Hello! this is my first fanfiction ever so i am really excited to write something. Now I'd like to you know that i don't speak or write english much so this will be also learning course for me, also i am not good with . , ! ? marks (what ever those are called) so many sentences will be connected or miss pronounced and i am sorry for that, but i try my best and would kindly ask people to mark those for me so i can fix them. Also if someone (for some odd reason) does see potential in my story and wants to be my beta i would be forever grateful for that. But what if we get to story now and you can do to story whatever you like to this story.
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Death god
Konoha
It is dark night time in mostly peaceful village, well as far peaceful goes in village full of trained assassins with power to kill millions of people in hours. We can hear lot of shouting coming from more poor region of village. We see 13 old blond boy wearing orange clothes standing if barely, defending girl with long silky black hair and pale skin. She did wear pink kimono which had dark blue flowers in it. She was crying for her just about mouth ago met person who quickly become her best friend. She just watched him to get back on his feet and shouted to people front of them.
"Why! Why are you guys attacking us! We did nothing to you or village, Hell i am ready to go up against whole world if it means to protect this village!" Blond boy shouted top of his lungs.
"If you are truly want to die for village you demon come here so we can end your too long life!" shouted one angry Chuunin which got lot of nods and smirks from other ninjas and villagers.
Naruto watched them shocked for sometime then he asked with weak voice "D Do you leave Haku alone if i let you have your fun?" This got girl now named Haku to cry more with eyes plates wide.
One villager smirked at that and said "Of course not we will rape her right front of you and kill her while you watch!" Everyone got evil smirks on their faces, hell even woman were smirking at that.
Naruto could not believe this, this was just too much for him and took step back and felt tears coming from his eyes then he looked at Haku and smiled little. It was sad smile and full of desire to protect. Haku looked him in to eyes and that look told all there was to know.
He was ready to die for her happiness.
Before anyone could react Naruto started to laugh, it was dark, evil, only with one emotion.
Hate.
Blond looked with blood red eyes with slitted pupils villagers and shinobi with all hatred he could. "You may do anything you want to me, but Haku, Haku is first person outside village to accept me even if i am jinchuriki of kyuubi, She gave me what i always wanted." Naruto closed his eyes took deep breath and then opened his eyes and looked at Haku. "Love"
Love that simple but powerful word played in Hakus head and she could not stop small smile coming to her face as she started to rise her feet and she started to leaking out her chakra. "I am not going to let you die Naruto kun." She said with sweet and loving voice but Naruto just shook his head "sorry haku but this is only way to save you and i care more about you than anyone in this village" said Naruto looking at her with sad smile.
Haku could not understand what he meant with that she looked at villagers and shinobi who had look of terror in their eyes but some were starting to get out of their shock and did draw their kunais out. Haku steeled herself and took out some senbou needels out of her pocket and put them between her fingers.
But that all stopped when Naruto collapsed to ground Haku quickly run to him and checked for any wounds but could not find any new one. She then was thrown back by huge wave of chakra to wall which cracked little bit. Her vision was blurry, must have hit her head to wall she tried to look for Naruto but could only see huge amount of red chakra around her. She was terrified, she knew Naruto's jinchuriki status and she hoped Naruto knew what he was doing other wise he might kill himself.
Sadly for haku she started to loose her consciousness and soon she only did see darkness.
Narutos mindscape
Naruto watched tall nine tale fox with eyes with two emotions
Sadness and Hatred
Fox for lag of better word was worried. Fox had study seal for 'its' boredom to know what it did and that is reason why he was worried. 'Its' jailer could technically kill 'it'. Well lock his consciousness to shinigami's stomach without offering his soul and Fox would never reform after 'its' host would die.
Naruto looked at fox then asked. "What are you ready to do for full freedom?"
Fox looked boy as if he had just found a way to go back in time and told him he was 'its' child. "W what?" asked fox with stutter
"Are you ready to do what i say to get not only away from seal but from my body?" asked blond as if it was simplest thing in the world.
