Hello everyone Derge 7654 here

After reading so many Ash betrayl fictions. I have decidet to make small stories of all of the cliches that I have found in all of these stories.

Will start with the Opening….

Its all way the same. Ash returns Home. His friends insult him and tell him how he should give up his dream and He runs away without giving it a second though.

The other proplem with this is that the betrayl is so sudden. His friends just suddennly become almost Giovanni level evil towards Ash. Some times they even murder Delia or Ash himself.

In rare stories. Even Delia will betray him and Pikachu will leave him and join Max or someone elses team.

But without any further due. On with the story...

Ash was excited to finally be coming back to Kanto after having traveled through the Kalos Region for almost a year now. Although he had lost in the finals to a Trainer named Calem from Vaniville Town, he wasn't sad about his loss. He had gotten to the final round, and they had both been down to their final Pokémon, and it had come down to a final stare-down between his Greninja and Calem's Sylveon, his Greninja just fell sooner. He knew that the next time he went through a Pokémon League, he would win for sure.

"HELLO PALLET TOWN!" Ash yelled out, excited to be home.

"Pikaaa!" Pikachu yell in an equal tone.

"Mom! I'm home!" a fourteen year old boy shouted, having returned home from his Kalos journey after being second from Kalos tournament.

"Oh Ash you are back..." His mother replied. "All your friends had gathered here for something very important." She added.

"What is it then?" Ash asked. His heart pounded with excitement as he could not wait for his friends again.

Behind his mother, there were most of his travelling companions since his first journey. There were: Misty, Brock, Tracey, May, Dawn, Iris, Cilan,Gary Oak, Max and lastly, Professor Oak.

Ash was slightly confused when he saw them again. He had expected them to have a cheery expression, instead, all of them ,including his mother, had angry glares on their faces.

"What's going on?" Ash asked. His pikachu showed the same expression as everyone around him.

"After a very long discussion, we had decided that you must quit your journeys for good!" Misty said. Every single one nodded their heads together.

"After we left you, we have succeeded in everything we wanted! You see, May, Dawn have become the queens of their respective regions! And I had succeeded in becoming a pokemon doctor and is now working in a top class hospital!" Brock yelled. "It was because of you that we always fail every single time!"

"We don't care if you helped us or not! We agreed that you should give up on your stupid and unrealistic dream! Besides, you have been a bad role model to my brother!" May snarled as both Dawn and Max nodded their heads in agreement.

"I shouldn't have been in love with you!" Serena shouted.

"You are just like a glitch and a bland, useless recipe mixed together!" Cilan shouted together.

"No matter what you do, you are always a little kid!" Iris scolded. "Please get real and give up already!"

"What are you talking about?" Ash shierked in response to everyone's comments of him. Suddenly, Pikachu jumped down his shoulder and ran to the traitors' side. "Not you too Pikachu?!" Ash cried. Pikachu shot another deadly glare at his trainer as he nodded his head in agreement.

"Ash! You have lose to every leauge you participated and you still have the balls to call me mom? I told you, from now on we are unrelated! Now get the hell out of this house!" His mother shouted.

And with that Ash run off the house with tear running…..

Cliche opening 2

This is the opening where Ash goes to mount silver to train his pokemon.

I have so many proplems with this cliche.

First only the elite trainers are allowed to go to mount silver.

Second: Ash is not a survival. I doud he could survive a snow coverd mountain alone.

Third: Most of his pokemon are not Ice type or are nor resistence to the harsh weather.

Four: The mountain is filled with strong pokemon like tyrannitar.

This opening just has too many holes. How did Ash survive for years there alone? And how did Ash hide from the league or the traitors?

But any way here is a small story of it….

An Ice cold wind was blowing in the high up mountain of Mount silver. Standing on a cliff was a man wearing a long black cape that wave like a flag in the wind and a hood that coverd his face completely. He had the body of the bodybuilder.

"Its been a long time since we came to this mountain, Huh pal" The man spoke to his yellow mouse partner.

"Pika Pii" It spoke

The sudennly the boy notice a Delibird flying in the distand and it was coming towards him. The bird landed next to him and gave him a letter that had the pokemon league symbol on it.

The man quickly open it.

Drear Ash Ketchum.

You are here by invated to the master Tournoment.

The winner of the tournoment will be grownd pokemon master.

PS:Your former Friends will enter the tournoment as well

Your truly: Charles Goodshow

"This is my chance to show everyone that im not a loser" Ash though and gazed to the horrizon.

the memories of the event that happend five years a go flow back into his mind….

FLASHBACK

(But a story similar as number 1 here)

END OF FLASH BACK

"They broke my heart that day" Ash spoke" I still cant belive they betrayed me like that"

"Pika pika" Pikachu spoke trying to conford its trainer.

"Thanks Pal" Ash said rubbing its head.

"This time we are prepared for anything" Ash spoke. During his training trip. Ash had discovers new had also discoverd a new pokemon and a new eeveelution and had discoverd new pokemon moves.

"Bewere Traitors" Ash annouced" Your worst nightmare is coming back"

AND CUT!

Thats the opening in a nutshell.

Next we move to the Oaks lab cliches.

If you have other Cliches ideas Please tell.

See you next time.