Hello everyone, This is The Hand Of Fate, and hopefully this is the one. Today is 5/22/19. Not sure when this will be posted, but today's the day I start writing. I hope everyone reading enjoys, and I hope this turns out to be a good story.
And now, without further adieu~
I present: The Fallen One.
In the beginning, there was nothing. Then there was everything. Atoms, little particles that make up matter, and finally God. The sole being in the universe, who discovered he could manipulate those particles to create. And he did create, in 6 days he created what we know as the Universe, and those creations attracted another being like him. And in attempt to woo her, God created a little place called Heaven. And from there God ruled over all of creation with his wife and children beside him. At least that's the story Dad always told me. But this place, this world, The Brothers, makes me think that, maybe, Dad Lied.
~Lucifer The Fallen Angel, in the guise of Jaune Arc, to Pyrrha Nikos.
It had been 6 months since the Lord Of Hell had last seen his kingdom. 6 Months since he had awoken in the world of Remnent. 6 Long months since he had adopted the Name of Jaune Arc and buried his past as Lucifer. 6 months. Lucifer had loved every damned second of those 6 months. He loved this world, he loved Beacon Academy, and he loved the group of mortals that had become his friends. Here he was free, truly free, from every chain his father had placed on him, The Lord had no power here, and the fact that Amenadiel, or Michael hadn't been sent for him yet lead the Fallen Angel to believe that his father had no idea where he was. So Lucifer lived, he adopted the guise of a bumbling idiot, and snuck into an academy for Demon Hunters. (He didn't care what they called themselves, they fought monsters created by a dark god, even if they weren't technically demons, he still counted Grimm). And enjoyed every minute of it. His only complaint was having to to keep his "loser" persona up 24-7.
"What's up Jauney-boy?"
Case in point.
"What do you want Cardin?"
Cardin Winchester, possibly the person he hated most on this world, and his name didn't help either, it brought back bad memories (Seriously Ice?! SERIOUSLY?! He ruled the pits of FLAME! What about that was hard to understand?! Fricking Mortal Writers.)
"I was wondering why someone as pathetic as you was accepted into Beacon, I mean, you haven't won a spar once!"
It was moments such as this that Lucifer wished he didn't have to hide what he was, what he would give to incinerate this idiot.
"Is there any there any point to this conversation, or are you just going to keep mocking me? Because I've got better things to do than watch you waste O2."
Cardin's smile faded as he placed in front of Lucifer.
"You got some stones on you today Jauney-boy."
Shit. He was breaking, he had to calm down, he wasn't Lucifer at the the moment, he was Jaune Arc, nervous, and unassuming.
"Look, Cardi-"
He was cut off as Cardin grabbed his hoodie and slammed him into the wall.
"You actually think you can insult me and get away with it? Who do you think you are-"
"Ahem."
Both boys heads turned and felt their hearts plummet into their stomachs as their eyes met the stone cold glare of Glynda Goodwitch.
"Problem boys?"
Instantly Cardin dropped Jaune and hastily backed away,
"No Ma'am, no problem at all!"
The terrifying teacher's eyebrow raised ever so slightly,
"Then I suggest you both move on to the cafeteria, we wouldn't want you miss lunch, now would we?"
"No Ma'am!"
Lucifer sat down next Pyrrha Nikos, his partner at Beacon, apparently she was famous on Rement, but unlike most famous mortals Lucifer had, she was...Pure. A Pure Soul was something that Lucifer had encountered very few times in his immortal life, and was something very beautiful. A soul completely free of true sin. But there was something about her that bothered him, her soul was...very familiar. He was positive that he had met that soul at some point, but just couldn't recall, the name of her previous incarnation would be on the tip of his tongue, then it would...fade. He would always feel a great wave of sorrow when that happened, but he wasn't sure why. It was very annoying.
"Jaune? Are you ok?"
"What?" Lucifer was jerked out of his thoughts as his red-headed partner spoke to him.
"I asked if were ok."
"Huh? Oh, yeah! Why?"
"You just seem a little...not ok."
"Guy's, seriously! I'm fine!"
Just then a commotion on the other side of the food court drew the attention of the 7 teenagers and 1 fallen angel. They turned their heads to see Cardin tugging on some poor girls rabbit ears. (Lucifer was still trying to figure how THAT worked). Pyrrha eyes narrowed in disgust at the display before them.
"Jaune, Cardin's been picking on you since the first week of school."
