Naruto and the Alien Girls
Chap 1
Revised 6-19-19
Summary: An unforeseen event places Gwen, and a few other girls in another dimension. Now what will they do with no way home, and how does a certain blonde-haired, blue-eyed whiskered jinchuriki fit into the equation?
Extremely powerful/intelligent/cunning/kekkei genkai/fuinjutsu/juinjutsu/kenjutsu Naruto
Pairings: Naruto/harem and a special surprise
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Disclaimer: Don't own Naruto or Ben Ten
PLUMBER BASE
Nobody knew just what had happened. One minute there was a group of girls sitting together, and the next minute they were gone in a flash of light. The group of girls consisted of Gwendylin "Gwen" Tennyson, Charmcaster, or as she likes to be called Hope, Kai Greene, Elena Validus, Sunny, Helen Wheels, Eunice, and Julie Yamamoto.
FLASHBACK
The eight girls were relaxing and conversing, while in another room, some workers were fixing a strange device. "Are you certain this is a good idea" one worker asked? "I mean, the project was shut down for a reason" the worker continued.
"Of course, once the magisters see this baby, they will want to make more" The lead worker said. Unfortunately, at that moment, the machine somehow began powering up, before shooting a strange portal into the next room where the girls were.
"AAHHHHH!"
"HELP US SOMEBODY" the girls screamed, as Eunice and Helen were instantly sucked inside. Elena, Kai, and Julie dove behind Gwen, Hope, and Sunny, who had put up mana barriers, but to no avail. With a final scream, all was quiet.
"Uh oh" the lead worker said, turning, only to find his subordinates nowhere to be found.
END FLASHBACK
"All right, what happened here" Ben Tennyson asked, as he and his friend Kevin Levin came through the door, with Ben's grandfather Max hot on their heels?
"We're not sure sir" a random plumber said. "One minute, we were working on a new piece of equipment, and the next minute it shorted out, right as the girls vanished."
"Just great, and we have no way of contacting them, or bringing them back" Ben groused, as he felt himself collapse to his knees. "My cousin, my friends are gone" Ben said with his voice cracking.
"We'll find them someway somehow Ben" Max said, placing a hand on his grandson's shoulder.
MEANWHILE
The girls suddenly found themselves in what looked like a feudal Japan era. "Everyone okay" Gwen asked, as she got to her feet?
"I've been better" Julie said, dusting herself off.
"Amen to that" Kai said.
"Uh, I hate to bring this up, but those locals don't look too friendly" Helen said, as the group of eight turned to see a large group of bandits.
"Well look what we got here boys" one bandit said, leering at the eight girls.
"I say we give them to Orochimaru-sama" a second bandit said, gaining cheers.
"Any plans leader girl" Sunny asked, as she began to manipulate her mana?
"OH HA HA" Gwen retorted, as she shot a blast of mana at three bandits sending them flying.
"Orochimaru will have a field day with these experiments" a new voice said, as three new figures appeared.
"Kajika-sama, Iwana-sama, and Yamame-sama" the bandit leader said respectfully, only for Kajika to slice the man in the middle with his sword.
"I think we're in trouble" Julie said. Little did she know, her savior was about to show up.
"POOF!"
In two plums of smoke appeared two figures. The first, was a tall man with long white hair and brown eyes. He wore a kabuki-themed outfit, and had a metallic headband, with black jetta sandals. The second figure looked to be around Gwen, Kai, and Julie's age with Sunkist blonde hair, deep blue eyes, and six whisker marks on his cheeks. He wore a full Prussian blue bodysuit, with purple fleece. On his hands were a pair of fingerless metallic gloves, and bandages wrapped around his arms up to his elbows. He wore a pair of steel-toed combat boots on his feet. These were Jiraiya the Toad Sannin, and his apprentice Naruto Uzumaki. "You guys work for Orochimaru hm" Jiraiya said, as the bandits and the three newcomers glared? "You want some action Naruto" Jiraiya asked, only to get a grunt of confirmation? Naruto didn't waste a split-second, as he rushed forward.