"You are aware you die if you let me go?" asked fox cursing 'it' self for giving that idea for 'its' host but for foxes relieved boy just nodded. Fox wanted to ask why but then again 'it' had saw how people react to certain things and 'it' did see what was happening outside and fox would lie if it didn't anger 'it', that boys only morale support was going to be harmed without reason.
Fox was silent for moment then spoke. "What are you terms and i tell if i agree and to add something i swear through my 'old man' that i will honor this agreement. so what are your terms?"
Boy looked at fox little questioning look about 'old man' thing "Please answer this question, first, have you seen what i see while inside the seal?" asked blond and fox nodded at that. "Then don't hurt Iruka sensei, Ayame chan, old man Ichiraku and if you can Jiji, Sakura, Sasuke teme, Bakashi AND make sure Haku chan makes it out alive." Blond Jinchuriki said with stern voice.
Fox looked at blond for moment and nodded "I Kyuubi no Kitsune promise to make sure that Iruka Umino, Ayame Ichiraku, Teuchi Ichiraku and Haku Yuki and if possible Hirizen Sarutobi, Sakura Harano, Kakashi Hatake and Sasuke UCHIHA survives my coming attack on Konoha i swear through my 'old man' that i will honor this agreement!" Said fox with powerful voice.
Naruto looked at fox with small weak sad smile and said "and if possible say to Haku that i would have loved to have family with her one day." Then Naruto looked down while tires did flow from his eyes
"I promise" said fox with sad smile too. Then it continued "You know you are first person who has talked to me with out pulling short ones and for that i ll give you something only 8 other living beings know, my name, its Kuruma"
Naruto smiled, true happy smile. "Kuruma. Its good and powerful name. It fits you well"
Naruto then walked to seal and started to rip seal open but then someone grabbed his arm.
"Naruto what the hell are you doing!" yelled blond man and the throw boy to ground.
Naruto watched man, he had blond spiky hair like him, blue eyes like he and leaf headband. "who the hell are you!" yelled our blond hero
"Who am i? Didn't Sandaime sama tell you about me?" asked man shocked
"No, he even didn't tell me about Kyu.. i mean Kurama being inside me one nukenin told me and Jiji just said that i was not old enough to know about him." said blond with not hiding his anger from his voice.
Man looked him sadness and disappointment in his eyes. "What about your parents? he most likely even told you that right?" asked blond with sad but hopeful voice.
"No he just told me that they were shinobi from village but didn't know them personally" said blond with sad voice and eyes down.
Now man front of Naruto was angry if that word is enough subscribe his emotions. "HE WHAT?!" yelled man "Please don't tell me he told about you being jailer of Kyuubi to everyone so that you would be seen as hero!" man said with angry voice.
Naruto looked man like he had two heads and just nodded his head.
Man front of Naruto walked to him and then hugged him lovingly "Naruto, how old are you now?" asked man with sad but loving voice.
"13" said Naruto confused about hug but loved every second of it.
"that old huh. time sure flies when you are sealed into your own son hehe" said blond man with humorous voice.
"What you mean with...your...son?" said Naruto when he started to realize what man had just said, while tears started to form in his eyes. "dad?"
"Yes Naruto i am your father, not only that but i am also yondaime hokage Minato Namikaze." Man said now named Minato
"I am son of yondaime." Naruto said with shocked voice then he pulled out of hug and hit man to the stomach "WHY THE HELL DID YOU SEAL FOX IN TO YOUR OWN SON! DO YOU REALIZE HOW LONELY I HAVE BEEN MY WHOLE LIFE!" Naruto cried his eyes out to his fathers chest and hugged him with like his live depend on it.
Minato looked his son in pain and cried also but he had not much more time. "Naruto i hated the idea sealing furball in to you but i could not ask anyone other to give their child if i could not give my own that would not be good in any morals." Minato said hugging his son even more.
"Yes you are right. I was selfish to think like that." Naruto said with sad voice. then Naruto eyes got angry looking "But i am freeing kyuubi."
Minato looked his son with small sad smile. "I am not going to stop you and i am running low with chakra so i will disappear soon but would you like to talk you mother first?" Minato snapped his fingers and woman with long red heir, pale skin and green apron (i believe that is what she wears) and red eyes.