"Who? Cardin Winchester? Nah... He just likes to mess around! You know, practical jokes!"
Ruby Rose, A.K.A. The living incarnation of innocence, fixed him with a look of pity.
"He's a bully."
"Oh please, named one time he's 'bullied' me."
(Que Cardin being a dick montage).
At this point everyone making up teams RWBY and JNPR were staring at him with mixed expressions of sympathy. Pyrrha reached over and placed her hand on his shoulder.
"Jaune, you know if you ever need help, you can just ask."
She gave him a small smile, and looked like she was going to say something else, before she was interrupted by the sloth obsessed-totallyinlovewithRen,althoughshe'dneveradmitit-Nora Valkyrie.
"Oh! I know!" She leapt to her feet with an insane grin on her face.
"WE'LL BREAK HIS LEGS!"
Lucifer snickered and leaned back, before turning an amused look to Nora,
"As much as I'd love to see that, Cardin isn't a problem, trust me when I say, There's a special place in Hell reserved for bullies."
Lucifer chuckled a bit at the image of the tortures he'd put Carin through if they were still in Hell, then he noticed all of his friends were staring at him.
"What? Do have something on my face?"
Pyrrha gave him a confused look, before asking,
"Jaune? What is 'Hell?'"
...Shit.
Lucifer was panicking. There was no denying that, after his slip of the tongue at lunch, he had responded eloquently, by running like Hell. Admittedly, that hadn't been the best idea he had. Now all his friends were suspicious, and kept throwing him glances when they thought he wasn't looking. They were currently sitting in their history class, taught by Dr. Oobleck. This was Lucifer's favorite class, it gave him the opportunity to learn more about the world he had landed in, It was very refreshing to hear someone talk about human history without mentioning the importance of Christianity. Very refreshing. But now he had to figure out what he was going to his team after class, and come up with some excuse to explain to them why he ran. ...Why had he run? It would have been easy to lie and that would have been that. So why had he run? For a minute he entertained the idea that he may have been afraid, then dismissed it with a scoff. He was Lucifer! Prince Of Darkness! Lord Of Hell! What did he have to fear? The chance that his friends would learn the truth? Impossible, there was no knowledge of him on this world. There was no way they could ever learn of him. ...But what if they did?
Lucifer's musing was interrupted as something thwacked into the back of his head.
"Hey!"
Hearing his sudden yelp, Dr. Oobleck immediately zipped in front of him,
"Ah! Mr. Arc! Finally contributing something besides a question! Excellent! EXCELLENT! What is the answer?"
"Uh…"
Lucifer glanced around hoping that something in the classroom might give him the answer. His eyes met Pyrrha's and he noticed she was gesturing to her eyes. He stared at her, and she cupped her hands around her eyes, finally comprehending Lucifer gave his answer,
"He lacked vision."
The class was silent after that answer. Dr. Oobleck tapped his chin briefly, before zipping back to his desk.
"EXCELLENT! While not the answer I was looking for, BUT NONETHELESS Acceptable! Well done Mr. Arc!"
Lucifer breathed a sigh of relief and sank back into seat. Oobleck quickly scribbled something on a clipboard that he pulled out of nowhere, then zipped back to the front of the class.
"Now! While Mr. Arc gave us an excellent answer, can someone else give me a more practical one? MR. WINCHESTER! What are your thoughts on this?"
Cardin Leaned back in his seat, and examined his fingernails seemingly uninterested.
"Well, I know it's a lot easier to to train an animal than a soldier."
Lucifer, who was already on edge from lunch, found himself retorting before he could stop himself.
"You would know, you Irrumator Praetor Capra."
Cardin rose to his feet threateningly, though he couldn't understand what Lucifer had said, he could tell it was an insult. But, Dr. Oobleck Interfered before anything could happen.
"Take your seat Mr. Winchester, and for your information, the answer was Faunus' natural Night Vision."
The bell rung, signifying the end of the class.
"That is all for today Class, don't forget tonights reading and questions, and late work will NOT be accepted, yes Ms. Rose I AM talking to you! MR. ARC, a word please!"
Lucifer sighed and trudged up to Oobleck's desk, and waited for the eccentric Doctor to speak.
"Mr. Arc, since you have entered my class, you have exceptional student, your desire to learn the history of this world is INSPIRING! Truly Inspiring!"
