Hey everyone, I'm VickyT36. I'm a fan of Criminal Minds, so I thought I'd try out this idea on the archive. I hope you all, enjoy!

Act 1

Milwaukee, Wisconsin

At a middle school, a 14-year-old white girl with mid-length brown hair wearing a neon blue t-shirt, green pants, and white shoes was leaving school with her two friends.

"Can you believe that history test?" asked one girl.

"I know, it was so hard. I mean it could've at least had some multiple choice questions." said another.

"Oh come on, it's wasn't that hard if you studied." the girl with the brown hair replied.

"Easy for you to say Lisa, you're a studying machine."

"I just know when to study. But maybe if we do a study group, you'll do better on the next test. I'll see you guys later." Lisa told them, going down another street.

"See you tomorrow, Lis."

"Bye, Lisa."

As Lisa walked down the street, a dark green car followed her. The car ride up to her, and the window rolled down.

"Excuse me, miss, do you where I can find highway 36?" A man asked her.

Lisa just stared at him, she knew she shouldn't be speaking to a man that age, so she just walked on.

But the man slowly got out of his car, and quietly followed her. He pulled out a washcloth, ran up behind her, and covered her nose and mouth with it! Lisa struggled to get away, but then her body went limp, and she fell unconscious.

He picked her up, leaving her backpack on the sidewalk. He shoved her into the trunk of his, car bound her wrists, then closed the door. Then got back into his car, and drove away.


Back at Quantico, Virginia the case file had just landed on JJ's desk. She knew immediately that this was a case they had to take. Hotch gatherer everyone in the conference room.

"All right everyone we have an abducted minor case in Milwaukee." Said JJ, as she turned on the screen, to show a picture of Lisa.

"A couple hours ago, 14-year-old Lisa Parks was abducted on her home from school." Informed Hotch.

"How does someone kidnap someone in the middle of broad daylight?" Asked Rossi.

"Obviously the unsub knew exactly when she'd be alone." Reid pointed out.

"And he must've watched her for a while, known her schedule." Added Morgan.

"Has her family received any ransom call?" Asked Prentiss.

"So far there haven't been any calls, emails, or letters about a ransom." Garcia told them.

"Wheels up in twenty. Most abducted minors are killed within 24." Said Hotch.

"And she's already been missing for two hours." Said JJ. And they all walked out of the conference room.


Meanwhile Lisa had just regained consciousness, she was still bound, in saw in a dark room with just a mattress, and her shoes had been taken.

"Hello, is anyone there?" She got up, and slowly walked over to a door.

She tried opening it, but it was locked. Lisa just stood there with a confused and scared expression. Where was she, how'd she get there, and who had her?

That's chapter 1, plz review