I am proud of this chapter, despite it's short length, that I could cheer at the top of my lungs! I do hope you all love this chapter as much as I myself do.

Using her pale yellow hooves, the terfied mare couldn't help but cling onto Discord's back as he flew through the sky. Despite her being a pegasus, Fluttershy was horribly modified of heights; the sheer thought of being stuck up high in the sky send angry butterflies up through her stomach and into her chest.

"A Pegasus, afraid of heights?" The draconequus couldn't help but find it a bit amusing. "I thought I was the weird one."

Letting a quiet huff leave her lungs, the small pony gently rammed her hoof into the side of his ribs. "Hey, I can't help it if I'm scared."

Flipping upside down, Discord dramatically rested his claw onto his forehead as if acting out a death scene in a Greek tragedy. "Oh, Fluttershy that hurt; how could you attack me when i am trying to save you?"

Falling for the act, Fluttershy let out a gasp of worry toward him. "I'm so sorry, Discord I never meant to actually hurt you; are you okay?"

Flipping back right side up, Discord let out a burst of laughter leaving the poor mare in a state of confusion for if only a moment. "Only kidding, Fluttershy."

"Discord," Fluttershy began to scold him. "Don't scare me like that I actually thought I hurt you."

Seeing the golden mare doing her best to give him THE STARE, he couldn't help the subtle chuckle that left his throat. "Forgive me, my dear I won't do that again."

Taken aback, she noticed how he called her His Dear; it was strange of him to say that but considering the circumstances she was in at the moment she decided not to question him. It came into her thoughts, though, the fact that she had no idea where they were headed. Where does he live? She thought. Knowing Discord, it's probably a scary place. I do hope he won't hurt me. He won't... right?

"Lost in thought I presume?" His voice snapped her away from her thoughts. "A penny for them thoughts?"

A giggle left the pegasi as he asked her that question. Discord being polite? It was almost unheard of and she almost couldn't believe her ears. "Just wondering where we are going."

Nodding to her reply, the draconequus spun around leaving her on his stomach now. Resting his head on his claw and paw, he gazing over to her with a raised brow. "What, a guy can't relax during travel?"

A slight smirk painting on her muzzle, she decided to play back at his game of craziness. "Forget that, where's my penny?"

Bursting into laughter, Discord was shocked that Fluttershy of all people could come up with such a sassy come back. Due to his spasming- er- elongated gut, the mare was bobbing up and down trying not to get nauseous. His laughter finally easing away, he couldn't help the cheeky grin inching its way across his face. "I knew you were my favorite pony for a reason."

Letting her head slightly tilt to the side, the yellow pony gave him a confused look. "Your favorite?"

Dodging that question, Discord spun back around again and Fluttershy landing back onto his back. "Oh look, we are almost there."

Looking over his head, she spotted a spooky cave sitting atop a majestic mountain covered in a blanket of fluffy snow. Feeling a rush of nervousness come over her, the mare once again clung her hooves around him. "Not a scary dark cave!"

"It's not just the cave we are headed to." Discord responded as he swiftly landed inside the eerie, cold cave and swooped Fluttershy back into his arms. "Trust me."

Walking up to the grey, stone wall of the chilly cave, Discord lifted a claw and gently set it against the wall before him. Right before her eyes, the mare watched as a golden, glowing door magically appeared in front of them. The glittery, magic sparkles falling down to the ground and vanishing like dying fireflies.

"Let me show you where you will actually be staying." Slowly, he opened the beautiful door and their eyes were met with a bright light blinding them.

Covering her eyes, Fluttershy attempted to ease the harsh burn the light sent to her eyes and let her sight adjust before taking in the wondrous scene before her. Above them, soft, pastel pink clouds floated above their heads across the ocean blue sky. A few of them let out spouts of chocolate milk rain before running dry and poofing away. Bellow them, what seemed like Rocks and Stones strangely did not sit there like normal but danced the salsa. She couldn't help but giggle at the sight of the dancing stones; their little feet quickly dancing them across the golden sidewalk that led across the magical field. As they walked father down his own personal yellow brick road, they were greeted by dogs that had heads of cats and cats that had heads of cats.

"That's so silly!" Fluttershy chuckled as she pointed her hoof toward them gleefully.

"Why yes," Discord replied. "I was quite proud of that creation."

