Before the chapter starts wanted to apologize since it took so long for me to update, but RL was a bitch (like usual). I was pretty sick when I wrote this, but I still hope that it turned out alright. Anyway, enjoy the story.


I woke up and had severe neck pain. I decided to sleep on the couch since we had only one bed even if it was a bed big enough for two. I just wanted to avoid getting into an embarrassing situation… or suffocated. Marie was hugging everything close to her tightly while she was sleeping how Jin learned in the last night. Unlike Jin who could get out of her grip by disappearing into the shadows, I would have to stay there the whole night and would have to deal with an embarrassing situation when she wakes up. Yeah, sleeping on the couch was definitely the better decision.

I got up and let my neck crack before I walked into the bathroom… which was in the same room as everything else. I brushed my teeth and washed my face before I changed into my regular outfit while Marie was still sleeping. Since Marie was still sleeping and we didn't plan to go to the big city before the afternoon.

I had a couple of hours on my own and now had to think about what to do. My System still wasn't ready for use and as a result, I had no idea what to do… but maybe this wasn't such a bad thing. Sure it would weaken me, but there are a couple of problems I have with it. For example, if Rossweisse did exists in my old world like I remember then that would mean one of two things. The first explanation would be that the System or whatever is the reason why I am in this world changed Rossweisse into a Valkyrie and the second would be that the System is messing with my memories. Neither of these two options was something I was really okay with, but I can't do anything about it now. However what I can do is some old school training, I didn't do any normal training after I arrived in this world.

Now that I decided what to do I headed out. I didn't make it very far due to being greeted by the woman who greeted us the day before. She went to me and started a conversation, asking me if we liked the cabin and then she started to ask me more about my relationship with Marie. Some people really are too curious… and that's why I used my Sharingan to put her under a Genjutsu which made her go back to work while I headed into the forest.

I soon found what I searched, the clearing on which Rose and I used to play when were kids. That sure brought back a lot of memories, but I won't let them distract me. I decided to start this by doing pull-ups on a tree branch… which was very easy. I did about a hundred before I dropped down and then I realized something that could potentially cause trouble for me. I didn't have unlimited stamina anymore. I only had it for two weeks, but still, I already got used to it and now my evaluation of how much stamina I have is messed up. I guess I should do a test to see just how much I have, but not today since I promised Marie to go shopping with her after she got access to her old bank account. Instead, I tried myself at something that could come in handy and is something I can't just copy… tree walking.

I know what you think now. He just did it last chapter as he followed Rossweisse and Odin. No, I did not. I just jumped from tree to tree without actually walking up to it and that's something I want to change. I'm sure that in certain situations running up trees and walls will be useful, also it will be good when I want to walk on water. Yeah, I defiantly want to walk over what while someone from the church is watching that would be hilarious. A couple of minutes later I started my training.

Two hours later I was able to hold myself onto the tree for a couple of steps before I fell off. I was displeased that it took me so long to learn this. Normally everything I tried comes to me easily with my Sharingan… I guess I'm relying too much on it. After said to hours I had to stop because something else that could cause trouble to me caught my attention. The next time I fell down, I hurt myself on the cheek which resulted in me bleeding and the wound didn't close. It seems that without my gamer abilities also my regenerative abilities are gone. This could cause a lot of trouble for me. Before I could get lost into thoughts my stomach growled which was the sign for me to go back and eat breakfast.

When I got back to the cabin Marie was already up and made some eggs which the woman from earlier gave to her. I thanked her and told her that I would like to shower first, but she told me that the food will be ready in a minute or two and that I should shower afterward. Then she noticed the scratch on my cheek.

"What happened to you?" Marie asked coming over to me and touching my cheek.

"It's just a scratch. No need to worry," I said with a smile while my heart started to beat a little faster.

"No need to worry? Normally such a small wound heals immediately, shouldn't it?" Marie asked sounding… worried.

"Well, it's complicated but right now I don't have my regeneration ability," I replied scratching my cheek.

"Then you have to be more careful! Wait, I'm going to get you something to bandage it," Marie said before wanting to get the first aid kit.

"Shouldn't you first take care of the eggs?" I asked mentioning to the kitchen.

"You're right!" Marie said before she hurried over to the eggs and I got the first aid kit.

Shortly after Marie and I were sitting on the table and ate breakfast. I asked her what she wanted to shop for when we go to the big city… and I immediately regretted asking her. Marie started to talk about wanting to buy a couple of clothes because she doesn't like wearing the cheap clothes which I bought for her. She also wanted to get a bit Jewelry and makeup… girl stuff. She went on and on about it, even Jin who had a place on the table held his ears down with his paws. I, on the other hand, had to listen to all of it which almost lasted an hour, an hour for god's sake! The good thing was that I didn't have to do the clean the dishes and instead could take a shower. After I was finished the three of us had to wait for another hour so that the next bus would arrive. It would probably be faster if I would run, but I couldn't take Marie with me and so we had to take the bus.