Woman looked around thinking where she was, then she saw two blonds standing front of kyuubi no kitsune like it was nothing. "Minato kun is that you?" asked woman with hopeful voice.
Minato looked at her and smiled. "yes i am here Kushina hime with our son, Naruto" man was he happy to see his wife one last time.
"M mom? I, is that really you?" asked Blond boy with weak voice.
Kushina after processed all info she run to Naruto and hugged him so tightly that Minato did swear that he heard bones cracking. "Naruto my baby look at you so handsome little boy you must have a lot girls running after you." Kushina joked happy smile on her face.
Naruto looked little sad after comment. "yes with weapons ready to kill me for what i hold."
Kushina looked first shocked but the anger started to rise inside her. "THEY ARE DOING WHAT?!"
Naruto told both his parents what had happened tonight.
Flashback
Naruto and Haku were walking from Ichiraku on afternoon when they started to see people forming a mob behind them. They increased their speed but so did the mob. Soon it was all out run. Villagers were quickly left behind but seems like there was some shinobi with them who still did chase them. After running for about 4 hours they had to stop run for moment because Naruto was running out of steam and because Hakus still minor injury from wave mission. They looked if anyone was still following them, but they did not or sense anyone until it was too late. Kunai lashed out of opposite direction of them an hit Naruto to shoulder.
"Naruto kun!" yelled Haku and took kunai out noticed that kunai was not poisoned 'that's least one good thing' thought Haku as 5 shinobi from konoha and some villagers were starting to form front of them.
"Well what we have here. Demon and his whore slave (I'd like to say that i am fully gender equality supporter) bitch. What you say boys if we release Slut from her misery after some fun?" asked one older shinobi who reeked booze.
"And of course kill the Demon!" shouted man and threw an other kunai at Naruto but this time Haku shifted to shield her friend but Naruto caste her back to ally.
"Naruto kun, why did you throw me out of the way?! I was going to protect you!" Shouted fearfull girl tears forming in her eyes.
"Why you ask? i told you at the a bridge, i always protect those that i care about!" Said Naruto with pained smile.
Haku could not hold it anymore and started to cry while Nartuo fell of his feet and crashed to ground. 'Fox is better to heal me fast or we might die here and last thing i let to happen is her to get raped!'
End Flashback
Minato and Kushina were both hugging Naruto and continued crying then both of them started to glow. "What is happening to you?" Naruto asked. He knew what was going one but hoped that he was wrong.
"Our chakra is almost gone and Kushina shared her charkra with me so that we could leave same time so that we could be full family as long as possible" said Minato new tears pouring out off his eyes.
"My baby boy there is so much that we want to say but time is not at our side except in that accept that only few seconds has passed in real world." said Kushina with hugging naruto more.
Minato and Kushina looked at each other an nodded and both looked at Kyuubi and said at the same time "DESTORY KONOHA!" With that they both vanished but air said one last words to Naruto "We love you no mater what."
Naruto then started to walk to seal once again and when he was about rip off the seal he looked at Fox and said "Thank you kuruma and please find yourself a vixen" joked Naruto and ripped seal off.
Instantly Naruto felt huge pain his stomach he felt like his body was burning same time frozen then he felt nothing only darkness. he felt like he was floating in mid air but same time falling down also he heard lot of noise but same time it was silent like nothing existed.
Then there was light it blinded Naruto. For few seconds Naruto kept his hands on his eyes and slowly let his eyes to get used to light. After Naruto started see again, he saw simply most beautiful woman that he can imagine... ok rivaling Haku, when he thought about it.
"Welcome child, i am Kami, god of this world and only banished god who lives after banishment.
TBC
A/N: Ok first chapter ready and i actually liked to write it!
Now you may think way explain things this order right? Well as you see... I have no good reason i just felt like doing that :)
I do not have much to say right now so please REVIEW story so i can try to improve in those areas and make those stories better for you to read in future. bye and have wonderful day :D
JM OUT!