Hearing the sound of a quack, she felt her ears twitch before turning her head to see the quacking coming from chickens. As if that didn't confuse her enough, a duck that should be quaking waddled passed them barking. Rolling over in his arms, she gazed back up to the sky watching as a flock of flying pigs soared by. Her teal eyes beamed in wonder at all this; they all thought he was nothing but a monster when really, Discord was just a creative spirit that wanted to share his wonderland with every pony else. Turning back onto her side, she was greeted by a pack of fish running by; a fish with legs wasn't exactly the first thing she imagined she'd see today.

Fluttershy was seeing the beauty hidden within his so called chaos and she loved it. Finally, spotting the castle made of chocolate chips, she was excited by the fact the tower didn't stand up straight but rather tilted to the side. I wonder if it's crooked inside or if it looks right side up? She thought. Above the cookie castle was a large, single pastel purple cloud that, instead of chocolate milk rained strawberry milk. She loved that special touch it had.

Walking up the steps, Discord made it to the enormous door of the castle and opened it so they could enter. Immediately, Fluttershy felt her brain sing in pain at the site of what was inside. Staircases that led to nowhere, zigzag patterns that races across the walls like speeding worms and all the furniture was set up on the ceiling. Thankfully, Discord saw her distress and in a snap of his fingers all the madness stopped. Staircases lead to hallways, the zigzags vanished and rather became lines on the wall like a pattern and the furniture was on the ground where it belonged.

"Sorry about that," He apologized as he closed the door behind them. "I forgot the fix the place up before bringing you in."

"It's fine." Fluttershy replied. "Though it gave me a headache it was interesting."

Giving the mare a soft smile, he began to head toward the largest staircase. "Let me take you to your quarters."

"My Qaur- you mean my room? Discord, you didn't have to put a room together for me." The pony in his arms replied, trying to be as biased as possible. "When did you even have time for that anyways?"

"I'm Discord." He replied, arriving at the fourth floor. "Don't question me."

As he made his way over to a door, Discord opened said door to reveal a room MADE for Fluttershy. Forest green walls were decorated with glittering, pink butterflies and the carpet was a pale pink color. Painting of critters also covered the bottom of the walls, squirrels, birds, bunnies, turtles, etc. All moved along the painted wall like they were alive. Squirrels scurried up and down the dark brown and green trees, fish splashed in and out of water that couldn't be seen, birds flew across the walls and rabbits hopped along the floor line. A large bed sat in the middle of the room, teal pillows and blankets adorned with a floral pattern hugged the bed and a princess like canopy around her bed. Floating above her bed where golden, glowing orbs that seemed like bubbles with butterfly fairies inside. They floated along inside her room like fireflies.

"Oh, Discord I love it!" The small mare chimed in amazement. "I've never had anyone do something so wonderful for me before. Thank you so much, Discord it means so much to me that you'd set me up a room as magical as this just for my stay here as I recover."

"Anything for you, Fluttershy." The draconequus answered before setting the pony into her warm bed. "Now, you're injured pretty bad my dear so please get some rest."

"Rest, I can't rest when there is so much more fascinating things to see!"

Despite loving her excitement for his chaos, he knew she needed to rest to get better. "Hush now, Quiet now Fluttershy it's time to get some rest."

Hearing his reference to her song, the pegasi couldn't help but sink down into her soft, cushiony bed snuggling up inside the cozy blankets. "Alright, I'll get some rest."

Using her magic, the violet unicorn was tossing books across the room of her library at an alarming rate. "I have to find it, I just have to!"

Ducking, Spike swiftly dodged another flying book of death before rising back up again. "Twilight, what are you even looking for?" The baby dragon asked. "It's gonna take me days to clean all this up and organize it."

"No time for cleaning Spike!" The magical mare replied, tossing another book over his head. "I have to find a resurrection spell!"

"A resurrection spell!? Twilight, isn't that a bit dangerous?"

"Don't care, I'll do anything to-" Feeling the pain of losing Fluttershy finally sting into her chest, she let all the flying book simply fall over the floor before her herself dove onto the carpet and let out a loud and painful weep. "Fluttershy! I couldn't save poor, sweet Fluttershy and now she's gone!"

Spike watched his friend, more like his sister, sob on the floor and sat next to her. "I'm so sorry, Twilight."

Using her hood to wipe away her tears, the mare looked over to the dragon with a sniffle. "I've gotta bring her back, Spike I just gotta."

Now I will show you the chapter 2 from the original fanfiction so you can see the difference and improvement. Beware of cringe.

ORIGINAL

Fluttershy awoken in a dark and cold cave. Her head was all fussy and room spinning.

She had lost a ton of blood. She looked to see her leg and hoof were bandaged up.