NARUTO VS BANDITS
Naruto appeared in the center of the group, knocking one bandit silly with a devastating spinning back kick to the face, knocking him out instantly. Continuing his momentum, Naruto struck a lethal chakra-enhanced spear handed strike into another bandit's neck. A swift palm heel strike sent a third bandit crashing to the ground.
SIDELINES
The eight girls were in shock, as they watched the blonde easily dispatch the bandits. "Man, and I thought I had skill" Gwen mused to herself. "He makes me look like a white belt" she finished in her mind. The other girls were thinking along the same lines.
"This guy isn't even fighting at full power." (Charmcaster/Elena)
"I've never seen anything like this." (Sunny)
"I sense something within him." (Kai)
"Wow, he's incredible!" (Julie)
"Unreal!" (Gwen)
NARUTO
Naruto looked toward Kajika, Iwana, and Yamame with a "Just Bring It" look. "Another day jinchuriki scum" Kajika said, as he and his team disappeared in plums of smoke. "Ah the day is saved by the gallant Toad Sannin Jiraiya-"
"BOP!"
"GWAH!"
Jiraiya now lay doing a face plant in the ground with his legs in the air. "Jiraiya the super pervert is out to lunch" Naruto said. "Hello ladies, the name's Naruto Uzumaki" Naruto said. Each girl then stepped forward to introduce herself.
"Gwendolin "Gwen" Tennyson."
"Charmcaster or Hope."
"Sunny Tennisen."
Elena Validus."
"Kai Greene."
"Helen Wheels"
"Eunice"
"Julie Yamamoto."
TIMESKIP
The group was relaxing at an inn in Hi no Kuni. Jiraiya had gone off to see one of his informants in his spy network, leaving Naruto and the eight girls. Naruto was sitting on the roof of the inn looking over the scenery, illuminated by the brightness of the moon. "Penny for your thoughts" a voice asked? Naruto turned to see Julie behind him. "You seem like you have a lot on your mind" she said.
"It's complicated" Naruto said.
"Try me" Julie said. Naruto raised an eyebrow, before a smile fell over his face, and then turned into a smirk.
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"First, you girls can come out now" Naruto said, as seven red-faced girls appeared from their hiding spots. Julie's brow twitched, as she gave Gwen a "are you for real" look. "All right, I know you have questions, so I'll answer them with an overview of my life, and some of the things I've done" Naruto said. Naruto started by telling them about the night he was born, the Kyuubi attack, and the aftermath. After that, he told them about his horrific childhood, his time training at the ninja academy, Mizuki's failed betrayal, his time on team 7 all the way to recent events. Naruto then explained how his teammate Sasuke Uchiha had tried to leave the village for power, only to be brought back by a group of genin and one Chunin, including himself. "It was the aftermath that changed everything" Naruto said, as the girls listened intently.
FLASHBACK
KONOHA GATES
Naruto had just reached the gates of Konoha, with an unconscious Sasuke slung over his shoulder. He was greeted by Tsunade, Jiraiya, Shizune, and the remainder of team 7.
"Naruto you" - Sakura started, only to see how banged up Sasuke was.
"Naruto, I'm very disappointed in you" Kakashi said sternly. "You didn't have to take it that far" Kakashi continued.
"Uh sensei I didn't"- Naruto tried to say, only for the next few minutes to feel like an eternity.
"SLAP!"
Naruto was sent stumbling a few steps, before looking at the enraged pink-haired kunoichi.
"YOU MONSTER, YOU HURT SASUKE-KUN" Sakura screamed in fury.
"Don't I"- Naruto couldn't finish, as Tsunade interjected.
"Get the Uchiha to the hospital now" she said. "He's got blood soaking his clothes" she finished, before rounding on Naruto. Tsunade was about to say something, when an indigo-haired blur appeared, revealing to be Hinata.
"SLAP!"
Everything went deathly still, before Hinata spoke with tears. "N-Neji-nii and K-Kiba-kun are really hurt, and we don't know if they'll make it" she said as she began to break down. "If you hadn't fought Sasuke, this wouldn't happen" she said, as Sakura gently hugged her.
"I honestly hope you get what's coming to you Naruto" Kakashi said, taking Sasuke, and leaving.
"Brat, you better have a reason for this" Tsunade said scowling, before an ungodly KI froze her.