Two hours later the Marie and I were in the big city and in front of a big shopping center. I was so excited about this… I would rather do some training but I always keep my promises. Marie grabbed my hand and dragged me into… hell. If you think I'm exaggerating then wait until I told you how I wasted my day.

First, she dragged me into a clothing store in which we spend almost three hours. Marie tried on so many different clothes and always asked for my opinion. Seriously why can't they just go and buy the stuff they want and leave? The longest I need to buy some new clothes is around 15 minutes. After Marie got everything she needed she let me carry the stuff… and I can't put it into the inventory since I don't have it right now! In fact, the only item I have right now is my [Taurus (Revolver) Rank E].

'I hope my System will return soon, so I get back my inventory…' I thought as I carried her three bags for her until we were in front of a jewelry store. Inside that store, we spend another two and a half hours just so Marie can choose a couple of jewels. Next was makeup… and that too took its time. By the time we were finally done it was already past 6 pm and it was time to eat.

We went to a near restaurant and I don't know why, but I was the one that paid for the food… what is wrong with me? The only good thing about all of this was that I got the chance to eat one of my favorite meals, Haxen with homemade potato salad, Marie got herself a stew. We ate and talked there for quite a while and it soon became dark.

I had totally forgotten that I wanted to visit my mother which resulted in me being disappointed at myself. I swore to myself that I would visit her tomorrow, whatever may happen. I should also visit my father's grave when I am at it… I kind of feel bad that I forget to visit him, but he would have scolded me if I wouldn't have helped my Rose. He always told me that one should always take care of their friends and comrades.

A bit later the two of us started to make our way to a secluded alley where they wanted to invoke teleportation magic to return to the cabin. I may have lost my System, but I still have the skills I acquire including the ability to detect someone who is following me. I already got a sword ready to summon when the attack comes. I decided on a sword over a Scythe in this situation because of the relatively small alley in which I couldn't swing it around freely.

Marie was about to use the teleportation spell as four figures appeared before them. In the center of the four was standing a young woman with long blond… no, the color was more alike to gold and they were tied into twintails. She had blue eyes that had a similar color to a clear sky. Then there were two more girls wearing maid uniforms. One had long blond hair which she had tied into a short ponytail and hazel eyes. The second had violet hair that reached her neck and almost covered the entire left side of his face. The last of the four was the only male one of the group. He was a large, muscular man with slightly tanned skin. He was bald and wearing a black suit with sunglasses even so the sun was down… I had the feeling that he was going to be the first I would takedown.

"Well, well, well. If this isn't Marie… and hello mister hot guy," the girl with twintails said to me in a flirtatious tone. I was actually surprised by her attitude, but nonetheless, I didn't let my guard down even for a second.

"You should introduce yourself first before you ask someone's name," I replied as I coldly stared at her, ready to attack or defend at any time.

"Oh, that stare gives me chills," she said slightly shivering before smiling at me. "My name is Alice Victoria Elizabeth Sophie Eleonore Abensberg, but you can call me Mistress Alice."

"…too long, I'm just going to call you Alice," I replied which seemed to anger the large man but before he could move towards me Alice made him stop.

"Know that you know my name handsome, would you be so kind and tell me yours?" Alice asked me.

"The name is Train… Train Ritter," I introduced myself.

"And what are you doing with the failure of a Magician runaway?" Alice asked mentioning to Marie. This made me angry and I was about to say something, but Marie stopped me.

"Alice… what do you want from us?" Marie asked the girl as she narrowed her eyes.

"Marie, Marie. You were a very naughty girl running away from home. Your parents are so worried about you that they put up a very high reward for the person who brings you back. I thought if I would bring you back to them and the proud Sphere family would have to bow their heads in thanks for an Abensberg, wouldn't that be a great sight," Alice said chuckling to herself.

"Why would my family want me to return… as you said I am a failure," Marie replied and I felt she was ready for a fight too.

"My guess would be to marry you into another magician family for political reasons," Alice stated before she added with a smug face. "But who would want a failure as you as their wife?"

"I-" Marie was about to reply but I just had to say something.

"You're totally wrong about Marie! She isn't a failure neither as a Magician nor as a woman!" I said making Marie blush.

"Oh, please. She may have decent looks, but did you see her use magic before?" Alice asked in a joking manner.