"...Thank you?-"
"HOWEVER! I have noticed that some of things you are asking are rather...odd, and then there is the score on the evaluation I gave on the first day."
Lucifer felt sweat running down the back of neck. Did he know? He was a history scholar, did some ancient text mention his father, and by extension him?
"You ask questions about subjects that should be common knowledge to someone your age, and you respond with confusion when someone mentions a historical date, or holiday, that are universally celebrated on Remnant."
Lucifer was definitely panicking at this point, did the old coffee junkie know?
"So Mr. Arc, I must ask you...Were you denied an education at a young age?"
Lucifer stared at the history professor, while Oobleck gave him a look of sympathy.
"Mr. Arc, I'm not asking you to reveal any information you are not comfortable sharing, bu-"
Lucifer finally got what the Doctor was implying and immediately felt 10 pounds lighter
"No Dr. Oobleck, I was taught, they just….didn't teach me what you do…"
Dr. Oobleck immediately straightened up, and began zipping around the classroom, grabbing various books, talking the whole while.
"AH HA! Selective teaching, terrible, just terrible, if we teach our children only our version of the events, what will they truly learn? I must say Mr. Arc I suspected something like this from how eager you were to learn!"
He finished speaking, and grabbed the last book, he apparently, wanted, then zoomed back to Lucifer and deposited the large stack of books into his arms, and was back behind his desk.
"There we are, these books should help you 'catch up' if you will, you may return them when you are finished with them, and don't worried, this won't be graded."
Lucifer gaped at the strange man in front of him over the large stack of books he was currently struggling to hold.
"You may go Mr. Arc."
"What? R-right, Dr. Oobleck...Thank You."
"It was no trouble, now off to your dorm, lest you forget the homework I assigned today."
Lucifer Smiled as he left the classroom, he bumped into Pyrrha who took half his books and helped him carry them the dorm room. Pyrrha had a rather troubled look on her face, and she suddenly turned to him.
"Jaune...We need to talk."
After they deposited the books in their dorm room, Pyrrha brought him to the roof of the dorm building, she paused for a moment and seemed to steel herself for an instant, before turning to Lucifer
"Jaune I know that you've been going through alot lately, and your still not the strongest of fighters, so… I want to help you!"
"...What?"
"We can train up here after class, where no one can bother us!"
Lucifer sighed, and pinched his brow in frustration, this was exactly what he needed right now.
"Look...Pyrrha, it's not that I don't appreciate this but-
Pyrrha interrupted him
"Then train with me! Please, I want to help you Jaune, You're my friend!"
"Pyrrha look I...I don't need help, I'm perfectly capable of handling myself."
Pyrrha try reaching for him, but he stepped back, a look of hurt briefly flashed on her face, then she resumed talking
"Jaune...I know something happened to you, and it has something to do with this 'Hell' I just want to help you, I care about you, I… you're the first real friend I've ever had!"
Lucifer snapped, all the anger he had blocking since he came to Beacon rushed to the surface, HOW DARE SHE SPEAK HIM WITH PITY, HOW DARE SHE TALK OF HELL AS THOUGH SHE UNDERSTOOD IT?!
"You think you're my FRIEND?! YOU KNOW NOTHING OF ME PYRRHA NIKOS!"
There was silence for a few moments then it was broken by a small sniffle. Lucifer looked on in horror, as tears began leaking out of the corners of Pyrrha's eyes.
"I-if that's h-how you f-feel."
She shoved passed him as the tears fell more readily and she ran for the exit.
"PYRRHA! I didn't mean it! I'm Sorry!"
The door slammed behind her.
"I'm sorry…"
It had been a few days since the disastrous confrontation on the roof, and Lucifer hadn't been in his dorm room since. He had tried to apologize the next morning, but the sight of a crying Pyrrha being comforted by Team RWBY, and the death glare that Yang gave him let him know he wasn't welcome. He had been crashing in an empty dorm, and trying to find a way out of this. When he had felt the strange weight on his chest, and the swirling in his stomach, it took him awhile to realize it was guilt. He hadn't felt guilt since...before he had fallen. At the moment, Lucifer was standing in front of his dorm room listening to his teammates talk about him. At the moment Nora was speaking
"Do you think he's coming back?"
It was Ren who responded
"I sure he will Nora, he just needs...space."
"But we have that field trip tomorrow! What if he misses it?"
Pyrrha responded this time, and with unmistakable anger in her voice
"Don't worry, I'm sure are leader knows exactly what he's doing."