"I do believe you've said and done enough" Jiraiya said coldly, as he shunshined with Naruto to the hospital.
HOSPITAL
Arriving at the hospital, Jiraiya immediately was greeted by Rin. "Jiraiya-sama-" Rin stopped when she saw her surrogate little brother's condition. "DON'T JUST STAND THERE MAN, GET NARUTO-KUN TO THE ER" Rin cried, gaining a "yes ma'am" from the now terrified Jiraiya.
TIMESKIP
Three hours later, Naruto was facing Jiraiya. "Let's see if I have this right Naruto" Jiraiya said. "You held back, because you knew what would happen if the golden boy was hurt, and it cost you two chidori attacks: one in the shoulder, and the other between the lungs" Jiraiya said.
"Hai sensei" Naruto said.
"Naruto that was absolutely stupid" Jiraiya said. "Smart, but stupid, and I don't blame you in the slightest" Jiraiya said. A soft knock sounded, and Shizune stepped in.
"Naruto, I wanted to apologize for Tsunade's actions" She said.
"You have nothing to be sorry about nee-chan" Naruto said, before a grim Rin entered.
"Don't speak too soon" Rin said. "Tsunade is now calling Naruto a demon for his actions, and is going to have you banished" she said.
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"WWWHHHAAATTT!"
"That fool" Jiraiya growled lowly. "Naruto, as soon as you're in the green, I'm taking you on a four year training trip" Jiraiya said.
"That's fine by me, but I want to cancel my contract with the toads, since I know Konoha is so dependent on them, and I can always use the summoning technique, even if it is risky" Naruto said, as Jiraiya nodded.
END FLASHBACK
Naruto finished his story, ggaging their reactions.
"How horrible." Gwen)
"People say I'm a brat." (Sunny)
"Idiots" (Julie)
"Well Naruto, we've got your back" Kai said, as the others nodded.
"Thanks guys, it really means a lot" Naruto said. Watching nearby, Jiraiya smiled.
"Something tells me Konoha is about to regret their actions very soon" he thought. Looking up to the starry sky, Jiraiya spoke. "Minato, Kushina, you two would be so ashamed and disgusted with how the village has fallen" he whispered. Soon the visage of Minato and Kushina could be seen in the sky, as a gentle breeze blew through the air, as if speaking. "I think I understand" Jiraiya said, as he had an evil grin on his face. "Tsunade, will you and the village be in for one huge surprise, especially now that Naruto's a free agent" Jiraiya thought with a genuine smile.
The next morning, the group of ten were boarding a boat that would take them toward Uzu no kuni. "What exactly are we going to be doing in Uzu no kuni" Naruto asked, as Jiraiya grinned.
"I'm so glad you asked my young apprentice" he said. "We are going to start your training, as well as starting the girls' training, and you will be given your birthright" Jiraiya informed.
TIMESKIP
Later that night, Naruto entered his room, and was surprised to see Julie sitting on his bed, clad in a deep blue yukata. "Julie, what are you" - Naruto was cut off, when Julie gave him a light glare.
"I'm here because the girls could tell you left something out of your story" she said. Sighing, Naruto took a seat on the opposite bed.
"Brace yourself Julie" Naruto said. "What I didn't tell you guys is that before I left I got attacked by some of my former allies, and my ex-girlfriend" Naruto said.
FLASHBACK
Naruto was quickly heading towards the main gate, when he found himself surrounded by Tenten, Sakura, Ino, Kurenai, Asuma, Shikamaru, Kakashi, and Hinata. "Didn't you three already make your point" Naruto asked irritated, looking towards his former sensei, teammate, and secret girlfriend?
"Sorry to disappoint, but we thought it best to help you leave" Kurenai said, as Kakashi, Asuma, Sakura, and Ino began to brutally attack Naruto. All Naruto could do was try to cover his head, as the blows rained down. After ten long minutes of vicious attacks, the group stopped.
"Thanks to your troublesome rivalry and pride, my best friend is currently fighting for his life" Shikamaru said icily, before walking away.
Thanks to you, Kiba's in a similar situation, and I even approved of your little relationship with Hinata" Kurenai said, while making handseals for a genjutsu.
"It's because of you, my father is gone" Asuma said.
