Hello everyone. This is my first story and I'm very excited. The first important thing to know is, English isn't my main language so I hope it isn't that bad. I'm also not that smart like Lisa is, I try my best in her dialogues but I don't think it would be as good as I wish. So every help is welcome. And the second important thing is that I have changed the age of all from Lily to Lincoln. So with this, Lincoln is now 12, Lucy 11, Lana and Lola 10, Lisa 9 and Lily 8. That's so far the only change I made. So with nothing more to say here is the first chapter. Hope you all will enjoy it.
Disclaimer: The Loud House belongs to Nickelodeon.
Chapter 1
Lift the curtains for the Louds
It was a nice and sunny day at Royal Woods and a loud day at 1216 Franklin Avenue, the home of the Loud family. It was a day like every other day.
In the backyard was Lynn, the brunette athlete of the family. Dressed in her typical red and white jersey with a red 1 on it, red and white track shorts, white knee-high socks with red stripes, and black cleats. Sweat runs down her freckled face. Her brown ponytail is flipping right and left while she plays every single sport, that contains a ball, at the same time. However, she managed this without losing track of all the balls.
Watching this from his window was the old neighbor Bud Grouse. He re-aligns his glasses to make sure he sees correctly. "Nice playing there, Loud. But watch out for where all those balls go," he said with the attempt to sound threatening.
"Yeah, yeah, I know. My lawn, my property!" she mockingly returned in an interpretation of Mr. Grouse, followed by a light chuckle.
On the side was Lana. The blond tomboy sitting in the mud and cheering her big sister up as loud as she could and beaming a bright, happy, and toothy smile with a big gap where two of her upper incisors should be. Since she was four she liked to wear dark blue overalls. Under it a green t-shirt and her trademark, a red baseball cap that she wears always backward. Under her cap looks two downward pigtails and right on the cap sitting Hops, her pet frog.
There were only two things that drowned their noise. The first was an explosion followed by an "I'm fine!" from Lisa the small genius. Green smoke came out of her window, which made it clear, that one of her chemical experiments went wrong. Again.
The other loud noise comes from Luna. The purple t-shirt with a white skull on it, a lavender plaid skirt, a white belt, and high, purple boots showed everyone what a rebel she is. To complete her punk look she also wears a black choker, three bracelets on each wrist, and on her ears were paperclip earrings. Like her younger sister Lynn and their only brother Lincoln, is her face decorated with freckles. The brunette with the pixie cut is shredding like crazy, on her ax to find the right melody for the lyrics that have popped up in her head just minutes ago. She was so into it, that she completely forgot that she just could write the lyrics down, so she couldn't forget them.
More surprising was that the rest of the sisters were quieter.
Leni, the all happy-go-lucky girl with the pale-blonde hair and her typical white sunglasses, which was resting on her head, worked in her room on her sewing machine. This time she didn't make a cute dress, like her favorite seafoam green dress with white frills. Instead, she was working on a nice orange shirt for her little brother Lincoln. She has read that those days would be the hottest ever and thought it would be good to have cool, thin clothes if he has to go outside. Too bad that it was from an old newspaper from last year. Instead, it should be a nice summer this year.
In the attic is Lucy, surrounded by Fang and her bat friends. Besides her a glass tomato juice or blood, as she references to it. Like the typical goth she is, she wears a black dress, black and white striped arm sleeves, and stockings. She was the sister with the, in her family, unique hair color black. Also, her hair was so long that it conceals her eyes. Since she avoids the sun she has very pale skin. She was writing one dark and spooky poem after another. She really has a run this time, so better not miss the opportunity.
Lola was in her room arranging a tea party with her stuffed animals, gossiping about her sisters, Lincoln, and the girls from the last beauty pageant she had won. As to be expected from Lola Loud. As Lana's twin, they looked physically identical. Even the gap in her teeth was the same. But as similar as both can look alike, no one in the family can be more of an opposite of each other than those two. Where Lana love to get dirty and didn't care about things that are typical girl things, Lola was the personification of girly. Dressed in a long pink gown, long pink gloves, and pink high heels. Rounding everything up with a white pearl necklace around her neck, white earrings, and a tiara on her long blond hair. Like her twin, she hadn't changed her style since she was four. But now the gown and the gloves weren't too big for her anymore. Instead, it fits her perfectly.
Lily was in her room that she shared with Lisa and lays on her bed, reading a comic to relax. The little, blond girl wearing her typical outfit, a cute top in her favorite-color lavender with black sleeves and on her lower half a nice skirt in the same color. Next to her on the bed, was some magazines about photography and architecture.
It was her big hobby to capture the beauty of the world around her in pictures. Also, seeing the house where she spent her whole life falling apart here and there, and keeping it together only thanks to Lana's craftsmanship and Lisa's technological inventions, made her want to become an architect. She wanted to build a big house for her family, where everyone has their own room and even more for their hobbies.
Everyone chuckled about it because such a house big would be called a mansion or even a palace. But no one wanted to correct her because everyone thought it was too cute.
Lily was used to all the explosions and strange experiments, so it was easy for her to read even after this big boom, all the smoke, and the loud mumbling from her sister which tried to find where she had made the mistake.