"Mmmm...I guess so."
Sighing, Lucifer hung his head, and closed the door.
"Hi Jaune!"
"JESUS!"
Lucifer whirled around and faced Ruby Rose who stood in the hall in her pajamas and had a confused look on her face.
"No, It's me, Ruby. Did you lock yourself out again?"
Lucifer's eyes narrowed.
"That happened one time!" (Stupid Mortal Technology!)
"So...Where have you been lately?"
"Oh...y'know...around."
"Pyrrha's pretty upset."
Lucifer sighed in defeat and sank to the ground. He placed his head in his hands, after a moment Ruby joined him.
"How was she, after...y'know."
Ruby drew her legs up and looked at the ground.
"She was pretty bad, Weiss ended up singing her to sleep, after she told us what happened, Yang wanted to murder you."
Lucifer chuckled at that.
"Yeah...Yeah, I got that message."
His head thunked against the wall.
"I'm such a failure."
"Nope!"
"...Nope?"
"Nope! You're a leader now Jaune! You don't get to be a failure"
Lucifer chuckled bitterly at that.
"I've always been a leader Ruby, but bad things happen to those I lead."
"Like what?"
"Oh Y'know...eternal damnation, endless torture, no hope of freedom or death."
"Jaune...Whatever you did before doesn't matter, what matters is that you're here now, and you have a team that needs you, you have to put them before yourself. Your team needs a good leader Jaune, I think that can be you."
Lucifer abruptly shot to his feet,
"But It's not me Ruby! I can't be that! Ruby...I'm a bad person, I've...I've hurt a lot of people! I'm... I'm the De-"
He was cut off as Ruby hugged him tightly.
"We know Jaune."
Lucifer's Heart stopped.
"We knew that something bad had happened to you, Pyrrha told us what you said, And if you ever want to talk about it, we'll be here for you."
Lucifer's heart restarted, and he slowly returned the hug.
"Y'know, you remind me of my little sister."
"Really? What's her name?"
"Azrael."
"That's a weird name."
"Heh...Yeah, I guess it is."
"Yes, students, the forest of Forever Fall is indeed beautiful. But we are not here to sightsee. Professor Peach has asked all of you to collect samples from the trees deep inside this forest, and I'm here to make sure none of you die while doing so."
Lucifer gazed in awe at the trees surrounding him, they were beautiful. The color of the leaves were astonishing, and forest itself was breathtaking. Truly the beauty of this world far outmatched anything on Earth.
"Each of you is to gather one jar's worth of red sap. However, this forest is full of the creatures of Grimm, so be sure to stay by your teammates. We will rendezvous back here at 4 o'clock. Have fun!"
As the class began to split into teams Lucifer glanced at his team for a moment, Nora was tugging on Ren's arm, desperately trying to get into the forest, Ren was speaking to Nora trying to calm her down. Pyrrha was staring around the looking...for him. Lucifer took a half step toward her, then turned, and walked into the forest.
Lucifer had already filled about 3 jars, he planned to fill up extra jars, and sneak them into Beacon as some form of apology. He knew that it didn't begin to make up for what he said, but it was a start. As he moved further into the forest, his attention was caught by Team CRDL, who was crouched in the bushes and appeared to be staring at something, he started to move on until he heard what they were saying.
"That's the girl, Red-haired-know-it-all, thinks she so smart. Alright, we spent all night gathering these Rapier Wasps, and now we're gonna put them to work."
At that moment Lucifer saw exactly what they were staring at, his partner, Pyrrha Nikos. HOW DARE HE!? HE WOULD INCINCERATE HIM FOR THIS, HE WOULD LET MAZIKEEN KEEP HIM AS A PERSONAL PET! HE WOULD-HE would...No. That's not who he was, not anymore. But he still had to to do something, his eyes cast around until they landed on the jar in his hand. Lucifer threw the Jar straight at Cardin and it shattered against the back of Cardin's head, his Aura protected him from the blow, but it didn't stop the sticky sap from trailing down the back of his neck. Team CRDL whirled around, and Cardin had a very pissed off look on his face, he stomped forward, his fist raised.
"Now you've done it Jauney-Boy."
His fist flew forward and slammed into Lucifer's face.
Lucifer hit the ground hard, he felt tears form in his eyes from the pain in his cheek
"Common Lucy! Is that the best you can do?"
