dossier on Nudocerdo, the Starling City Police Commissioner. From the looks of it, he was in far too many pockets to be doing anything good for the public.
Take him down without death and I'll tell you everything, was written at the bottom of the final page.
Now he was truly at a crossroads. If he acted, this woman would clearly know he at the very least had a connection to the Hood. But just what was "everything"?
Oliver found himself attacked by a hitman before he could ponder that much further, and only the intervention of Detective Lance saved his life and his identity from being exposed, as much as the detective looked like he might be happy to shoot Oliver as well. Long after the party had been cleared out and his family had gone to sleep secure in the knowledge that he wasn't a vigilante was Oliver able to discuss with Diggle the woman who seemed to think he might still be the vigilante.
"I think you were visited by the Maid."
Oliver's face scrunched up. "The who?"
Digg shrugged. "She showed up a couple weeks back. Folks in the Glades say they've spotted her trailing gangbangers and cops alike. And the rumor is she's had to fight her way out of a situation or two. That's part of what made me realize I needed to join this fight," Diggle told him. Folks are getting restless, desperate. You've shown them a new way, and they just might take it."
Oliver frowned. He hadn't been trying to show anyone a new way. This was just the most effective way for him to complete his father's mission. "Why 'the Maid'?"
"You said she was wearing that shawl over her head? Hoodette didn't catch on, so people started looking to your namesake: Robin Hood."
It hit him a moment later. "Maid Marian." His uneasiness grew. Oliver knew, of course, that the whole point of what he'd just done was that the Hood and Oliver Queen were separate identities. But he didn't like the idea of being associated, and romantically at that, with another woman. Not when he was meant to be proving himself to Laurel. If she could only know.
Unless she did? Why exactly had she wanted to know how the Hood chose his targets and what happened to them? What had she meant by not having everything she needed yet? Was she gathering information? And if she was…
It was a theory. The same kind of theory that this woman was working off of regarding his own identity, but if he was right it changed everything.
If he was right, he needed to know what Laurel knew. And he had a feeling he'd only find that out once Nudocerdo was out of the picture.
SH&M
Once again, he found himself at the bar and, once again, he found his tab was already covered. He wasn't drinking anything strong, though. Not tonight. Not when he'd screwed up bad enough.
He'd been so sure it was Queen. Locking up the Hood would've helped smooth over the ruffled feathers caused by the vigilante's interference in Hunt and Sommer's operations. Would've made his job a heck of a lot easier. And would've gotten the bastard far and away from his daughter.
When he'd been sure of the archer's identity, it had all made sense. Queen returned from that island and thought he could slide back into Laurel's good graces by putting his thumb on the scales of justice, so to speak. That was clearly why Hunt and Sommers had been attacked coincidentally as Laurel was mounting cases against them, and she had been picked out of all the lawyers in the city to help him clear Peter Declan's name. Only now, it apparently was a coincidence, and he didn't know anything anymore.
The Hood needed to be caught. No matter what good other people thought he was doing, he was a menace that needed to be off the streets the same as any thug. Just because he was stealing money and giving it away didn't make him better than the likes of a kid jacking a car for a joyride. It made him worse, because he was causing unrest with the criminal elements who, like it or not, were woven into the very fabric of Starling. Had been for longer than Quentin had wanted to admit before he'd finally given in.
A man in a fine suit took the barstool next to him. "Evening, Detective."
Quentin blew out a breath. He was not in the mood for another deal right now, not when he was still on shaky ground with the Triad. "So, which boss do you work for?"
The man pursed his lips. "Hardly. My name is Carl Ballard."
Ballard? One of the big-wigs? Quentin sat up a little straighter.
"What's a guy with all the money and success in the world doing in a hole-in-the-wall like this?"
"I'm here on business. I assume you haven't heard since you're clearly off duty at the moment, but reports have come in that Commissioner Nudocerdo has been attacked in his home by the Hood."
"That son of a bitch," Quentin swore. It wasn't enough that the guy had to prove his Queen theory wrong tonight, but he had to go after the police department?
"I agree," Ballard said lightly. "And so do some associates of mine who were fond of Nudocerdo. Given his imminent fall from grace, we want to see that things keep running smoothly. That's why I'm letting you know you have the full backing of Tempest to fill the position of Commissioner."
He reeled back a little in shock. "Commissioner? Me?" His eyes narrowed. "Just what is Tempest?"
"A group of like-minded individuals who want the best for our families and our city, like yourself," Ballard told him. "We all feel you would be the best candidate in these uncertain times. Your commitment to catching the vigilante is unmatched, and you understand the way this city works."
He knew what that last part meant underneath. Business as usual. It was hardly what he would have envisioned all those years ago as a beat cop with his head full of ideas about changing things for the better. He'd forgotten about that dream a long time ago.
"Say I accept. What's in it for me?"
"A number of powerful allies. More if you prove effective."
"Effective at what?"
"Tempest wants to find out the source of the Hood's information. What he's basing his crusade off of and how he obtained it. These are things you have to be wondering, too."
He had, and he'd thought for a worrying moment that it might be Laurel. For the first time tonight, he was glad he'd been wrong about his assumptions on Queen.
"I've been in the Glades recently working on a gentrification project, and my security tells me they've heard rumors of a spy. A woman. They're calling her his Maid Marian. We'd like you to start there, tracking down this young Maid."
An informant for the Hood? That was something solid, something real at last. What did he have to lose?
"I'll get on it — or, guess I'll put my best men on it, since your people want me in the Commissioner's chair so badly." Quentin stuck out his hand for Carl Ballard to shake.
It wasn't the worst deal he'd made.