"You're the reason Sasuke's in this situation" Sakura shouted, before storming off.
"I-I d-didn't r-realize y-you w-were K-Kyuubi" Hinata said, turning not seeing the hurt look on her former boyfriend.
Tenten only unsealed a pair of katanas, and slowly made her way towards Naruto, setting a blade at his neck, while the other was at his heart.
"Do it Kurenai" Kakashi ordered, only for a green blur to burst onto the scene, delivering a powerful flying kick that sent Kurenai backwards, where she landed on her back. Looking up, all four saw a very angry Gai staring at them. Gai wasn't alone either, as Anko, and her squad of Ami, Fuki, and Inaho, alongside Kiba's older sister Hana, Ayame Ichiraku, her friend Okyo, Yamato, Yugao Uzuki, Yakumo Kurama, Azami, Rin, and Shizune stood next to him.
"I think you have all done more than enough" Gai said with venom. The attackers only glared, before leaving. Turning back, the adults could only look on sympathetically, as the five girls helped Naruto to his feet, while trying to comfort him.
END FLASHBACK
After telling the remainder of the story, Naruto looked at the look of shock on Julie.
"Oh Naruto, I'm so sorry you had to go through that" she said, running to hug him tightly, as she wiped away the tears falling from his eyes.
"I-Its fine Julie, if they don't want me around, then that's on them" Naruto said softly.
"I never gave them a reason to think I would intentionally hurt a comrade, but it was the golden boy, who in their eyes can do no wrong, so they willingly choose to blind themselves to the truth, and what's right in front of them" Naruto said bitterly.
"Well, do you just want to talk" Julie asked, as she laid on the bed against him?
TIMESKIP
A half hour later, found Julie entering the room she was sharing with Gwen, Sunny, and Kai. "What did you find out" Gwen asked, while Sunny and Kai listened in?
"He said some of his former allies tried to do more damage, but were stopped, but what hurt him the most, was his ex-girlfriend joined in on the attack" Julie said, causing Gwen to shoot straight up in her bed, while Sunny and Kai had wide eyes.
"THEY DID WHAT" the trio all but shouted? Julie then told them everything Naruto had told her, and needless to say, Gwen and Sunny were radiating their red mana, while a dark and foreboding aura was coming off of Kai. "I think we just found ourselves a new purpose to be here" Gwen said, after calming down.
"I agree, and I say we tell the others tomorrow morning, and if we should ever run into those people, we protect Naruto at all costs" Julie said darkly.
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"That sort of response I'd probably hear from Sunny, but I think that might be a unanimous" Gwen said, before a grin formed on her face. "By chance, you're not just saying that because you see yourself in Naruto's position" she asked slyly?
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All Julie could do was turn beat red, and muttered an incoherent "no comment", before regaining her composure.
"Actually, he did tell me quite a few things" Julie said grinning.
FLASHBACK
"Hey Naruto, can you tell me what you think of this" Julie asked, as she concentrated a little and soon formed ice in her hand? Looking closely, Naruto had wide eyes.
"Julie, that's the Hoyoton kekkei genkai" Naruto said in shock, before he explained about the various abilities his world had, which made Julie realize this world had some things in common with her former home.
END FLASHBACK
After listening to Julie's story, Gwen looked through some notes Jiraiya had given her on some of the abilities in the elemental nations.
"You know, it isn't really that wild not to believe that this world and our old home are so similar" she theorized, while the others thought it over, and nodded. "I think I want to study more about this world's abilities, so I'll become a medic-nin" she said.
End Chap 1
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I went back, and re-edited the chapter a little, so it fits with what's coming.
I apologize for spelling Eunice's name incorrectly the first time. That was due to me working by sound, as well as remembering the X-men character Unus the unstoppable.
So, Naruto's now banished from his home, and he's got eight beautiful girls by his side. What will happen when they reach Uzushiogakure? We'll find out come next chapter, along with the fallout of Konoha's banishment of Naruto.
Also, just so this is clear, this is only for the plot of the story, so if you feel like giving me criticism please be responsible and respectful with your comments.
Like I said originally, Hinata only attacked because she's worried about her cousin and teammate, and as the saying goes: blood is thicker than water.
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