The reviews page is finally normal againnn! I think my browser got a lot of cache hehe, since there's so many reviews I will only answer some reviews hehe
CrystalClear968: Thank you! yeah my tests are done now so I already half free... well except the part I got writers block:')
Guest(alyakk): Feels train is the best plot in this story after all hehehe
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liizadragneel: Well this story is not romance based... so maybe some friendly bros moments later on
ZombieLisa3: Hehehehe thank you for reading it;)
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"What… in the name of… how is he still here and having powers?!" said Taufan shock seeing the presence of his former elemental user
"Is this the alternate future where Boboiboy failed to get us back?" asked Thorn didn't believe what he sees
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"Retak'ka Balak!"
Hearing those words make Thorn shut his ears since he already knew how it feels to be used by Retak'ka
"Thorn… calm down... this isn't real" said Ice calming
"I know… I know… but-"
Suddenly they look that Retak'ka want to attack Boboiboy who was defenseless. Gempa look at the elementals seriously as if getting ready to attack their first elemental owner
"Halilintar, Blaze!" shout Gempa
"Okay!" shout both of them as they run to Retak'ka and attack him
"Ice! You help both of them and try lead him to change elemental so that Thorn can join the fight. Taufan, Solar! Attack him from behind. Laksamana, Mechabot you go to Boboiboy, I will make barrier for you guys so Boboiboy is safe from any attacks"
"Okay!"
All of them split up, Amato and Mechabot goes closer to Boboiboy and see that he's crying which make Amato lost of words until Mechabot snapped him to reality
"Feelings later! Let's take Boboiboy over there!" shout Mechabot
"Okay!"
Amato take Boboiboy by force and maybe he didn't notice that he was being moved. As they reach the wall, Gempa made a big barrier and he joined his brothers to fight Retak'ka
"Cih! Retak'ka Ganma! Tembakan Ganma!"
The elementals manage to dodge Retak'ka attacks, Halilintar revealing a very happy yet sinister face with his trusty two lightning swords on his hands
"Finally we can hurt this son of a-"
"HALILINTAR LANGUANGE!" shout Gempa while fighting
"How did he even hear me?!"
"I get it I get it, you want revenge him so badly but hold your mouth" said Solar beside Halilintar
"Fine fine… wait can we fushion here?" asked Halilintar looking at Solar
"Only one way to find out, combine our watches now!"
Gempa look at the two elementals surprised by what are they doing, Gempa met eyes with Ice and nod to do the same thing.
"ELEMENTAL FUSHION!"
Blaze, Taufan and Thorn can't handle the attacks any longer until suddenly a beam hit Retak'ka which make him thrown back. It was Supra and Glacier
"Wait we can fushion here?!" asked Taufan surprised
"Yeah, since it's just an alternate world that was created by Rocka so we can make the impossible which is two fushion at the same time" said Supra while touching his glasses
"Should one of us go help Laksamana with Boboiboy…?" asked Thorn
All of them goes silence until Taufan pat Thorn's shoulders
"Believe in him for once… not to mention, he has to do our favors which I believe is the same favor right" said Taufan encouraging which make all of them agreeing
"Okay then so… Supra, get ready for that Super Supra attack and in the meantime, we need to buy time for Supra so Blaze and Taufan will attack him nonstop while Thorn and I will defend you guys from his attacks, agree?" said Glacier
"Okay!"
"Let's go!" shout Blaze running toward Retak'ka
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On the other side
Amato hug Boboiboy who still crying. Not to mention, it's the first time in years Amato heard Boboiboy crying like this
"Boboiboy…" said Mechabot patting his back
Boboiboy open his eyes and surprised in front of him was his father and Mechabot
"Dad…" said Boboiboy not believe what he sees
"Yes son.. it's me, sshh it's alright"
"No… no it's not… you are right, I don't deserve those elementals at all… because of it, I lost Tok Aba and my friends, I should just let you suck them from me!" shout Boboiboy in despair
He didn't know that the elementals heard him between battle, Taufan eyes change into more sinister like Halilintar usually do and Supra glaring Retak'ka even more after hearing Boboiboy said that
"Because of you! You..you MAKE OUR OWNER LIKE THIS! TEMBAKAN SUPER SUPRA!"
