THANKS to all the reviews that have come out, this was a difficult story, and I had to fight the urge to deviate from my original story plot when I got some very hurtful and spiteful comments, The response was overwhelming,

To the Guest who just posted about comments from Guest Commentators, I'm not talking about people like you, So read below and then remember every one who posts on this site tries in some small way to keep the show alive for those of us who love it. There is no pay, no awards, just the satisfaction that perhaps I get a review from someone who said the story touched them, or I made their day, or they were sad for the characters, some of my faithful really invest in the story, and I really appreciate the feedback. I don't appreciate or tolerate morons who have trouble spelling their names and seem to have something negative to say about every story they read. Tell me what you think of the fellow Guests when you read just a sampling of the 74 pages of comments I have copied before deleting, just to remember You Can't Fix Stupid, and no matter how hard you try, some people are just assholes,

So you want to write for the Castle Fan Fic, Be prepared for idiots who hide behind the computer and post this type of junk

Below are only SOME of the reviews the cowards leave, so if you don't think they have impacted others beside me, count how many Good authors have left this site, and don't give me the crap about being sensitive, or rude, If I had a way to reply to them one on one the language would definitely be M

Before you read below, please know I am truly grateful for the many who did like, favor, and especially to those who took the time to write a review, I think it made me better in writing and for that I thank you, now enjoy a trip down what most writers will read several times during their time here till they say WHY, Why am I doing this for people who write this stuff, you have Pen2Paper and I both seriously thinking what's next, and now maybe you can understand why, Thanks for the good times,

JoJo Dinner Date, Chapter 46, 11m
All I want for Easter is for you to crawl into some hole and never to come out.
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Joined May 26, 2001, id: 72955
Author has written 1 story for Final Fantasy I-VI.
Ok... What can I say.. I'm thirteen years old, people say I have a talent in writing. Im entering High School fall 01 and will be going to a journalism/literature class. I love reading Harry potter, and at the same time love writing about games (and playing them) too! So please read one of my stories? I'd really appreciate it. Bye.

Jordan Dinner Date, Chapter 38, Yesterday 8:04PM
I see you're back. Must have gotten enough atta boys. This will only last till you feel slighted and not fawned over as the best thing since sliced bread. When you continue to try and provoke the majority of readers don't be surprised that you get attacked. You wouldn't by any chance be Alexi Hawley because most of this is garbage like he would write. This ranks up there with season 8 as some of the worst I've read. You say that you write for enjoyment, well I read this fanfics for my enjoyment and I'm sorry to say your tales just don't do it.

Yet Alexi is making tons of money, far more than me, so if that was an insult Jordan, you are dumber than a rock. Also, genius, why did it take you 38 chapters to figure out you thought the story was crap, I came back at chapter 30

Guest Dinner Date, Chapter 38, 9m
sad story, castle had already said that his relationship with Gina was asexual, I would like to read a story where they really solve their problems, fight, but talk, solve, is repetitive, always Castle appears as a saint and Kate the evil and ends defeated, without saying that she as a police officer would let Esposito act with the Castle family with violence ONCE again someone who doesn't understand AU, versus Canon, I never wrote the first line, it appears that English is not their first language which I appreciate, but honestly half of the last part made no sense to me at all.

From: Guest This jackass follows me, the story hadn't been published on the main page before the review, talk about pathetic loser, follow someone to post literary genius work like this, bet their Mom is so proud

:This story has turned into a steaming pile of s***

Guest Everything Changes, Chapter 6, 1h
Your stories are dumb as shit
Again, took you that long to figure it out?

Guest Dinner Date, Chapter 33, Yesterday 8:17PM

Seems as though you have some real issues to work out. Hope you get the help you so clearly need.
I guess watching 8 seasons of Castle qualifies you for a mental health specialist, trust me nothing like writing for morons like this will ever test your mental fortitude

Story: Dinner Date
Chapter: 33. Chapter 32

From: Guest

:This story sucks a** Took this genius 32 chapters to figure it out

Guest Dinner Date, Chapter 25, 16m Another slow learner, but faster than the one above only took this idiot 25 chapters
You suck
25 chapters reading the most he/she could think of was two words, pity they are stealing oxygen from true humans on the planet.

From: Guest

:Your version of Castle is not only a s*** you also have him acting like a complete a***. I think Martha said best when she said love isn't a switch that you can turn off just like that. Better luck next time

From: Guest

:Your version of Castle never would of worked for the show because everyone would of thought he was a grade A d***