Lucifer looked up, and tried to wipe his tears away, as he glared at the blonde girl who looked to be somewhere between 10 and 12 standing over him.
"I told you to stop calling me that Michael!"
The Archangel smirked as she flexed her wings lightly, and placed her hands on her hips.
"Make me. Lucy~"
Lucifer screamed in rage as he tackled his sister to the ground, and started flailing, trying to hit her, eventually his fist connected with her body, and he heard her gasp in pain, then her knee smashed into his stomach and flung him off.
"You little shit! YOU PUNCHED ME IN THE TIT!"
Lucifer gasped lightly and spat on the ground.
"Like there's anything to hit."
"WHY YOU LITTLE-"
"ENOUGH!"
Michael's threats were interpreted as a teenage girl with silver wings touched down between them and picked them both up by the scruffs of their necks.
"How many times has Mom told you both to stop fighting?!"
Michael glared at the woman holding her, and started trying to kick her in a vain attempt to make her drop her
"Let me go Amenadiel! This is none of your business!"
The Firstborn glared at her little sister, who upon seeing the look she was getting, shut up. After a few moments Amenadiel dropped her siblings to the ground and sat down between them.
"Alright, Lucifer, why were you picking a fight with Michael This time?"
"She wouldn't stop calling me Lucy!"
"Only because you wouldn't stop bugging me!"
"Because you stole Satan!"
Amenadiel gave Lucifer a confused look,
"What's a 'Satan'"
Michael answered before Lucifer could,
"It's his stupid pet snake, you know, that one he found in the garden?! And I only took it because you took my doll!"
"Well I only did that because-because…"
Lucifer suddenly stopped speaking and looked at the ground.
"Lucifer? Why did you take Michael's doll?" Amenadiel prompted him.
Lucifer answered in a very small voice.
"I just wanted you to play with me."
There was silence in the courtyard, then Michael stood up abruptly, she quickly rubbed her eyes, trying to hide the fact that she was crying.
"I put your stupid snake in that tree in Dad's garden."
Then she ran off before anyone could respond.
Amenadiel sighed and smiled slightly.
"Well at least that's over."
She turned to her little brother, only for her eyes to widen slightly as she saw that Lucifer was crying.
"Hey, hey, it's ok, what's wrong little Morning Star?"
Lucifer looked up at his sister and she felt her heart hurt a little at the pain in his eyes.
"W-why does Michael hate me?"
Amenadiel pulled her little brother onto her lap and placed a kiss on his forehead.
"Michael doesn't hate you little brother, I think...I think she's jealous."
"Why?"
"Well...Because your the Lightbringer."
"Why is she jealous of that?"
"Well, being the Lightbringer means your going to- you'll understand when your older."
"Well then I wish I wasn't the Lightbringer then, I wish I wasn't the only Son! I wish-"
Amenadiel cut off her little brother by pulling him into a tight hug.
"Don't say that Lucifer. Don't ever hate what you are. Y'know why?"
Lucifer sniffled and look up at his sister.
"Why?"
"Because no matter what you are Little Brother, I will always love you. Ok?"
Lucifer smiled as he wiped the last of his tears away.
"Ok."
Cardin picked him by the collar and punched him in the face again.
"Y'know, that wasn't very smart Jauney-Boy, I'm gonna send you back to mommy in teeny tiny pieces."
Lucifer laughed at that.
"I don't care what you do to me…"
His face suddenly hardened.
"But you won't touch her."
Cardin looked shocked for a moment. Before his face turned into sneer
"What? You think talk like that makes you tough? You think you're a big strong man now?"
Lucifer started chuckling, then he started laughing, then the laughter turned maniacal.
'I'm sorry Amenadiel I know what I promised, but I do hate what I am.'
Enraged by Lucifer's laughter, Cardin threw his fist forward again, only for it to be stopped short by Lucifer's palm.
"Cardin..I'm so much more than a man."
Lucifer started twisting Cardin fist forcing him to drop him. Then he kept twisting, forcing Cardin to his knees.
"I've pretended to be something I'm not for so long now. No more."
Cardin's expression changed from anger to fear as Lucifer's eyes started glowing, and heat started radiating off him.
"Wha-what are you!?"
Lucifer ginned as he leaned over the trembling bully
"Punishment."
With a slow rasp, Lucifer drew his sword, and the blade ignited, as he raised it above his head.
"Guilty."