"Yeah, I saw her use Magic. When I took her hostage after she first attacked me she wasn't really impressive… the same goes for the others that attacked me, but she made great progress over the past week. Also, her looks aren't decent… in my opinion, she looks way better than you," I said to Alice which seemed to anger her and Marie blush.

"I thought that maybe you would be a clever guy, but it seems like I was wrong. A shame… Gregor would you please take care of the boy and knock Marie out," Alice ordered the muscular man.

"Understood, Mistress Alice," the man said as he stepped forward. Then something happened I didn't expect… Gregor's skin gained a metallic look. "I will show them what my body of steel can do!"

"Marie, leave that one to me," I said to Marie and stepped back as I leaned forward, with my hand over the ground. "I'm going to show this guy that his body of steel won't be enough to stop me from cutting him up."

"If you don't wield a legendary or magical sword than it won't be enough to cut my body!" Gregor replied as he did flex his muscles.

"We will see," I replied as I pulled out a Katana which I did hold as if it was sheathed.

"I will show you the power of my fist!" Gregor replied as he got ready to attack me.

I listen closely to the breathing of my opponent. An interesting fact is that I didn't hold it in a typical way and instead like Zoro since I copied this technique from him… I still have to find my own style. I do this technique in reverse grip from beside-and-over my head, as opposed to from the waist with a standard grip on the sword.

Then we both attacked at the same time… and it was over in a blink of an eye.

"Ittoryu Iai: Shishi Sonson!" I said as I let my sword vanish into the shadows again.

The moment I finished these words Gregor's skin turned back normal and a deep wound appeared over his chest. Blood came out of it as he fell backward onto the ground. I didn't kill him since it wasn't necessary, but he should be out cold for quite a while.

"Impressive," Alice said as she watched the exchange. "If I am correct then you possess the Sacred Gear Canis Lykaon… interesting."

"Is there someone who doesn't know about my Sacred Gear?" I asked as Jin jumped out of my shadow.

"Everyone involved with the supernatural should know about the thirteen Longinus… these are literally tools that have the power to destroy gods," Alice stated… I already knew that.

"So, what's going to happen next? Do we now fight or will you let us leave?" I asked her ready to summon swords at any time.

"I surely would like to get my hands on Marie… and you, maybe even more than Marie, but we can hardly fight in the middle of this city. I also believe as long as my dolls here aren't fully equipped they will hardly put up a challenge for a Longinus user," Alice stated.

"Dolls?" I asked confused.

"Well, I hope we will meet again… no, I know we will meet again," she said to Marie and me with a smile on her face. "Number 1 use your Magic to teleport us away."

The violet haired girl nodded before she outstretched her arm. A second later a Magical Circle glowing in a purple light appeared beneath them.

"We will see each other again, Marie… handsome," Alice said shortly before she and the others vanished with a purple light.

"Well, that happened… I hope you can give me some answers after we returned to the cabin," I said to Marie.

"I will answer all the questions I can when we get back," Marie replied before she invoked her Magical Circle. "The let me teleport us back."

"Wait, let me do it," I said stopping her.

"Why?" Marie asked.

"I just want to make sure that they can't track us. When we teleport by using Magic they could track us, but if we use my teleportation ability of my Sacred Gear then they won't be able to do it," I explained my reasons.

"But if you use the ability over such a long distance and with more than yourself then it will cost you almost all your energy," Marie reminded me.

"Yeah, but I'm rather out of energy than have a possible enemy know about our location," I stated.

"Alright, I guess then I better make something that helps you recover your energy," Marie said smiling at me.

"That sounds good," I said and returned the smile.

I soon used my ability to teleport us back and I was completely drained. Sure, the ability to teleport to my weapons is great, but I have to train a lot more with it before I can use it efficiently and without draining my energy so much. Maybe I should start working to gain more control over my Sacred Gear… mastering it could be the key to my survival in this world. I also have to find a way to increase my strength even further… it won't take too long before I become "famous" and a certain group wants to recruit me. Scratch that, there will be way more than just one group coming after me when the time comes. However today there won't be anything else for me to do except to enjoy the meal which Marie did make for me and listing what is up with the Abensbergs.

Tomorrow I plan to spend my day Training and visiting my mother and father's grave. Well, that's the plan, but when do things work out for me as I plan them?


That's it for chapter 12. In this chapter, I introduced an OC antagonist who will appear from time.

Now there are a couple of things I want to address. The first is that I'm going to rewrite a couple of parts in different chapters, for example when he introduces his Sharingan early. First, the ones who told me that it would be stupid for him to tell the devils about it which is something that doesn't fit with my character, there are also some other factors. Anyway, this means that I will rewrite these parts and the parts in which they were mentioned. The second is that I play with the idea to take away Train's instant reaeration ability as well as his unlimited stamina with the reason that it was just a starting help.