Boboiboy heard the scream which make his head look up and see a light throw Retak'ka to the sky
"Boboiboy, I'm the one whose wrong… you deserve them.. no, you are worthy to have them! I shouldn't even try to take them away from you, you are the very reason for them to be useful in this world" said Amato trying to control his son's emotions
"But… it was not mine all along, it was actually powers that was stolen from the original owner"
"Well yeah you're not the original user but look"
Amato hold Boboiboy and hold him up to see the elementals fighting Retak'ka, Boboiboy was surprised by the view and confused as well on why the elementals fight their original owner
"They fight and protected you from him because they didn't accept him as their owner due to his bad intention of using them. You on the other hand, use them for helping people instead for your own. You save many people on earth and in space. I'm proud to call you my son" said Amato while holding his head
Boboiboy was surprised by his father words. He looks puzzled and disbelief of what did he just say to him. Suddenly tears coming out from his eyes but still in shock face
"Eh? why am I crying…" said Boboiboy while wiping his tears
"Boboiboy…" said Mechabot while holding his shoulder
Mechabot push Boboiboy into Amato's hug and Amato hug him close
"I'm sorry… for all what I have done to you all these years, for not believing in you having powers, for not there when you need me to and for not there to protect you when you were little… I'm sorry for making you suffer back at our home. I regret everything what I did to you and I will make it up to you, say anything you want and I will do it! Punish me if you want because I deserved it!" said Amato hugging his only son
"This… is a dream right…" said Boboiboy on his hug not believing his words
"No it's not… it's real.. well this world is not but I'm real, I'm really Amato, your one and only father who is stupid enough for making his son suffer mentally"
Boboiboy still can't take all the words all once, he can't believe at all because he never heard his father say those words to him for the past years
"Dad… thank you… when you said you're proud of me is a dream for me to hear it from yourself rather than from mom… thank you, I'm so happy you are proud of me!" said Boboiboy while hugging his dad tighter than ever
Amato can't help to let out few tears because he didn't think that he never say that he was proud of him this whole time. Suddenly Boboiboy's body start to fade. Amato and Mechabot was shock, before they say anything, Boboiboy's body completely gone from their side. Seconds later, the scenery change into white nothingness again
"What in the world?!" shout Supra
"Huh? Why are we back here?" asked Glacier surprised
"That… we don't know either…" said Amato looking around searching for Boboiboy
Supra and Glacier split back to their original elementals and they also looked around
"What did you do to Boboiboy?" asked Taufan
"I just… comforting him and ask for forgiveness of what I did all these years…"
"Hmmmm… it should be working on the right path but-"
Taufan's words was cut by sudden light flash toward far in front of them. The light shine to one spot which make a door appear. This time the color of the door is dark red, darker than Halilintar's red. Amato goes closer to the door and open it, as the door opens it shows a very dark scenery with a boy standing in the middle of the room. Amato look at the boy and he sign the elementals and Mechabot to go inside as well. They goes inside slowly and getting closer look which to be Boboiboy
"Boboiboy…" said Amato
"Why are you here.."
Amato was taken aback by the answer. Boboiboy's voice was very low
"I want to save you from this barrier… let's go back" said Amato slowly
"And why you want me to go back? You could just let me die…"
As Boboiboy said that, the door shut violently trapping all of them inside the room. Boboiboy turn around and face Amato in angry yet sad look. Amato realizes that Boboiboy that he met moments ago and now is completely different. Boboiboy snap his finger which suddenly a glass barrier fall right to where seven elementals and Mechabot are which trap them inside
"What the! HYA!" shout Halilintar while attacking the barrier
"It's no use, your powers are useless here" said Boboiboy
"Just… WHO ARE YOU!?" shout Taufan
"I presume you met my other half"
"Half.." said Gempa surprised
"Yes… Rocka split my soul, the one you just met is over there"
Boboiboy point at his back and suddenly a light shine toward that spot and it shows a boy is trapped by some energy vines and he was unconscious
"THAT'S ALSO BOBOIBOY!" shout Blaze shock
"And you are correct Blaze, that half is the nice and weak one.." said Boboiboy without looking at the elementals
"Cih what should we do Amato!- Amato?" asked Mechabot who sees Amato who was just standing there
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"Wait… he can tell whose voice of each elementals?" thought Amato surprised
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So... I'm gonna be late updating from now on due to writers block on detailing the story. The timeline itself already completed even before I publish this story and how the ending will be... beware, it's near the end
Actually the truth is... I also tempting to taking hiatus writing due to my stress is coming back but thanks to my fanfic mentor, she give me enough strength to continue even though it will be long wait updates from now on. I also gonna publish the other story that I have been working on alongside with 'Inside'
Name: Darkness Feelings
You guys can check it on my wattpad because I will not publish it here because it's special occasion:))
