Thank you all so very much on the reviews of this short story. This was by no means meant to be a masterpiece, as it was actually a small (rather mediocre, I will admit) test piece to see how well I would be able to handle a much longer, slow-burn Jack and Sally story. Your reviews have been taken into great consideration and appreciation, and I now can say I feel comfortable enough to go forward with one in the near future! I had never written anything rated M in the past, but I can promise that I will make the next, long adventure very classy and sensible in all regards. The next story will be completely detached from this one, and shall focus on Jack and Sally coping with their new relationship after the movie. I should make it know that it'll start out rated T, of course, then gradually move to M. Look forward to it!