Lisa goes up and down and looks at her chalkboard with all the calculations. Her short-shaggy-brown hair, which is actually a wig, looked messy as always. Thanks to an experiment she had lost all of her hair and teeth, so she has to wear a wig and dentures. On her nose resting her glasses, without she would be blind as a mole. She wears a green turtleneck sweater and pink pants. As the young and small genius of the family, she didn't care about how she looked. At least it wasn't one of her higher priorities.
In the room of the parents was Rita, the mother. She wears a pink buttoned shirt with a white collar and cuffs, and purple pants. Half of her daughters had their blond hair color from her. She was sitting on the bed and tried to write a book. Her actually job was a dental assistant in the dental practice of Dr. Feinstein, but her dream is to become a novelist.
So the only Louds that wasn't home at this time was Lori, Luan, Lincoln, and the father of the Louds.
The patriarch of the family was obviously at work. Lynn Loud Sr. The man with the curly brown hair that is thinning on the top, the light green checkered shirt with a sea green sweater over it, the brown slacks and shoes was at his job as a chef in the restaurant called Aloha Comrade.
Luan's little comedy business 'Funny Business' was booked for a birthday party, where she did what she was always best at. Making everyone on the party laughing out loud about her puns and acts. For that, she is dressed as a clown and rides a unicycle while she is juggling five water balloons which in the end fall one after another right on her head. Her typical attire is a white sleeveless shirt, a yellow skirt with a checkerboard pattern, yellow socks with a line pattern that are worn all the way up, and brown shoes. She also wears three pink flowers, which serve as gag squirt-flowers. One is on her shirt and one on each shoe. She also has light brown hair that is tied to a ponytail. Also, she has a similarity with her brother. She has prominent buck teeth. Just her have braces on it.
Lori, the oldest of the Loud children was on a date with her boyfriend Bobby or Boo-Boo Bear how she calls him. He was coming extra after Royal Woods to spend time with her. It was always the same with those two lovebirds. Looking deep into each other's eyes, saying how much they love each other, and so on. Like most of her sisters, she also was blond. Her choice of clothes is a light blue tank top, brown cargo shorts, and blue slip-on shoes.
Also Lincoln was out to spend some time with someone special. But not for long. The front door swings wide open. And with the same force, Lincoln used to open the door he closed it behind him. After this the young boy with the unusual hair color of white runs right into his room, open and closed his door as loud as the front door.
Even if he should meet a very particular girl, he was wearing his typical clothes. An orange polo shirt, blue jeans, and white sports shoes with red stripes. Another noticeable thing about him, aside from his hair color, was that he has chipped his buck teeth.
The loud sound of the doors managed to stop all the shenanigans. Even Luna had heard it and stands now in the hall and was looking straight to Lincoln's door. As she walked past the stairs, Lynn and Lana were standing at the lower end. Also, all the other sisters were now looking out of their rooms, except for Lucy, who was peeking from the attic staircase.
"What was that?" asks the young goth in her monotone voice.
"Given that my ability to perceive resonances, even after I was confronted with the consequences of my last experiment, still operate accurately. I would say our only brother unit has returned in a very negative condition," Lisa explained with her typical deadpan demeanor and lisp.
"What?" said all sisters in unison and looking at Lisa with absolute confusion on their faces.
Lisa took her glasses and massaging her temples. "Neanderthals. What I was saying was that Lincoln had come home in an upset state."
"Oooohhhh," it came from the sisters in unison again.
"Why didn't you say that in the first place?" asked Lynn, who had just come up the stairs with Lana. Lisa's only reaction was to roll her eyes.
Lisa was going back in her room, but all the others stand there, wanting to find out what it was that has made Lincoln so angry. But before all the sisters could barge in and ask all mixed up, Luna was stopping them.
"Hold your horses, dudettes," she said in her British accent. "Only one of us should go in and find out what is wrong."
All the sisters nodded in agreement and going to Luna's room. They were drawing straws to determine who was to go. In the end, Luna won and was going to Lincoln's room. Her luck that no one had noticed that this was some trick straws from Luan."Thanks that you have shown me this, sis."
She knocked at his door. "Dude, are you all right?" No response from the other side but she could hear sobbing. "Lincoln, bro. I come in, okay?" Again, no response, but to her luck had for some time ago all agreed to that, that in situations like this only a clear no would show that they don't want to let the others in. So, she opened the door to go into his room and closed the door behind her again.
Lincoln was lying on his bed, his face buried in his pillow and tried as hard as he could to not cry in front of Luna. Seeing this broke her heart and made her angry. He shouldn't think just because he is a boy that no one should see him crying. She sat down on his bed, next to him and was patiently waiting for him to calm down, stroking soft his hair and back.
After fifteen to thirty minutes, he managed to collect himself and facing his sister Luna. She was looking him straight in the eyes.
"Do you want to talk about it?" she asks with a soft and calming voice.
"It is properly nothing," Lincoln said with a sad expression on his face.
Luna raised an eyebrow, "Well, that doesn't have looked and sounded like nothing. Lincoln, you know you can talk with us."
He took a deep breath and then faced Luna again. "I was at the park with Ronnie Anne."
The idea for Lily's design came from a fan art from Aleuz91-art on DA.
Stay tuned and have a great day.