Just before Lucifer brought the sword down, he was interrupted by a loud roar, as the biggest Ursa he'd ever seen erupted out the forest and roared in challenge.
The rest of CRDL took off in terror at the site of that leaving the Devil and the bully alone.
Pyrrha Nikos was upset. As she kneeled to collect sap from the tree, her mind turned once again to her leader, and what he was hiding. She remembered the panic on his face before he took off after mentioning something called 'Hell.' What was it? Based on what Jaune had said she assumed it was a place, but she had typed it into one Beacon's computers she had gotten 0 results. Then there was that disastrous conversation on the roof, that had hurt. She knew that Jaune hadn't meant it, the the pain was still there. Her musing were interrupted as a loud roar echoed throughout the forest. Ruby raised her head and glanced around.
"Did you hear that?"
Suddenly 3 members of team CRDL burst into the clearing in a panic, one screaming;
"URSA! URSA!"
He ended smashing right into Yang, who was completely unfazed, and picked him up.
"What? Where!"
"Back there! It got Cardin!"
Pyrrha was suddenly on her feet looking around the clearing frantically
"Where's Jaune!"
Ruby unfurled Crescent Rose and turned to Yang and Blake
"Yang! You and Blake, go get Professor Goodwitch!"
The Duo nodded and took off, Pyrrha turned to Nora and Ren
"You two, go with them! There could be more!"
She took off toward the roars, Ruby and Weiss close behind her,
Please let him be alright, please, please ple-
The three burst into a clearing and froze. The entire clearing was covered in scorch marks and in center was the Ursa. It was currently missing an arm, and it's body was covered in cuts.
"What the-" Weiss exclaimed before she was interrupted by the Ursa roaring in pain as a figure with blonde hair slashed it across the stomach with a sword that was on fire. They watched in awe as Jaune Arc, The Adorkable Idiot, proceeded to slice the Ursa's legs off before burying his sword into its head with roar. After a moment, the Ursa's body started to fade away. Jaune sheathed his sword, he then paused, smirked, turned and saw them.
"Oh Shit."
His voice jogged her out of her shock and she started walking toward Jaune, who looked uncomfortable. She stopped right in front him.
"Look..Pyrrha, I didn't mean-I'm Sorry."
She pulled him into a tight hug.
"It's alright, I'm just glad your ok."
Smiling Jaune returned the hug. The silence was broken by the high pitched voice of Ruby Rose.
"THAT WAS SO COOL! HOW WAS YOUR SWORD ON FIRE?! WAS THAT YOUR SEMBLANCE?! That was amazing!"
Jaune and Pyrrha stared at the girl for a minute before throwing back their heads and laughing.
"Yeah, I guess that is my Semblance."
Ruby's eyes sparkled
"So cool."
The hyperactive girl was interrupted by the voice of Weiss Schnee.
"Well, as impressive as that was, I suggest we head back before more Grimm arrive."
Jaune started
"I concur."
He started walking forward but was stopped by Pyrrha.
"Hey Jaune, you remember that day in history? What was that thing you called Cardin?"
"That's what you want to ask me?"
"It's been bugging for the last few days."
"It's Latin, it means 'Goat Fucker.'"
The look of shock on Pyrrha's face had Lucifer laughing all the way back to the Bullhead.
Somewhere in Vale:
The young faunus girl screamed as the heated knife plunged into her body, she writhed, and twisted, and then lay still. The red robed figure withdrew the knife and turned.
"It is done."
Out of the shadows more robed figures emerged. At their head was a tall figure who's hood was pointed as a sign of rank. Slowly he raised his arms to the sky.
"Hear us great one! We offer this to you as a sign of our devotion to you! Hail Satan!"
His cry was soon echoed.
"HAIL SATAN!"
I hope everyone enjoyed the first chapter, parts of it felt a little forced as I read through it, but the response to the preview was mostly positive. As one "kind" reviewer pointed out, There are some similarities between this story and Arc Of The Fallen by Porterhawk. But I assure you, the only true similarity is the Concept: Jaune is Lucifer. His story draws inspiration from actual Christian Mythology, While my inspiration will come primarily from the Netflix Show, and my own interpretation of the christian mythos. A warning, I'm an Atheist, and I'm very creative, so a lot of the content in this WILL NOT match the versions in the Bible, or the versions from the mouths of the Saints. So, DO NOT review just to go "Um, Actually, according to the 52nd verse of…" Just enjoy the story. See you all next time~
The Hand Of Fate