Finally, just in case you guys didn't look in the Poll the Result is as following:

Celestial Spirit Magic 12, Jewel Magic 7, No new Magic 2

Anyway on with the replies to your Reviews:

Tristan Mabey: I though more something like the Nine-Tails Chakra Mode, but the Night Celestial Slash Dogs Balance Breaker isn't bad either. The thing I absolutely not want to give to Train is a heavy armor like that of the Scale Mails or the one of Regulus Nemea.

The lord of fate: I haven't decided yet, but I can give you a short rundown of what I think about each ability right now. Since as far as I get it the Mangekyō Sharingan gives the user one ability for each eye, Train will get two of the following abilities.

Tsukuyomi: Very useful, but not one of my top contenders to give to Train. The reason behind it is that other abilities are more useful later one when he will fight with stronger monsters where an illusion ability won't be of much use.

Amaterasu: Creating inextinguishable black flames at the user's focal point… yeah, that ability is really strong and would be a great addition to Train's long-range arsenal. There is almost no more dangerous and accurate ability I can think of and a great secret weapon for Train. The current top contender for one eye.

Close-range Kamui: This is the one Obito used with his eye. It's good for defensive abilities, but for attacks, it's rather useless. The best way to utilize this ability would be by giving Train also the other Kamui ability.

Long-range Kamui: This is the one Kakashi used with the eye given by Obito. It is more offensive and can stand for it alone, but to get the full use out of it I would have to use it together with the Close-range Kamui.

Blaze Release: Sasuke's unique ability to shape the black flames of Amaterasu. This makes the most dangerous ability (in my opinion) of the Sharingan even more dangerous and allows for more combo moves. The downside is Amaterasu is required for the second eye.

Kotoamatsukami: The strongest Gen Jutsu ability and the one I defiantly won't use in the story because of its restrictions. If I were to choose it Train would use it once in the entire story, twice if I give it to him for both eyes.

I'm not sure what abilities Madara's Mangekyō granted him, so if any of you know more abilities that I haven't listed here please inform me. The ability Train will acquire in any case is the Susanoo. Lastly, I want to inform you that Train won't get the Mangekyō for quite a while since it would grant him to OP abilities early on. He won't get it before Kyoto and probably a while after.

Guest: Yeah, you're right and that because as I stated above to some changes to the story because it wouldn't fit with the character I wanted to write.

Cole BloodRose: Interesting idea, but a hundred different weapons would give him way too much variety. With so many weapons he has at least one that is efficient against his opponents. Besides coming up with so many weapons would be kind of annoying and I have no idea what kind of Balance Breaker I would make give such ability.

Netapel: Yeah, sorry Marie will have Celestial Spirit Magic since the Poll Voted for it. Also if you an idea for Saji's Sacred Gear then just put it into the Reviews or PM me. I will comment on it and my use it if I like it.

Guest: I won't tell just yet which Sacred Gear of Vritra he has in the beginning, but you will see in a couple of chapters. Your suggestion for Saji's Sacred Gear is kind of interesting with Grendel's dragon scales considered as one of the hardest and toughest scales out of all Dragons. In my opinion, this Sacred Gear would give him Power similar to when he has Vritra. Grendel may give Saji a greater physical increase than Vritra, but he would lose much of his variety. As for Rossweisse… yeah, she is stronger than Rias at this point. Her exact stats you will see in a couple of chapters when the Update on Train's abilities is done.

Blakwind: I didn't know that there were multiple of every of Vritra's Sacred Gear. I thought that there were more than just the four Saji used but that they would be different from his. I knew I could give both Vritra Sacred Gears, but I decided against it since only one can have Vritra as a partner making the other weaker. However I could rethink it because it could also be interesting, and I think that

Allen1996: I can assure you that I will only give him abilities that he will integrate into his fighting style or as a counter for certain opponents. Yeah the Sharingan is a cheat and that's why I let it only slowly develop, he still has to get his third tomoe and evolve it into the Mangekyō Sharingan. The next time I write a fight I try to bring in the environmental effects. Yeah, I messed up the characterization of my character, but I plan to go back and change it. I want my character to be cautious and remorseful. As for the family and friends… his family was already torn apart before he came into DxD which resulted in him not being such a family guy. His father is dead, his mother is in a coma, he doesn't know where his brother is and he doesn't see eye to eye with his grandparents. As for the DxD characters… I hope I can keep them as close to their personality as I can, but as you said there will be changes which also go for them in general. I hope I got all your points and I hope I can use your advises making this story better.

Until next time!