Ok for those that were hoping on a new chapter I'm sorry but it´s not :C

Today (2020-05-17) I finally had time to sit down and do a few corrections to this chapter (originally posted on 2020-04-06). The reason for this was a very helpful comment by Tenjo: I decided to try it since I remember being intrigued by the first chapter back when it was first posted... but the dialogue is raping my mind. Some authors lose readers because they don't start a new paragraph to show someone else is talking, but at least they SAY who said something. You just have dialogue after dialogue with no real indication of who is speaking... the worst part is that you actually did it properly in the first chapter, so there's no excuse.

And I will admit that it was a bit of a blow to the stomach when I first read it but when I went back and checked… he/she was correct. So I went back and changed it hopefully it is better now peace!

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AN: HEY PEOPLE! sorry I took so long to post another chapter but I have been really busy completing my last year of Highschool, and then settling into a work routine, but now I am back and I should be able to post more chapters now.

Thanks for all the great reviews that I have gotten this last YEAR omg it was so long ago I posted, and all the favs and follows my phone would not shut up for the first few WEEKS of me posting the first chapter, spamming me with all the notifications from FFN :D it makes me happy that so many enjoy my story!

Now I said that I was going to take down the story and rewrite the first chapter completely when I had time but I have decided against that. when this chapter is up, I will have just re-dune and tweaked the first chapter a bit, specifically the part with Sirius takes harry, as pointed out to me by Jslee102: Okay, I think it was cute, but the reasoning that Sirius used to kidnap seemed vacuous at best. They were doting on the baby of the family that think just escaped death... Hell, considering that Voldemort left them alive to get to Charlie.

Yes I know it was rushed but I will be fixing it in this Chapter

Ok since it seems it can get confusing with the different types of text her is the explanation:

Stupefy: explaining things often thoughts of information, not whole sentences

"Stupefy": Talking, anything inside " " a person is saying out loud

Stupefy: This is coherent thoughts, sentences thought in the mind of the person

so without further ado, I give you….

Chapter 2

Sirius pow: Halloween 1981

Sirius Black was running for his life, well not his in particular, but those of his best friends and his godson. Bursting through what remains of the Potters front door shouting "JAMES! LILLY ARE YOU OK!?".

Please be alive please be alive please be alive, the phrase kept running at the forefront of his mind until he saw what he was looking for, "JAMES!"

He is alive thank the goddess...

"enervate" with that oh so magical word Sirius brother in all but blood woke up "Padfoot? Pads what are you doi- LILLY! Is Lilly ok!?" James said in a blind panic "I don't 'know Prongs I just found you" Sirius said in a worried tone, I and James ran up to the nursery and saw Lilly against the wall "LILLY!" screamed James as he rushed to her side and used enervate "James? What happen- The BOYS! Where are they!?"

Something is wrong… there minds… they don't feel the same anymore...

Dumbledore walks into the room and the conversation they are having just passes above my head since I am too focused on Harry
"James Lilly, I am glad that you are alive, what happened?" "Truly? Where is he, what happened to him?" "We don't know our focus was on the boys." "The boys! How are the boys?" "Charlie is bleeding on his hand headmaster." "Let me take a look."

After concluding that Harry is mostly fine I focus on my senses outward to see if any harmful magic is still around when I notice something about James and Lilly.

Their Magic… it's changing, no… it's being influenced by the dark magic in the air!

"It looks like little Charlie defeated Voldemort, look he was marked as his equal! I pronounce you, Charles Richard Potter, The boy who lived!"

As those words were said the dark magic quickly attached itself deep in Lilly and James aura and mind.

NOO! A DARK ENCHANTMENT! THEIR MINDS HAVE BEEN ALTERED!

Now to explain Sirius has a few secret talents of the black family, namely precognition and aura sensing. Precognition is the ability to see the future, to a certain extent. Unlike a seer who sees definite paths that need to happen for time to move forward, a precog can only see one path that the future can take with all the consequences of that path being in the vision.

Aura sensing is the ability to "sense" the aura of a person, thus knowing their intentions towards you or those around you. A side effect of this is that the possessor of the ability is very sensitive to changes in people's character or if something drastic happens to them.

What just happened to Sirius is a combination of the two, he sensed something happening with James and Lily, something was imposing on there aura molding and changing it. Then a vision struck him from his precog magic, and he did not like what he saw, the current James and Lily fawning over baby charlie while completely ignoring a bleeding Harry on the floor, an older neglected Harry watching from the dark corner of a room while a party was going on around him, Charlie`s fifth birthday party. James and Lily standing in the middle of the room happily talking and laughing with the other guests praising "the defeater of the dark lord, the boy-who-lived, there one son".

He could not stand it, to watch the potential future of Harry, his godson, the boy he considered his own. In the last ray of hope that his vision was wrong, he turned to his friends and saw what he had feared, the exact scene from his vision.

No...please, please! what can I do to stop this!

Pleading to someone or something to give him an answer to his problem he heard a female voice whisper in the back of his mind.

Go… take him with you and go away

Take Harry and go!? Could he really do that? To raise him as his own?

With a final glance to his friends, he decided.

Yes…... I could, and I will do a dam good job at it too.

END CHAPTER TWO

OK, guys, this is chapter two! after a whole year of waiting, I am finally back in the match.

this chapter is more of chapter 1.5 of the story, explaining the reason for Sirius taking Harry away and hopefully lessening the confusion a little bit.

I just want you guys reading this to know that it makes my day whenever I see a popup in my phone that says "(name) just followed/favorited your story" or "(name) has posted a review on your story". so thanks you all gave me back my motivation to start writing again

CA next time