Okay, guys- this is my response to tell you why I did what I did for Naruto in Family Guy: The griffins marriage counselor.
My first reviewer writes You know I'd actually be interested in reading a lemon where Naruto fucks Lois, just the problem with this is the fact that character is not Naruto, he's just instead your poorly written self insert, and more than that this whole thing is just bad.
I mean are you in middle school or high school? Because that would explain why there's no story structure, why all the dialogue is bad, the nonexistent characterization and the numerous grammatical errors, writing mistakes and poor spelling.
"Um okay. You do realize that Peter Griffin is a complete waste of space right.
I'll give you a list of reason why I say such :
Peter Griffin is mentally retard-point being he completly and uderly wrecks the town on a reguler basis.2 He continues to be an udder neanderthal that he won't change at all.
3. He has a fourth-grade education. Nuff said.
4. If he was not married to Lois then do you honestly think that he would get away with half of this shit. Think about Lois's father is loaded with cash. Do you think he has not used his money to get away with shit?
5. Another thing his friend Quagmire is a rapist and had an affair with Cleveland's first wife.
verbally abuses his kids and even physically abuse them and his wife on numerous occasions.
Now onto Lois
1. Lois enables Peter I mean it's the same thing. Peter does something stupid or dangerous that puts everybody involved at risk and he pretends to learn and Lois and peter have sex.
2. Lois does the same thing to there children expect to a smaller extent.
cheated on Peter.
also has a child that has tendencies of a psychopath(Stewie)
Inconclusion Naruto was their therapist. Now there are more reasons why but here all I could think of at the top of my head.
Also, I had him list both parent's faults so they can improve. And do like don't read.
Well, guys, it's been real Fav, follow and review.
Also, no flames because there was a guest reviewer who said something that I am not going to repeat.
Also will make lemon one-shots for dc characters and family guy and American dad characters(wives and milfs)
Darth Plageuis signing out.