"hu?" She said tilting her head in confusion. "So cute." Discord said startling fluttershy.

"Oh i'm sorry. I didn't mean to scare you my dear." He comforted her. " i took out the glass and bandaged your wing."

Fluttershy smiled. "Oh um. Why thank you discord. That was...very kind of you."

Fluttershy was so confused, Discord was being Kind? This is so unlike him.

"Well welcome to my cave, it's not so dull you see. It's only a camouflage." Discord said to catch her attention.

"How so?" She asked.

"I'll show you, i waited until you awoke to show you." Discord snapped his fingers and a huge stone wall opened up. As it did, the whole cave started to shake like an earthquake. Fluttershy squealed and tried to keep her balance.

After it opened, discord picked Fluttershy up, walking threw the doorway. Suddenly a whole new world appeared. Pink clouds flew by raining chocolate milk, and rocks danced the salsa. Dogs had the heads of cats, and cats the heads of dogs. Chickens quacked, and ducks barked. Pigs flew, and fish walked on two legs. It was his own personal world of chaos. Though chaotic, there was beauty hid within it. He had a huge castle at the end of a chocolate ship road. It was dark, and some castle tower didn't sand strait up but sideways from the walls. Above it was a Purple cloud, raining strawberry milk. Now that one's a new one.

"Would you like to stay at my castle my dear, at least until you are well?" Discord offered.

Flutter shy was dumbfounded, was he being generous now? Whats his deal?

"That would be lovely discord."

Though she wanted a place to stay, she was afraid of what was inside. Soon they entered the castle gates, in front there where two gargoyles guarding the castle. Only thing is, they where dancing. Discord then stopped at the large door, witch had zigzags painted on it that where moving all over it.

"Before we go in i must fix up the place, i don't wanted to scare you." He said as he snapped his figures. "There, now we can go in."

He then kicked open the door, and a light blinded them. Fluttershy covered her face with her hoof as she saw a huge diamond chandelier hanging, no floating with candles lighting it. There were also paintings of discord and hybrid creatures hung crucked on the wall. There were also statues dancing, and stairs that lead to no where, but then moved to doors at certain times.

"Hope its not to, hogwarts." Discord joked.

"Oh, no. It's odd, but beautiful as well" Fluttershy said as a compliment.

Discord then took her up the steps to a room. "This will be you're room while you stay."

He opened the door, and fluttershy gasped in amazement. There where pink walls with trees and birds painted on them. Also had bunnies, squirrels, and other critters. They also moved as if alive. A huge bed sat waiting for her, and above floated crystal spheres with fairies inside them to light the room.

"How creative." Flutter shy complimented.

"Why thank you, i made it for you." Discored said as Fluttershy's ears then perked up, and face turned red.

"F-for me?" She asked.

"Why of course, only five stars for my special guest." He layed her on the bed, tucking her in. "Alright, you still need some rest , doctors orders."

She giggled. "Doctor?"

" Yes doctor discord, now sleep missy." He joked again.

"Yes Sr. Doctor discord."

Twilight had went by to see fluttershy noticing her disappearance. She called the other four ponies for a meeting

. "Alright, has anybody seen fluttershy?" She asked.

Pinkie raised her hand."Oh Oh I know!"

"Yes pinkie?" Twilight said.

"I last saw her with rainbow dash!" Pinkie said hopping up and down.

Twilight looked at rainbow waiting for a response. "What?' Rainbow asked.

"Where is flutter shy?" Twilight asked.

"I don't know." Rainbow answered.

Twilight then turned back to the girls. "Apple jack? Rarity?"

They both shook theirs heads. "Sorry sugar cube, we haven't seen her either." Apple jack said.

Pinkie then gasped. " Maybe she went to a PARTY!"

Apple jack did a face hoof. "Pinkie that's not like fluttershy."

Rarity flung her hair out of her face spraying hairspray. "I last saw rainbow dash yelling at her."

Twilight then directed her attention to Rainbow again. "Yelling at her hu?"

Rainbow stud her ground. "Why in equestria would i yell at flutters!?"

Twilight snorted in anger, blowing air threw her mussel. "Ug! Why would fluttershy just vanish!?" She yelled throwing herself into her bed. "It makes no seance, she wouldn't just run away like this."

Pinkies hair then grew flat as she thought about fluttershy. "What if she's hurt? What if she's cold? What if she's lost, and can't get to my PARTY!" She said busting into tears.

Twilight cover her head with her pillow screaming into the bed in frustration. "What kind of princess am i if i can't even find my friend?"