Ch3

This my first story I have to write please give me Constructive criticism so I can improve

Sebastian pov

That next day we went to the townhouse in London. "I hate London it is all was so crowded" I hear Ciel say while climbing the stairs to the townhouse. I was carrying my mate in my arms because she had fallen asleep on the way here. we walk into the parlor and saw a big mess that I would have to clean.

"Where do they keep the tea in this house?" I hear my master aunt say

"Madam Red, Lau! what are you doing here?" Ciel said shocked he was not expecting people in the townhouse.

"Well you came quickly did the Queen call you. How is that girl in Sebastian's arm?" Madam Red ask getting too close to me and my wife.

"this is Sebastian wife Sora she is our new maid. Sebastian, you can take her to your room now" I left the room to go to my bedroom here. I laid her down on the bed when I got to my room.

Sora pov

I wake up to find that I was in the different room than the one that I fell asleep in last night. I get up for the bed and look around the room to find that Sebastian was not in the room. I could sense that my Sebastian was somewhere in the house. I get up and dress and what out to find him. I could hear talking from one of the rooms in the house. I followed it and it led me to a room on the second floor that I guess was a parlor. I open the door and walk in and see six people in the parlor. I clear my throat to get their intentions and ask if I'm interrupting anything. Sebastian walks over to me and says no you are not Interrupting anything.

That when Ciel gets out of his seat and says "let me interdict you to Madam Red my aunt and her butler Grell, and Lau and his sister Ran-Mao. We were just about to leave for the crime scene for Jake the ripper latest victim care to join us?"

"thank you" l say bow. The carriages ride was short with Sebastian driving it. After going to the crime scene, we what to the Undertaker. I was standing with Sebastian behind the young master inside the shop.

"Undertaker what do you now on the jake the ripper," Ciel said would like around. "You need to pay with first last time I gave you the Information for free." the man said.

"so, the Funeral Parlor is just a cover business and how much is it for information," Lau says.

"I'll give you anything you want if you can give me the true gift of laughter tell me a joke Young master." the crazy man said holding on to the poor child's face. Maden red and Lau tried to get the Undertaker laugh but failed. That is when Sebastian told the young master to wait outside and not to listen anything going inside

Sebastian p.o.v

After the young master and his guests left the build I turn to my wife. "Sora this is the grim reaper Undertaker how is retired he is going to help you." Sora looks at the grim reaper cautiously and ask "is this a good idea."

"He is the acquaintance of the young lord and he owes me something," I say holding she in my arms.

I turn to the grim reaper and say "Undertaker let me introduce you to my wife Sora. She is very sick she can't eat a full soul is there anything that you can do to help her?'"

The Undertaker gave me a smirk and say "your wife was cut with a grim reaper with a death scythes on the stomach if am not exaggerating. The best thing I can do is to give her some souls that the reaper won't miss so that the reapers don't target her." Undertaker says get up and pulling a bottle from out from the cabinet "take one every week on Monday start with a half and then slowly start eating more until you can eat a whole one." He says handing the bottle to me.

"thank you for the souls." I was very grateful for the soul. Because I didn't know how long this contract would last and I didn't want to have to kill to get the souls that Sora needed. Because the reaper would a have attack me because I would have been stealing souls would in a contract. Now for the joker "what dies the Corpse say to the doctor? Nothing because he's dead." I say.

Ciel pov

I was waiting outside the Undertaker shop. Were all for the sudden the building starts to shake and the sign from the building fell off. The door open and Sebastian said we could come in. "undertaker what do you know about the victims of Jake the ripper." I was starting to get impatient.

"The victims were very interesting." the undertaker said well grabbing Sora and continuing. "There woman parts were missing." He said.

Sora pov

After hearing what this Jack the Ripper was doing to its victims I was appalled and felt sorry for them. To have your womanly parts taken out of you in that manner was horrible. "Sebastian how do you think could do such a thing," I ask while getting into the carriage with him, Lau, Madam Red, and Ciel.

"the person would have to have the training so that narrows it down and that leaves out people with alibis out as well," he says.

"But even I would have the necessary skills to do that and I was a doctor and all the doctor will be leaving when nobles go back." Madam Red says.

"Sebastian go make up a list of suspects that fill what we are looking for," Ciel says looking a Sebastian. Sebastian gets up to go to the door opens it and leans out and says yes, my lord. I will meet you at home and jumps out.

Sebastian pov

I was not happy what Madam Red was suggestive. To put my wife in danger to get the information that I knew was false. The only thing that was keeping me sane is that my young Master will be doing the same thing if my wife fails. Me and Madam red how to help Ciel get ready while Sora got ready for the ball on her own. "Sebastian you're going to kill me" Ciel yell as I pull the corset tighter.

"you will be fine no one has died from a corset," I say laughing. To think my master would go through all this trouble just to get information. I truly do love humans they're so funny.

"Sebastian stop laughing at me is not funny" Ciel say I automatically stop laughing but I still thought it was funny. after Ciel was finished and ready. I went to my room to get ready myself. When I walked into the room I saw my wife was standing in front of her dresser cabinet from hell. how did she get her dressing cabinet here?

"Sora how did your dressing cabinet get here?" I asked while getting ready in my tutor uniform. Her dressing cabinet was big it stood five ft tall with big dark oak doors with a carving of my demon mark on one of the doors and the other door had her demon mark carved into it. The handles were black gold from hell. The cabinet was a wedding gift from me to her when we just got married.

"I had Mary help me shrink it down so I could carry it with me easily while I looked for you," Sora says as she put on her dress.

"ok, are you ready to go, my love," I ask while holding the door of her.

"Yes," she says taking my arm that I hold out for her.